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Reviewer: girlygirl0706 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 14

SEATTLE HERE WE COME!!!! Can't wait for some Edward and Bella lovin' jejejejeje :)

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

lol - you are so impatient!!!! We haven't sorted out the dreaded T word yet!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 14

i hate to see her so negative about her love life. never say never....:)

Author's Response:

Bella has real self-esteem issue. It's going to take her a while.

Reviewer: christykq (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 14

I love the Cullens. Esme and Carlisle always know the right thing to say. They are cute as grandparents too.

Great chapter. update quickly



Author's Response:

They would be awesome to have in real life!

Reviewer: sundevil (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 14

Another great chapter! Can't wait for the Seattle trip!



Author's Response:

Thank-you. Seattle up next!

Reviewer: secretobsession7 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 13

Another great chapter!  I, too, am haunted my Edward Cullen in my dreams!

Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 14

I loved the way you wrote the romance of Carlisle and Esme. They are beautiful.

And Bella, she is so selfless. Her feelings don't matter? She gave up her life's dreams so that Edward could have his. Of course with such a wonderful daughter, how could she feel cheated out of a future?

Can't wait to read more.

Rox



Author's Response:

Thanks. I wanted to show that the Cullens are all involved and interested, because I shall be concentrating on Bella and Edward now. Next update is uploaded, so you should get it tomorrow.

Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 14

Oh come on, Esme, no meddling. These kids need to figure things out for themselves. They're adults, they can do it, if it was meant to be!

Thanks for the update. Sorry if the banner's wet again.

Spikey



Author's Response:

Its gone curly and green in the corner Spikey!!!!

Don't worry - Esme will stay out of it. Can't hold my hand up for everyone though!!!!

Reviewer: BELLAxMOMENT (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 14

This was a good chapter, I saw you write maybe we're going to Seattle next? Hope so =) Can't wait for an update!



Author's Response:

Yep - Seattle next. It is already uploaded, so you will get it tomorrow!

Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 14

I love Carlisle and Esme.  They are always so sweet and warm,  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

They are great, aren't they. They always make you feel so accepted. I shall be concentrating on Bella and Edward for a while now, hence the little interlude. I wanted to show that they are all involved and interested before i launched off again. Next: Seattle sleepover!

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 14

another fab chapter, heartwarming and deliciously cosy like a good meal in good company. can't wait for the next chapter. thank you for filling my evening with an excellent escape into the Cullen world.  I would definitely have had no hesitation in buying this had it been published, and curling up in bed to enjoy it.



Author's Response:

Thank-you so much! I shall go to bed with a huge grin on my face tonight!!! The next chapter has already been uploaded, so should be up tomorrow. I truly appreciate your comments.

Reviewer: aliamch (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 14

I loved the linking of Carlisle and Emmetts waggly eyebrows! more please!



Author's Response:

Hehe! He has to get it from somewhere!!

Next chapter has already been uploaded, so it should be up tomorrow. Off to Mum's, so will update again when I get back!

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 13

oh yes, the aching heart, the yearning, the confusion. been there and still doing that.



Author's Response:

I've been ther too many times. Thankfully I am, happy and settled with Hubby No2. No more heartache for me!!!

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 12

oh wow that was so beautiful.

loved the interplay with Jake as well - so natural and funny.  just great.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I was never a Jacob fan in Twilight. Here, he is and will only ever be, the friend that he should have been all along.

Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 14

Yup, good stuff there...



Author's Response:

:) I wanted to show that all the family are involved and interested, because I shall be concentrating on the Bella/Edward stuff from now on!

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 11

I loved the comment about Charlie not being sure whether to shake Edward's hand or dash off for his gun lol.  And Carlie's response to Edward being her daddy was superb.  Pragmatic. Hey what's the big deal? Just brilliant.

Thank you for giving a well paced story with a nice balance of humour, pathos and intrigue.



Author's Response:

When I told my son that his dad wasn't going to be living with us anymore, his reaction was pretty similar. The questions and tears came later, but at the time he was very matter-of-fact.

You keep reviewing girl! You make me feel very good about this story!!!!

Reviewer: CrisiP2288 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 14

Great moment with Esme and Carlise, such sweet grandparents!



Author's Response:

I wanted to show people that the whole family are involved and interested, because I shall be concentrating on a certain couple for a good while now!

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 10

of course Esme knew - she's intuitive and intelligent, and of course Edward's mother.  am so glad she is persuading Bella to do the right thing.  Esme is also very forgiving of having missed the first 4 years of her granddaughter's life.



Author's Response:

Alice has to get it from someone!!! I love Esme too. She is so fiercely protective and understanding about her family. I'm sure she will make up for lost time too!

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 9

another excellent chapter.

Reviewer: foxster70 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 14

Great chapter.

I almost feel sorry for Bella, everyone knows how she feels about Edward.

I really have a feeling that Edward feels more than friendship towards, Bella.



Author's Response:

The next chapter is the trip to Seattle, so you may get a few answers. No spoilers here though! :P

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 8

ah at last.....sigh of relief.....excellent



Author's Response:

lol - Edward is in the house!!!!

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 7

OMG what a shock! and what a cliffie.



Author's Response:

Sorry - I do love a good cliffie! but you at least have the advantage of reading on without waiting!!! Lucky you!

Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 14

Sweet chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank-you. I wanted to show that the whole family are still taking an interest, even though we won't get to see much of it for a while.

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 6

lol loved your chapter comments at the end :D wicked woman :D

loved the chapter. another great piece of writing. felt from the heart.



Author's Response:

I know - I am awful really! I got such a lot of flack from that!!! Two heart attacks and a stroke!

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 5

another great chapter. I like the measured pace of your story and the fact you're not rushing it.



Author's Response:

Thank-you. I like to keep things moving - I don't like being bogged down in loads of superfluous detail just to pad out the chapter, but I also like time for the characters to settle. It's nice to get to know who they are, before being swept up in drama!

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 4

just fabulous. such insight into the mind of someone caught in a situation that is pretty daunting. thank you for telling it such a marvellous way. I love your writing style.



Author's Response:

Thank-you. I very much appreciate your comments. I'm glad you are enjoying it.

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