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Reviewer: fanpire-4-life (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2012 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

love Love LOVE!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it.  :)

Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2011 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wonderful story, I wish there were more chapters to this. I loved it!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you.  At this time, I am not planning any continuation of this story, but maybe one day it'll just hit me.

Reviewer: Bitemeverywhere (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 1

Brilliant one shot.

You're an amazing writer.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  It seems an inadequate thing to say in respons to such a remarkable compliment, but I mean it sincerely.  :)

Reviewer: Zakaira (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2011 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was really hot! And virgin Edward was so adorable and funny.
But I don't think you mention anyway when this takes place, besides some ague time before the wedding. You also mention that Alice gave Bella the panties for xmas, but since Bella and Alice don't ever spend a xmas together in the books, I'm a little confused...

Author's Response:

This one was just totally AU.  I didn't follow any specified timeline from the books.  :)

 

Reviewer: Cyper22 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very Nice!



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2011 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 1

interesting



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Floridasunshine (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

loved it. i am not a jpcob fan, hate his guts actually.  very well written, love the girl time



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed!!

Reviewer: millefiori (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

A delightful o/s. So fantastic! Thanks for a great read!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed.  :)

Reviewer: sogian (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2010 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

GOD. I love possesive Edward... you should cotinue, you know a chapter or two.. Great gob!!!

Author's Response:

Well thank you!  I never really considered continuing this piece, but I am working on several other things.  Perhaps if I ever manage to finish them up I'll revisit this one.  Although I wasn't joking in my author notes... it really does take me FOR.  EV.  ER.  to write things, so it definitely won't happen in the foreseeable future.

Reviewer: Angel_on_Wheels (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love this!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!  Thanks for reading.  :)

Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great O/S!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you enjoyed.  :)

Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!  The whole love triangel that SM had going on absoulutely infuriated me.  I love any story that Bella so odviously chooses Edward and does not lay around and cry over poor Jacob.  Great story.



Author's Response:

I know, right?  I never understood how it became so tangled up either.  It was pretty clear reading through that Jake was just emotional Tylenol and I was actually shocked when she didn't just drop him at the curb when she came back from Italy with Edward.

If I had the man I had spent almost a year wanting back, I would have been like, "Jake?  Who?"

Reviewer: Life Is Everything (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is an extremely LONG one-shot.  And it's really great!  Thanks for sharing it :)



Author's Response:

I know it's longer for a one shot, but I couldn't really cut it down without compromising the story.  I'm glad you enjoyed it though!!

Reviewer: nutmeg206 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

Not sure if this worked last time so I'm trying again...

Well done!  And I'm even a sometime Team Jacob fan :)



Author's Response:

Well, if I hooked a Team Furballer, then I know I did a good job.  :)  LOL!  I'm teasing. I have nothing against Jake... as long as he isn't with or trying to pursue Bella.  :)

Reviewer: twilighter023 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was so good and amazing!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  :)

Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

I loved it!! Great story.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you enjoyed.  :)

Reviewer: zoe3 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow! Loved this! Perfect combination of sweet and naughty! Thanks for writing.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very cool story - loved it! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: andib (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

I loved it!!!!!!!!!!  Great story!!!!!!!!  Go Bella!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.  :)

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

fantabulous:)



Author's Response:

Twice?  LOL!  Glad you liked it so much, I really appreciate it.  :)

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

fantabulous:)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I apprecaite you all taking time to review.

Reviewer: jerseyhalliwell (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

this was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: phoenixrose78 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love it! Awesome idea! I was never really too much of a fan of jacob ( thought he was too manipulative) and loved reading this cause it made me laugh.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I have to admit that I laughed as I was writing parts of it.  My husband was ready to have me committed because I would be sitting here typing away with my headphones on, bobbing my head (in his words) "like a fricking quail",  singing along with Dolphin's Cry and giggling my ass off intermitently.  In hindsight, I'm sure I looked ridiculous, but it was for a good cause.

Reviewer: Shemhazai (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow. I love one shot smut so super much.  You totally made my night. I want to read some of the other fics you wrote now.  Great job and keep up the steamy, sexy, smutty work!



Author's Response:

None of my others submitted works have smut.  I'm working on some longer stuff and a few more one shots that have some steamy goodness though.  ;D 

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was a really great one shot. I love that both Edward and Bella separately planned to show Jake that he needed to back off and realize Bella chose Edward. It was great that Charlie even backed off his assault on Edward and accepted his daughter's choice.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I didn't originally intend for Edward to be thinking along the same lines, he just kinda went there even though it annoyed Carlisle.  Emmett and Jasper didn't really help, they're such enablers.  ;) 

I have issues with Canon Charlie, I truly do.  I write him to be supportive of HIS child, not his best friend's child... which is how nature intended it.  He doesn't have to LIKE Edward per se, he just has to accept what makes his daughter happy.

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