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Reviews For Made to Live Alone
Reviewer: vampyspecial (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 6, Thursday July 8th

oh my god poor bella i feel so bad her when will she get a break



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Remember that Bella has now hit rock bottom, that she can only go up from here, but it'll take time. Stick with it, she won't be broken forever.

Reviewer: Daisy Mae (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 6, Thursday July 8th

Whew! Hard chapter to read and can only imagine what a hard chapter it was to write. Grief is a hard thing to go through. Bella is grieving. It cuts to the quick. I hope that Jasper REALLY helps her this time.

Good job, JT. <3

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. We'll find out soon how much help Bella gets from Alice and Jasper.

Reviewer: Ilse (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 6, Thursday July 8th

good chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot. I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: creampuff (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 6, Thursday July 8th

I am trying really hard not to give up on your story, i like your writing style and the storyline so far, but I personally think the story would benifit a lot if you start to move it along. You are seven chpaters in and in reality nothing has happened. I am going to stick with it in hopes that somthing will happen soon, either Bella gets the professional help she obviosuly needs, A/J wedding or something. Throw us a bone here please.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Things will happen for Bella. I know that it's hard reading 7 chapters of someone's life who doesn't have a life. Just stick with it. Things will change...very soon.

Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 6, Thursday July 8th

she asked for help.  definitely a step in the correct direction!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Things can only go up from here. But progress happens slowly.

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 6, Thursday July 8th

Bella needs clinical help.  She really needs to be seeing somebody professionally.  THis is not normal behavior.  She needs mood elevators or something.  Things are not that bad.  Yes, she is alone.  THere are far worse things...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, and Bella will eventually learn that lesson, that things aren't as bad as she thinks they are. She's just having a hard time seeing that though. But this is a journey, she'll hopefully get there.

Reviewer: WickedMind1901 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 6, Thursday July 8th

Damn, this story makes me cry.  It's so heartbreakingly good.  Perfect job.  Please make Edward come soon? Bella needs him.

Much love,

Bubbles <3



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. Sorry it makes you cry, but I'm so glad that you're liking it. Edward will come soon, just stick with it.

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 6, Thursday July 8th

wow very very good chapter keep up the graet work and post soon

bye bye



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 6, Thursday July 8th

I don't know how I feel about this Bella....sometimes I hate her and at times she breaks my heart. It is sad and scary that she was so numb that she had no clue what was going on hour to hour in her day. I am glad that she has finally asked for help and I hope that she does have a support team that will help her.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. And I know this Bella can be frustrating, but things get better for her. She just has to stop being so down on herself. At least she took a step and asked for help.

Reviewer: Bella Frenzy (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 6, Thursday July 8th

U make me cry so much....

Author's Response:

Sorry for making you cry. I hope that you'll stick with the story though. It does get better. I promise.

Reviewer: MayaCullen20 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 6, Thursday July 8th

Hey, Jenn!

It's really nice to hear from you again xD

I got so addicted to this story that lately I've been checking your blog at least 3 times a day to see if you posted anything (no, I'm not joking. Sometimes even more than three times)

I can already feel, just by reading the last two chapters, that something good is about to happen. We all seem to agree it has to become worse so it could get better.

So…

The beginning of this chapter left me kind of depressed and totally confused.

I don't understand how it is possible for somebody to be so hurt, desperate and numb to just tune out for an entire day, I feel really sorry for her.

I have the same issues as she does, but I guess I can just cope better with them than she can. Her masochistic nature just… broke her. (Watching P.S. I love you could kill even the happiest person in the universe. I, for instance, cannot start watching it without a one year supply of kleenex on my coffee table)

Fortunately, there are Alice and Jasper who, even though she just can't see it, really are her friends.

Jasper is just that kind of person somebody can lean on. Anytime.

And Alice… she's just Alice. She might hide her brain/compassion behind the whole I'm-a-shallow-shopaholic-on-too-much-caffeine attitude, but she is a good friend (who, as we found out, likes slapping people XD)

Anyway, to shorten things, I loved this chapter. 

Can't wait for the wedding, though.

Sorry about this relatively short and not awesome review, I really like chatting with you, but it's already 10p.m. over here and my dog reaaaaally wants to spend some quality time with me *rolls her eyes*

 

Lots of kisses,

Maya    



Author's Response:

Thanks Maya, I'm glad that you're sticking with the story and lovin the blog. As for how Bella could just 'check out' and not know what she did for the day, have you ever driven somewhere and not remember actually driving there? She was just on auto-pilot. Not really focusing on reality, because reality would only cause her pain. I hope that makes sense.

Thanks again for another awesome review

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 6, Thursday July 8th

Honestly... why doesn't Jasper get Bella to a fucking shrink? Someone to get her on some damn antidepressants? They're just sitting around, wringing their hands (when they can be bothered to think about her in between their billing and cooing).



Author's Response:

thanks for the review. And I know what you mean about getting Bella some 'real' help, but if she's not even willing to open up to Alice and Jasper, I doubt she'd be willing to open up to someone she doesn't know or trust.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 6, Thursday July 8th

great chapter - scary



Author's Response:

I know it's scary when people 'check out of reality', but things will get better soon. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Oasis_Shy (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 6, Thursday July 8th

This is one of my favorite stories. I am crying over this. I am not one to cry easily. Poor Bella.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I still find it surprizing that people like the story, let alone have it as one of their favorites. It means a lot. Thanks.

Reviewer: my new alias (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 6, Thursday July 8th

Oh my gosh, Bella! This is so sad & I feel so bad for her! I can't wait until she actually feels like a normal human being again...cripes. Well good job & update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. It'll be a journey, but she'll get to 'normal'.

Reviewer: heatherific924 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 6, Thursday July 8th

sooooo how long til we hear from edward...i love this story but its sooo sad is bella ever going to be happy?



Author's Response:

Yes, Bella will be happy, but what she's feeling doens't get fixed right away. But don't worry, we'll get some Edward soon.

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 6, Thursday July 8th

The first step was to admit she needed help. Glad she did, another good one. ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. It was a long journey, but she took the first step. Hopefully it makes a difference.

Reviewer: mjwpg (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Wed, July 7th

Awesome story I just discovered it last night.  I sure feel for Bella it's hard to pick your self up when you are constantly overlooked, everyone wants to be loved and made to feel special but when our own loved ones over look you it would be very devasting.  I even have experienced this is some form being a "plain jane" myself but did meet someone so I can't wait for Edward to enter the story and how he deals with her insecurities. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review. I'm so glad that you're liking it so far and that you can relate to it on some level.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Wed, July 7th

This is one of my favorite stories. Great story.



Author's Response:

wow...thanks so much. I'm so glad that it's one of your favorites.

Reviewer: SillySarahAnnn (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Wed, July 7th

Ok.  This is the sixth chapter of heartache and depression.  I understand that you want to get through how lonely and heartbroken Bella is, but I think this is enough.  We (as readers) understand.  I personally believe that four chapters of misery would have been enough for us to understand.  In my opinion, six is overkill and any more than this would just start to kill the story for me.  Please put an end to this misery, I'm finding it really hard to read a story that seems to be about nothing but emptiness.  I really like the way you write, I don't want to have to stop reading.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your honesty and I don't want you to stop reading either. You're not alone in feeling that the story is getting touch to read as it's more depression every chapter. As the writer though, I want this story to be as realistic as possible and people don't get better right away. It takes time and it's ugly. Bella does get better, but this story is a journey, and one that I hope you'll stick around to see the end of.

Reviewer: red_81 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Wed, July 7th

You made me cry again, but I forgive you. :)

 

I don't want Bella to give up, especially since I am eagerly awaiting the arrival of Edward. I really have a soft spot for Bella, you write her realistically. Feeling alone, with everyone getting married and moving on with their lives around you, cannot be easy to deal with. 

I can't wait for the next chapter. :D



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I'm really happy that you find my writing realistic. That means a lot.

Reviewer: therunaway (Anonymous) · Date: August 05, 2010 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Wed, July 7th

Very good chapter, as always. Again, you describe Bella's emotions and feelings very well. Kind of like, you say the things I couldn't find the words for, kind of way :)

Great job.

 

Kayla Cullen



Author's Response:

Wow...thanks so much. I'm so happy that you're liking my writing that much. It means a lot.

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Wed, July 7th

She is SO sad.  I hope she is at her lowest point.  Something has to change for her.  She can't go on like this.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. And it is the lowest point for her. Things will start to change very soon.

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Tuesday, July 6th

Alice is a pistol.  Her messages cracked me up!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I'm really glad that you're liking Alice. Some people are not liking her that much, but I'm really happy that she still cracks you up

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Monday, July 5th

I just feel so badly for her!

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