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Reviewer: morphinekisses25 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2012 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 13

Hey, I don't review often..I've reviewed fanfiction only once before but this chapter was so well written, and spoke to my situation so well, that I have to comment. I have Borderline Personality Disorder and one of the defining charateristics of this disorder is chronic suicidal thoughts. I see so much of myself in Bella's struggle with drugs- Ive never been a drug addict but I am litterally addicted to suicidal thoughts... I relate so well to her cravings, and the situation with the Cullens between her rehab cycles, where everything is the same but you as a person are different. I actually cut out a small peice of this chapter and posted it on my tumbler page and talked about how it was similar to my mental illness (I hope thats okay, it was only two sentances and I'll give credit if anyone asks). I just want to thank you for your writing, being knowledgable about your subject matter and presenting it in such an elloquent way. It really has helped me.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Writing this story helped me so much and so glad that reading it did the same for you. I've never dealt this obstacles first hand, but I have supported several family memebers through these situations. I don't mnd that you posted an excerpt on your tumbr, and I'd like to check it out. I also just wanted to inform you that I will be pulling the story from the site soon. I've decided to expand on it a bit and try to have it published, and your review has given me the extra encouragement and drive to do it. 

Reviewer: Kelsey Ray (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 23

Awwww, I loved this story form beginning to the end. It makes my heart want to jump out from my chest. Whis it could go on forever......

Reviewer: Yrollam (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2011 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 1

Can we atleast get an outtake of the birth scene?!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2011 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

Just wanted to pop in for a minute and apologize. I was just reading another author's note and she commented about hurtful reviews she'd gotten. A few weeks back, I reviewed that Bella was a cheatin ho, and you wrote back sorta "well sorry bout that..."  The fact that I think she is isn't a bad thing - I mean, she is cheating on my beloved Jasper! - and doesn't mean I won't be reading!  And I certainly didn't mean for my comment to come across all Moral Majority - it was really more along the ghetto-licious lines of "what a cheatin' HO she is! haha!"  Her dilemma over which boy to choose is what caught my eye about the fix in the first place!  So....sorry if I stepped on any author toes. :(  If you think "who cares about what you think, biatch?!?" then no harm, no foul. :)  

Anyhoo....I'll be catching up on my reading now, booing and hissing on jasper's behalf, and loving the lemons you throw, I assure you. :) 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much but there's really no need to apologize. I wasn't offended by the comment or anything. I once had a reviewer tell me that a story of mine was dumb and that I should just delete it. That was hurtful. What you said wasn't. When I write stories I usually make one character seriously flawed. I know that some readers/reviewers will be irritated or end up hating the person but I think it makes stories more interesting than everyone being all perfect under their angst. With that in mind, I'm fully prepared to take some flak. Thank you again and I hope that you continue to enjoy the story!

Reviewer: Yrollam (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2011 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow don't mean to disrespect but this ending was more dissapointing than the reunion in new moon the movie! I really was looking forward to how life was in between e and b reunion.

Author's Response:

I'm sorry that you were disappointed. I figured some people would be but the story wasn't so much about Edward and Bella or even Jasper and Bella. It was about Bella growing as person and finally getting her life together.

Reviewer: CleanEco (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2011 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 23

Wow...just wow. Had to read it all through in one sitting. Story was real and relatable. Thank you.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: calicohearts (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

great story!

Reviewer: blackswaninlust (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 23

Amazing story, Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: NewAtThis (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 23

Extraordinary!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: inbetweendayz (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 23

great ending to great story this has to be tghe most underrated story on here you should have more reviews,, thanks for sharing im sad to see it end



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! The thing about getting readers is that you have to have a lot of reviews, but to have a lot of reviews you have to have a lot of readers. It's really hard to get your story noticed but I'm just grateful for the reviews I do get. 

Reviewer: Yrollam (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 23

That's it?! Is they're gonna b an epilogue no birth scenes?! No update nada?! I'm gonna miss this story :(

Author's Response:

Yep! That's it. I've been thinking about doing some outtakes but I'm not sure. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 23

Yes, thank you for the journey. The years have certainly put everything into perspective for them all. Glad they could lick their wounds, come clean and find a new version of their family.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Yrollam (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 22

Lol that's the most creative ending of a chapter I've ever read! OMFG!!! lol

Author's Response:

Lol thanks so much!

Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 22

OMG!  I loved this chap..probably loved this one the most!  Just perfect!  Can not wait till the next..plz do hurry..I hate delayed updates..more then getting the nasty every month!  eek xo 



Author's Response:

Lol thanks so much. I'm glad you really enjoyed it. The next chapter will be up next weekend.

Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 22

Heh, heh. Looks like Jacob finally got what he wanted. Good ending.

Author's Response:

Lol yeah I figured after being such a good friend to Bella he deserved a little something. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 22

Ok that was a long interlude, for them i mean.  And the jake bit, priceless.  Keep up the fun.   



Author's Response:

Yeah, I wanted to give Bella time to heal and establish herself as a person on her own before she got back in any time of relationship. The next chapter is already written and should be up soon!

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 22

BWAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHA! That's what that "unsavory" deal was! Hilarious!

I do hope there can be some kind of resolution between Bella and the rest of the gang. If it's not right for this story, that's cool. I'd just like to see what you think it'd look like.



Author's Response:

LOL. Glad you enjoyed that little bit. I don't want to give too much away but we'll catch up with the Cullens in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: inbetweendayz (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 22

i just love this story so excited to see them trrying to work things out im eagerly awaiting the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Next chapter will be up soon!

Reviewer: bella_edward05 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 22

Hahaha! Wow I didn't see that coming!I think that should be an outtake ;) just so we know exactly Jacob reacted..... On another point..I'm happy she didn't relapse....

Author's Response:

lol Thanks. I actually will be doing a few outtakes for this story and that will definitely be included. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2011 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

cheatin' HO!  how could she??? WAAAAAAAA!

 

I LOVE your banner. Jasper is soooooo delicious!  (when he's clean, that is...that grunge crap skeeves me out. dumb boy, trying to hide the pretty....)



Author's Response:

LMAO! It gets better...or worse depending on how you look at it. Thanks! I didn't make the banner but I chose the pics. I love that pic of Jackson but I gotta admit I'd take him clean or grungy as long as he ends up naked! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2011 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 21

Oh. My. Goodness.  Hello, Jasper, meet Reality Check.

You *must* come back soom with more.



Author's Response:

Lol thanks for reviewing! The next chapter should be up very soon!

Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 21

Well I saw some of that coming, but I have to say you've got me on the edge of my seat.  Can't say as I like this main character, she has few redeaming qualities, but the story is catching and you can pity Jasper deeply for his stupidity.  This is the kind of story where in real life you wish she would keep running, but for the sake of those behind, wish she would shake up.  Torn.  You've got me all wrapped up.  Keep it coming.



Author's Response:

Many people don't like Bella in this story. I knew when before I began this story that people wouldn't but I think this is a real portayal of some one with her history. I'm glad the story overall could keep people interested though. Thanks so much for reviewing. The next chapter will be up soon and told from Edward's POV. 

Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 21

Very emotionally charged chapter. I'm wondering if Bella is on the reservation back in Forks.

Author's Response:

We'll find out what happened to Bella in the next chapter which is told from Edward's POV. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: tmc1979 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 21

Wow intense! I LOVED IT!  Loved Jasper's point of view!  I can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Next chapter up soon!

Reviewer: inbetweendayz (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 21

wow i hope bella comes back or at least edward can find her. i dont think she did the right thing by leaving she should have stayed and faced things but at least its out in the open and maybe jasper will finally come to realize he doesnt love her and should let her go and let her be happy  



Author's Response:

We'll see what happens to Bella in the next chapter which will be told from Edward's POV. Thank you so much for reviewing!

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