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Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2012 04:03 PM · On: The Boy on the Bus (or How I learned not let a coffee disaster ruin an otherwise perfect day)

Bella's inner voice is downright hilarious!

Reviewer: Sexygirl2 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 05:16 AM · On: The Boy on the Bus (or How I learned not let a coffee disaster ruin an otherwise perfect day)

That was awesome!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Can I point you in the drirection of my WIP, Say Hello, Wave Goodbye, which is on Twilighted and FFn.net?

 

AFMxx

Reviewer: RandyCh (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 09:29 AM · On: The Boy on the Bus (or How I learned not let a coffee disaster ruin an otherwise perfect day)

Ok soo..... I'm not sure how i ended up following you on twitter like a year ago...... I DEFINETLY don't regret it....

WOW lady!!!!! you've got some serious moves on you.... awesome OS.. I have to start reading more of your stuff.... and who ever is riding the bus with Mr. Well-read Bus Gods....... should start taking pointers from you......

 

AWESOME!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, SunnySnark is very lucky. When I go on buses they smell of farts and old people. And I am usually the youngest on board!

 

AFMxx

Reviewer: Sandra (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 06:53 PM · On: The Boy on the Bus (or How I learned not let a coffee disaster ruin an otherwise perfect day)

That was probably the best add for public transportation I have ever seen! (well, read..)

I really loved Bella's thoughts. And of course, the groinal dancers ;)

 



Author's Response: I like to think I am doing my own tiny bit for the environment. Thanks for reviewing, I liked the groin-dancers too! AFMxx

Reviewer: carolinablonde (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 08:59 AM · On: The Boy on the Bus (or How I learned not let a coffee disaster ruin an otherwise perfect day)

Whew.  Food, wine and Edward (naked).

What could be better?

Please write more, more, more.



Author's Response:

thanks, it was fun to write!

 

Reviewer: naeo99 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 06:55 AM · On: The Boy on the Bus (or How I learned not let a coffee disaster ruin an otherwise perfect day)

This was an awesome hot story. I was wondering if I get a membership card? Great story.

Author's Response:

yep you automatically get membership for reviewing!

 

AFMxxx

Reviewer: love-tart (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 06:45 AM · On: The Boy on the Bus (or How I learned not let a coffee disaster ruin an otherwise perfect day)

Woohoo, I loved this!!! Tres hot and smexy! More? Please?



Author's Response:

maybe one day but I want to finish Say Hello Wave Goodbye first

 

AFMxx

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