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Reviewer: Willow12345678910 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2013 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 3: Fire

I like it. One of the few stories in the "origional fiction" category that really rang a bell for me. But- a little hint- it's spelled vial, not vile.

~Thanks, Willow

Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 3: Fire

I really liked this. Nicely written and a good start with the characters and storyline. Would happily read more.

Achilles

Reviewer: noamg (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 3: Fire

I think you should defenitlly make it a series. It's very interesting with lots of potential, even if it has nothing to do with Twilight.

Reviewer: screamingstares (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 3: Fire

Write more... It ended WAY TOO SOON

Reviewer: screamingstares (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 2: New Attitude

I am desperately excited to read on

Reviewer: screamingstares (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 1: Escape

Wow! INTENSE!

Reviewer: willistongirl (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 3: Fire

no i loooove it! please continue. i read your closet one and loved it so i checked out your page. you stories are great. i love that you dont try to make them all twilighty by using the character's from the book's names. its refreshing. please continue this one. its great so far.

Reviewer: Krugness (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 3: Fire

I think it sounds like something you could make into a series.

Reviewer: Fnarks (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 3: Fire

Oh My God!! I really liked this! Keep it going!!! and I like the uniqueness about her having and arranged marriage. That was really original, and the more original the better! You are a really talented author.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review and for reading, I'm really glad you liked it so much.

Reviewer: newtwilightguy (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 3: Fire

Amazing short.

Reviewer: Momstheteacher (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2008 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 3: Fire

I really like this. I like the idea of a series. I am curious how this can develop. It is sexy and life affirming. Gotta love that Alex. Great story.

Author's Response: Haha thanks, yeah I was thinking about possibly writing a few short stories about some adventures that Alex and May might have after she has been introduced to the paranormal world, but it might not happen for a while. School tends to ruin any plans that require time...

Reviewer: Halo Jones (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 1: Escape

That was really creative! I liked it a lot! Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! It was really hard to end it in such a rush because it could only be 10,000 words, so I'm not completely happy with the way that part of the story played out. But other than that I liked it (is it egotistical to say that? Yeah probably, but whatever) and I'm glad you liked it too.

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