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Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

Love  alice and edward,,,so sweet!

Reviewer: mimigirl (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was nothing short of AMAZING!!! I really liked the emotion and how well written it was, one would believe this story to actually be true. Kepp up the good work.

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was such a good one-shot. I absolutely love that song by Nickelback, so I definitely had to read this one. I think you did well to show the brother/sister relationship, and I just adored the memories Edward had of the book they made with the pictures. God, I hate James! But good job Edward got there and stopped it before anything happened.

Jasper is amazing, so he'd never do anything to Alice. Makes me think of my own brother, nothing bad has happened like this, but still reminds me of him :)

Reviewer: IluvRobandEdward (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

awwww. i like this thank you for writing it

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