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Reviews For The Heartbreaker
Reviewer: Techie_freq (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

Please update soon ...:-)

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'm so intrigued by this prolog!! I understand what Jacob did having Edward draw Bella to him so he could then break her heart but Bella's in the hospital!? Who put her there?? Jacob (the dog!) An accident? Kind of par for our dear Bella. ;) Looking forward to Ch 1!!! *hugs* Joanie

Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. You'll have to read to find out how Bella gets into the hospital.

Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 1

I know I told you in my acceptance letter, but I had to tell you again.  I love this and I'm looking forward to where you take these two and how they got to this point.  Great job and looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!! I hope you enjoy the upcoming chapters.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow! I'm drawn in. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:


Reviewer: LVB (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oooooh, I think I'm going to enjoy this. I wonder how long it will take for us to get back to this point.

Author's Response:

Haha, thanks. You'll have to read to find out how long it'll take. lol

Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

Yes, I very much enjoyed that....well, not in a sadistic way, just in a "I really think I'm going to like this story way".  Haha.  Great work!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Gessika (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

I really like it!!! 

Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Reviewer: Cailley Rachelle (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

Loved it! Cannot wait for more. How often will updates be?

Author's Response:

Thank you! At the moment, I don't have a schedule set as to when chapters will be posted. I'll update as often as possible but I want to make sure that the chapters are satisfying first.

Reviewer: we live for love (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

I was drawn to this story from the description and after reading the 1st chapter I am hooked. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: twi20 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

Really like it!!! I´ll be keeping a close eye on this one waiting for more chapters.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

Love the whole idea of Jacob being such a jerk and Edward trying to do a favor for a friend, only to figure out that Bella isn't the problem. Knowing her is going to rock his world!

Author's Response:

That, it will!

Reviewer: emi (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

i really enjoy your story and i cant wait for the next chapter.Your story is diffrent and i like it.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Jharris1313 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

This has the potential to be a really good story.... I have to admit that I am quite curious on how they got to that point  in the prologe and what is going to happen next. 

Author's Response:

Haha, thanks. I hope the story'll live up to your expectations. 

Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

Enjoyed it, can't wait for more, great start!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very good!

Author's Response:


Reviewer: LadyExcalibur (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh my, very interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot! I hope you'll enjoy the first chapter when it goes up.

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

I think it sounds live the basis of a fabulous story! Continue on, please!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!!

Reviewer: Koffie (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 1

This sounds good so far so i want to read more. How often do you think updating a chapter will take? Just curious.

Good job though so far. Can't wait to see where the story leads to.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'll be updating as often as I can. I don't want to make any promises only to break them. This story is somewhat difficult to write and I wanna do well with it. 


I hope you'll enjoy the upcoming chapters.

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

this could be good! cant wait till the next chapter 

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot!!

Reviewer: Anadabyel (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh!  This is so sad!!  Excelllent writing!! I can't wait for chapter one. 

Author's Response:

Thank you. There will be a lot of sad moments in the story but don't worry. The happy ones will balance them out. 

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