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Reviews For The Bank Job
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 1- The Daily Grind

You wrote AU on your first page. If you made a mistake and this is an All Human story (no vamps, no supernatural) just ell me now.

Reviewer: driveslikecullens (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 1- The Daily Grind

Ummmm, my friend...what are you up to??? I want to read more!

Reviewer: bellamommy (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 1- The Daily Grind

Love it so far!  ~Nancy

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2010 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 1- The Daily Grind

You labelled you story AU, but all the chracters presented so far are human. Are there elements of supernatural that will come later, or it is just a mistake?

If all characters are human the label should be AH

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 1- The Daily Grind

I like the first chapter... look forward to more.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 1- The Daily Grind

I say take out ever having sex with Jake (yuck) and you have a 10.

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 1- The Daily Grind

Very nice chapter! Looking forward to more ... excited to find out what the shiny object is outside the bank window!  Anything "saucy" with Edward is good enough for me (though I love him in a dominating role)!

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