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Reviews For Home On The Range
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 06:09 AM · On: In life there is death

Poor Bella!

Author's Response:

I know, right? Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: twiggs66 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 04:05 AM · On: In life there is death

Hmmm, I like'd Gran's will, kind of gave us an overview on some of the characters.  Even reminded me a little of Sookies grandmother on True Blood (and from the stackhouse novels).  Sounds like Bella is a tough girl, able to take care of herself, can't wait to see what she would need a man for, with the possible exception of the example in your first paragraph ;).  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

I am so glad that you picked up on the similarities between Sookie's grandmother and Gran. That's what I was kind of going with but with my own twist to her. Bella is a tough girl, you've got that right, and she seems to be able to face her insecurities head on with a little encoragement. Bella is faced with alot during this story and she will take it all like a pro, pro by my definition of corse ;). I'm so happy you are enjoying HotR, thanks for reading.

Reviewer: twiggs66 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 03:52 AM · On: Prologue

Please tell me that was Edward and not James or Mike...I have to say, that is a great opening teaser!

Author's Response:

Ha Ha Ha Ha! I won't tell who it is but you'll find, I promise.....eventually ;) Glad you liked it, there will be more lemony goodness to come in future chapters. Happy Reading!!

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 03:37 AM · On: In life there is death

I'm really liking it so far:)  Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response:

My beta is working her magic, as we speak, for the next chapter and as soon as I have it back then it's off for validation. Thanks for reading and liking this story. My reviewers rock!

Reviewer: xostupidlambox (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 06:54 PM · On: Prologue

hmmm you've left me interested! definitely a great start!

Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm excited to get this story started. Chapter 1 coming up soon.

Reviewer: Avaanne (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 01:35 PM · On: Prologue

You've got my attention, haha. 

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Thanks for taking time to read. :)

Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 02:15 AM · On: Prologue

I can't decide if Edward's being a jerk, or if he's just completely hot.  Anyway, very good beginning--it drew me right in!

Author's Response:

We've got lots to learn about our dear Edward. hehehe. I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reading and for the validation. :)

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