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Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 07:00 PM · On: 3: Dances and Proposals

That's just great...but I think it can be really cruel and ironic to know that as a vampire Bella will necessarily die too years before Carlisle turns Edward...you see,thats the time travel paradox: you cant really change the future, because that future is your past and you wouldnt realize any change because they would be what you already remember...so she has to die and burn before Carlisle finds any of the Cullen family she knew when she was in 2010. Is sad to know that Carlisle will recognize her 200 years later and remember the love they had for each other and know exactly what happens to her when she dissapears in 2010...It must have been really hard not to look for her as soon as she stepped on Forks and see her in the arms of Edward, but he's smart not to stop anything from happening...it even explains nicely why he was so easily convinced to uproot the family at Edward request, he understood it was necessary. I guess what Im trying to say is that I really hope that you're not over your head with the logic necessary on this story and that you wont dissapoint with a fairy tale ending =-P because I really love the way it's going.

My mail is dasro1987@hotmail.com in case you want to chat about the story, I would absolutely love to help the construction proccess in this story =-) have a nice week



Author's Response:

Yeah--when I came up with the idea, it took me about half a day to realize that I had a HUGE plot hole in the form of her relationship with Edward being the catalyst for her going back in time. I also have a solution. This story itself will have about 20-25 chapters, and then I have a sequel already plotted with a rough outline... it'll focus on how her going back in time changes the future, and the rest of the coven. I have a plan. It is full of logic, and yes, this has a HEA planned, as well. Also, she's not just dreaming. 


If you have any questions, feel free to ask, and I'll answer them if I can:)

Thanks for reading, and for putting so much thought into this. I've been pretty shocked at how engaged some readers are with this story, and am glad you're enjoying it. 

Reviewer: asil78 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 06:02 PM · On: 3: Dances and Proposals

I love your story and can't wait to see how this event changes the future for the 2010 Cullens.

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 05:40 PM · On: 3: Dances and Proposals

i am so happy for bella and carlisle.

Reviewer: cowgirlamber (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 03:57 PM · On: 3: Dances and Proposals

Yay! They finally said it!

Any chance we will get a Carlisle POV anytime soon or is this story strictly in Bella's POV?

Keep up the amazing work!

Reviewer: x-Silly-Caitlin-x (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2010 03:49 PM · On: 3: Dances and Proposals

This is gonna be a long one because of the many thoughts I had whilst reading this chapter.

1) I can't believe they've been in the country for a year! That would make Bella 19. I admit I always hate FF with old Bella's and a 17 Edward. Enjoy twilight all you want but RPattz isn't an accurate representation of a 17 yr old. Even a 17 yr old and a 19 yr old would be noticeable. However, with Carlisle being 23 it takes the aging worry away from Bella which is nice.

2) Bella and Carlisle getting together was irrelevant. Had Carlisle not proposed and Bella had kept things platonic between the two of them to maintain the future it wouldn't have worked. Fact is Carlisle is in love with Bella whether it comes to a head or not, and that will prevent him falling in love with Esme, or at least prevent it (depending on the direction of this story - I think it's firmly a CXB).

3) I like how willing Carlisle is towards changing Bella, it's a nice change from the usual and kind of sweet. I also love the proposal, very fitting for the time period. After all a year was a lot for the time and let's face it, Carlisle and Bella make a hot couple. It's kinda nice having Carlisle help Bella with survival and her help him with his lonliness - which is all gone now =].

4) If Bella tore off her clothes, is she currently naked with Carlisle? ;)



Author's Response:

It's much easier for a 19-year-old girl to be with a 23-year-old than a 17-year-old: I completely agree with you there. PFach is 36--a full 13 years older than Carlisle is supposed to be. 

You're correct, this story is FIRMLY C/B, and you're on the right track with your assumptions in your second point. All questions will be answered in due time there:)

Carlisle has never been one to seriously hesitate to change someone in canon, provided he has a reason. He only really starts to question it after Rose's obvious unhappiness over his actions. This story is really about Carlisle and Bella finding their place in this world together, and I'm glad you like how they're starting that journey. 

Yes, she's naked during the change with Carlisle. So naughty of her;) 

I'm going to comment on your comments on chapter 1 while I'm here: I'm so happy that the Ware joke is legit. I was amused by my bit of farce in there (I blame the Gilbert and Sullivan plays I've performed in). I actually am from America, so I'm glad that I haven't made that glaringly obvious, and have picked up on some of the inside jokes. I may have felt extremely badass when you mentioned that there was even a Facebook group about it. 

Reviewer: x-Silly-Caitlin-x (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2010 03:13 PM · On: 2: Lessons and Confessions

Am I the only one that thinks Carlisle is falling in love with Bella?

Reviewer: x-Silly-Caitlin-x (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2010 02:40 PM · On: 1. Familiar Faces and Explanations

Good chapter.

On a side note, I got my tattoo done in Ware.

All people from Herts (including you?) love that 'Ware?' joke. It's a group on FB that I joined.

Reviewer: mrs_n (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 01:09 PM · On: 3: Dances and Proposals

OMG Please don't make me wait until next weekend!!! You should quit whatever you do in RL and abandon whatever family you have and just write this forever.... No? Darn... Worth a shot though right? Right?! No?!?! Ugh. Bummer. Well, you can't say I didn't try. But really, you should write a lot more and update constantly lol. I'm obsessed. I think this is my second favorite story ever written on here (thats saying a lot considering I have over 100 favorites)... I'm so excited about whats going to happen now, although a bit bummed she'll have to wait to be around people... Unless of course she has amazing control like she did in Breaking Dawn? Maybe... I guess I'll find out next weekened...

Reviewer: touchst0ne (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 08:13 AM · On: 2: Lessons and Confessions

I can't wait for the next chapter! Omg Carlisle is so freakin hot! This is a great story.

Reviewer: cowgirlamber (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 07:45 AM · On: 2: Lessons and Confessions

I adore this fic!

Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:20 PM · On: 2: Lessons and Confessions

omg! What did Carlise say?!?! Haha. Please post soon!

Reviewer: east_C_anthem04 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 05:30 PM · On: 2: Lessons and Confessions

I love it so far! I like how different it is from most other fan fics I've read =)

Reviewer: louisianagirl900 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 04:30 PM · On: 2: Lessons and Confessions

This is a another good chapter. I can't wait to see where this story goes. We always see Carlisle in the present. It's nice to get a view of him in the past...long before there was any thought of a Edward or Esme.

Can't wait to read more

Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 03:45 PM · On: 2: Lessons and Confessions

I can see that Carlisle is falling in love with Bella.  I can't wait to find out what happens.

Reviewer: badbella (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 10:57 AM · On: 2: Lessons and Confessions

Love the idea, your writing, and, without a doubt, your story. Now only if I could see into the future and discern how this story progress. Sadly, my imagination pales to yours. Please continue.

 

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying this so far--and you sort of made me snort. I'm sure your imagination is just fine;) I already have the rest of the story pretty well mapped out, so there's no danger of me stopping. I'm probably posting chapter 3 later tonight.

Reviewer: GinGirl (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 09:52 AM · On: 2: Lessons and Confessions

I was so excited to see this updated! I'm truly enjoying this story and I can't wait for more! I love watching their relationship develop. I really like that you're taking things slow, letting their friendship (and I think I see the beginnings of some sexual tension, hopefully) develop into maybe something more. I really like how their going to have this strong foundation on which to build something else on. Love, love it! Can't wait for another update. :) 

Reviewer: jessicasheehan (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 09:03 AM · On: 2: Lessons and Confessions

I absolutely LOVE this story. I'm so glad you are posting it. I have always loved the scene in New Moon where he stitches her hand at the party and the movie scene was kind of hot because the sexual tension was definitely there, so I love getting a chance to read stories where there is a Bella/Carlisle coupling.

Reviewer: grayskiesatdawn (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 08:31 AM · On: 2: Lessons and Confessions

I can just see Carlisle doing something similar to "I've Grown Accustom to Her Face" in the near future. Squee! So ashamed the corny musical side of me is out and about. And yes, it is afternoon now and I'm still grinning! It so good I had to review again.



Author's Response:

You put a huge smile on my face. Chapter 3 should be up tonight, if things go according to plan. It's already in the queue. Part of me wishes that Carlisle knew the Higgins part of My Fair Lady, just so I could do that... but I hope you'll like what I did instead.

Reviewer: mrs_n (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 08:30 AM · On: 2: Lessons and Confessions

I got SO excited when I saw that you updated! Loving this!!! I can't wait to see what happens... I know this must change the future! I'm so excited to see how :)

Reviewer: Disneyvampire (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 07:45 AM · On: 2: Lessons and Confessions

Just found this wonderful tale! What an original and creative idea! I love the idea of Bella going back and meeting Carlisle in another era. It is so much fun and interesting when the characters meet one another back in another time! There are so many things that could happen then, that would not happen now and vice versa.

I already really love this story and I looking forward to more. I will be following along on all of Bella's adventures and experiences , as well as Carlisle's, all through this wonderful tale.

Excellent imagination and creative plotline! Excellent writing skills and a wonderful story! :o)

Disney Vampire



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I have this story mapped out, and I really hope you enjoy where their tale leads them as much as I do. This started out as an idea for a one-shot, and I quickly realized there was way too much story for that, so I'm really happy that people have been responding so positively to this fic, and don't think it's too crazy.

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 06:47 AM · On: 2: Lessons and Confessions

loving your story ... the progress of Carlisle from vampire to doctor ... friend to ??? ... mentor to something more ... you are doing an excellent job

Reviewer: GiftfromtheGods (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 05:15 AM · On: 2: Lessons and Confessions

lovely chapter. Really enojoyed reading it

Reviewer: eyes of topaz (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 04:46 AM · On: 2: Lessons and Confessions

Absolutely fabulous chapter and I can not wait for more!  Love this Carlisle and although I can not deny that Bella is most likely changing the future - I can't wait to see where you are going with this!

Reviewer: Neea (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 04:42 AM · On: 2: Lessons and Confessions

Lovley!

Plz update soon. =)

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 03:59 AM · On: 2: Lessons and Confessions

i feel the future is going to change!



Author's Response:

I feel you may be right...

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