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Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 6

there you go, Alice, nothing to worry about hehe :)

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, she worries for nothing, right?  :)  I have noooooo idea what that's like, lol. 

Thanks for reviewing!  Your Chapter 7 teaser is on its way in a PM. 

Reviewer: starryangel1225 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 6

Awww.  I really enjoy this story.  I love this Alice and Bella together.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying this!  And as a special thank-you for reviewing (you SO rock!) I'm sending the teaser for Chapter 7 in a separate message.  Hope you enjoy -- would love to hear what you think!  :)

 

 

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hey I thought I'd try something different so I checked out your fic. I really like it so far. Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking a chance on different!  It's a ball to write this, and I love hearing what others thing about it.  Hope you'll stick around for the ride!  :)

Appreciate the review!  :)

Reviewer: Meliha (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 5

Just had to say that I found  your story today and am already loving it. I don't normally read slash stories but I love your writing style and am hooked already. All I could think after the first few chapters was 'holy hell that's HOT'!



Author's Response:

Wow, I'm really touched that you like it, especially if slash/femslash isn't your thing :)  And thank you so much for taking a moment to leave a review...it means a lot :)

There's more on the way!

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

This was definitely hot. ;)



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you liked it :)  Hope you'll stick around for the next few chapters!

Thanks so much for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Team Edward Girl (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 5

I love this story!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I love that you love this story :)  There's more on its way! 

Thanks for reviewing! 

Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 3

OMG is Emm a drag queen?  YESSSSSS.  I am so amused, even to have him be all queeny in speech alone.  Also, may I hang out at this bar?  It just sounds like my kind of hangout.

Have you read Tre by Megsly/angelicwish?  It's a story of Felix and Demetri sharing a girl they turn and ahem HOT.



Author's Response:

I so wanna hang out there, too, lol!  Glad you like Emmie :)

I have not read Tre, but I'm definitely going to check it out. 

Thanks, casket!  :)

Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 2

Happy sigh.... Reminds me of one of my ex-girlfriends and our days of endless exchanges....  Never mind the boyfriend now and waking the neighbours repeatedly.  They are both cute and sensual together, which is perfect. :)



Author's Response:

I really enjoyed writing this chapter...a little domestic bliss mixed with the lovin'  :)

Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love this opening, oh so much.  I have a very soft spot for Alice/Bella slash, mainly because I think of all the Cullens, Alice does love her as much as Edward.  She also strikes me as someone who simply loves, making it easy to see her as bisexual between the lines. 

I also love the references to Alice being able to go forever with vampire speed and stamina, because I really think Edward missed out on worshipping Bella in human form, and enjoying all the heat ;)



Author's Response:

Totally hear you about Edward missing out....lol 

 

Reviewer: shayislegend (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 1

oh i love this story, i am eagerly awaiting your next update. these two ladies are such a poerful couple. meow. :)



Author's Response:

Why thank ya!   They really do love the lovin', don't they?  ;)

The next chapter is with my beta, and will be posted soon.  I call it the "mini lemon" chapter  :)

Thank you BIG for reviewing!

 

 

Reviewer: starryangel1225 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 4

Wow.  That was steamy and yet so romantic.  I love these 2 together.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I love these two together, too...obviously, lol  :)

Reviewer: Ajharrypotterfan07 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 4

wow, pretty incredible story. You certainly have talent.



Author's Response:

*Blushing*  Thank you!  I'm glad you are enjoying it :) 

And thank you for reviewing - reviews are like gold.   More will be posted soon, the next chap is in the works. 

Reviewer: Team Edward Girl (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 4

cant wait for more

 



Author's Response:

Oh, it's coming (pun intended? I think so).  Glad you're enjoying this! The next chapter is in the works.

Thank you for taking the time to review! 

Reviewer: MZmanda (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

Gay Emmett was HILARIOUS!!!! 



Author's Response:

You're so sweet, lol.  Glad you liked him.  :)  

Two gold stars for mzmanda (wink)  :)

Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 2

Erotic!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!  Hope the next few chapters don't disappoint, but there will be a bit less smut and more plot -- I guess I have to throw a plotline in there somewhere, right?  LOL

 

Reviewer: starryangel1225 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 2

Love the sexin, but can't wait to see more characters and how they play in.



Author's Response:

They're definitely on their way into the story, starting with the next chapter.  I needed to get those first two chapters out of my system beforehand, lol.

Thanks for reviewing!  :)

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

wow!



Author's Response:

I hope that's a good wow, lol.

Thanks for reviewing!  :)

Reviewer: starryangel1225 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this.  I hope that you continue this story.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  More chapters to come soon :)

 

Reviewer: parakaywhore (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

I LOVE this! Seriously, it's really good, update soon! :)



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you!  This was my first foray into writing fanfic, and I really appreciate reviews....you are officially my first reviewer!   

More chapters to come..... ;)

 

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