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Reviews For Teach You a Lesson

Reviewer: T Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 10:19 AM · On: Part 1: Denial

Wow, This is really good! I hope you write another chapter for it! What could Edward say?

Reviewer: emmettsgirl08 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2011 06:34 AM · On: Part 1: Denial

oh god! why dont you keep going?! this is awesome!

Reviewer: Achela12 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2011 02:22 PM · On: Part 1: Denial

Absolutely lovely... thanks :)

Reviewer: YoungCougar (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 01:06 AM · On: Part 1: Denial

Oh my God, where is part2 ?!

I am suprised I like this pairing so much now that I've read it. This O/S shows that Edward has a heart...or maybe not???

Please, please...write part 2!!!!

Reviewer: ladymalfoy (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 07:36 AM · On: Part 1: Denial

Beautiful is all I can say that describes this story.

Reviewer: hpfan1987 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 10:54 PM · On: Part 1: Denial

love it!! rose is really vulnerable, I like it!

Reviewer: ahatten (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 02:02 PM · On: Part 1: Denial

woow.....hanging on the edge!! i wish this one shot had just ONE more sentence....

Reviewer: ctfan (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Part 1: Denial

Very nicely written. Actually hope he doesn't crush her in two.

Reviewer: darthme1011 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 03:00 AM · On: Part 1: Denial

finnish this please

Reviewer: adraves (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 09:22 AM · On: Part 1: Denial

I have to say, I never thought about a Edward/Rose story, but this made me want to read more.

Reviewer: MissMeka2010 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Part 1: Denial

I never really thought of Rosalie and Edward together. I may have pondered it a bit but I'm so used to the idea of Rosalie and Emmett that I never let that idea become anything. This was so well written that it made me think more about it. The way I see it: Rosalie would have to become less vain for her and Edward to pursue anything together. Edward seems like a tortured soul and Rosalie could balance him out.

Reviewer: justemmettplease (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 03:53 PM · On: Part 1: Denial

I, too, can't help but like some plot with my porn, so thank you. Its not such a far cry to see how these two, being so desparate for love and acceptance, could find it in each other. They are well matched in the angst department, that's for sure. I think they could be pleasantly content with each other. If she never meets EmMett and he never meets Bella. Believing in soil mates doesn't mean you can't be happy with another, just not completely happy. Like Bella could have been happy with Jacob IF Edward didn't exist. I'm awful chatty at 200 in the morning and could debate soul mates and alternate pairings for quite a while, just ask my friends. Hence my usual avoidance of non-canon. But your writing is delightfully engaging, and your lemons are especially tart! Thanks for this new look at how things might have been, and I'm looking forward to more plot riddled porn. Guess I'm just a pervert too, lol!

Reviewer: ashleyKatee (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 03:21 PM · On: Part 1: Denial

cant wait for part 2! edward/rose is my secret obssesion. :)

Reviewer: EternalMe (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 02:24 PM · On: Part 1: Denial

Wow! You my dear have a talent with words! The way you described everthing was absolutely beautiful! Not to mention the tree scene was pure hotness! I love how you showed a vulnerable side of Rose, it deepened the character and made their relationship seem more intense!

I'm sad more poeple haven't reviewed, they don't know what they're missing! I can't wait for the next chapter and will love to see how their relationships progresses as time goes on!

Keep up the awsome work!

Reviewer: KariAnn (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 01:29 AM · On: Part 1: Denial

This is some hot shit, girly. I do find it a bit unbelieveable that E & Rose never even explored the idea, so this is a smokin' hot, naughty, forbidden sort of lemon. (And Edward the 100-yr-old virgin? The idea is boring.) But since I'm not into stories where the characters are unfaithful, I like that this is before Bella & Emmett. :) Awesome job!

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