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Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 04:52 AM · On: Soap cleans all
Mr Green Eyes and Miss Chocolate, mmm. So initially through his dreams and now his casual sex life Edward is beginning to explore and dabble in BDSM. So far he seems to like the submissive side, I think Edward surprised himself there.
FOUR ORGASMS in 1 hour.......YES PLEASE!!! Lol.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 10:14 AM · On: New games at the club
Bella's a natural Domme then, lol. God that was hot and how surprised was Carlisle, lol. Everything fell into place nicely for Carlisle with Bella and seeing someone who he wanted to move on to, I'm glad they've remained friends.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 09:44 AM · On: Chocolate Coloured Fantasy
Wow, so that's what Edward was thinking when he met Bella and he was displaying sub tendencies, unusually for him. It will be interesting to find out how he's brought into the community.
Do Bella and Edward live in the same building? They are both rich after all and I can't imagine that Bella wouldn't pick somewhere nice to live? It would be funny to think that they had been under each others noses for years, lol.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 09:19 AM · On: Bella's daydream and Carlisle's "punishment"
Sadistic Domme, eh? Just how sadistic could she get....I guess we'll find out eventually. I can't wait until she meets up with Edward again. They daydream was amazing, I'm just glad she was sat at a red light and not actually driving in traffic, lol.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 08:31 AM · On: The Meeting
So that was Bella's first meeting with Edward. Was he a sub then 'cos he soon came back and helped her all apologetic and not looking at her, or was he just displaying sub tendancies? Hmmm.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 08:30 AM · On: The Meeting
So that was Bella's first meeting with Edward. Was he a sub then 'cos he soon came back and helped her all apologetic and not looking at her, or was he just displaying sub tendancies? Hmmm.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 07:07 AM · On: Young Bella moving to town
So Bella is independently wealthy, does she work now? It's sad that she only has her Dad and didn't make any other friends at uni, although lots of people would not understand nor approve of her lifestyle, but then it's really none of their business.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 07:04 AM · On: Flashbacks
So James was too tame to keep Bella's interest. It's good that she still has a frienship with Carlisle and he looks out for her, although I suspect he really doesn't need to. The BDSM community seems to be really tight knit.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 03:19 PM · On: At the Club
That was hot, Bella has fully embraced her life and moved on training to become a domme but still remembers all the pleasure of being a sub.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 02:56 PM · On: Initiation
Loved it, loved it, loved it. If that was ten years ago I can't wait to see how far they've both come and how this story unfolds.
Jane x
Reviewer: Hfrankz (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2011 01:41 PM · On: Sushi
Just found this and am caught up! You are amazing! And even though BDSM has been done before, I'm pretty sure you're the only original one to make Bella the Domme. Amazing job! And I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: DarkTrinity (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 08:11 PM · On: Sushi
I had to re-read this last chapter to get my fix of your wonderful story... hopefully RL will give you a break soon. I look forward to the next chaper.
-*DT
Reviewer: Lindsey Pattinson (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 07:22 AM · On: Sushi
OMG I love it. please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!<3
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 11:46 AM · On: Initiation
Are you going to continue this story?
Reviewer: amvel (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 02:55 PM · On: Sushi
I am dying here to see what happens next!!!! I thought you note said 2 weeks for updates? It's been 2 months. I hope this is not abandoned. :(
Reviewer: LST425 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 04:17 PM · On: Sushi
I like the new banner! Wondering when we will get a new chapter from you?
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 08:45 AM · On: Initiation
miss this story..where's the update???
Reviewer: cullenmother05 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 02:26 PM · On: Introductions at the club
wow that was a lot, but i cant turn away either.
Reviewer: cullenmother05 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 02:11 PM · On: On the floor
your lemons are very lemony. i need a cigrette and i dont smoke.
Reviewer: Cethmisdtmyk (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Sushi
Awesome story! I can't wait for more! MORE! MORE!!!!!
It's awesome, i'd almost like a little more Edward, but who knows what's coming next... i really can't wait! :-D :-P 8-)
Reviewer: Panarican (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 11:12 AM · On: Sushi
so freaking good can't wait until you update!!!
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Reviewer: pennycocktail (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 09:31 PM · On: Sushi
Hi,
Wish the chapters were a bit longer... love all the BDSM stuff, and the way they relate to each other... will you be taking the story into the future, have them get married and stuff?
Great fic!!
Reviewer: Panarican (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Young Bella moving to town
it the begining of the story I was alittle worried - it kinda freak me out a bit. but I said to myself I'm going to keep reading - and so far I'm liking it.
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Reviewer: hisgreeneyes1 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 12:49 AM · On: Initiation
Wow.......... That's about all I can say!
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