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Reviewer: alphabetty (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 9
I think see where you're going with this, and I like it, cliffy and all.
Author's Response: Hey there!
Gotta love a cliffy, right? Well, not if you're Alice, I guess.
I'd be interested to hear your theories. :)
Reviewer: alphabetty (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 6
I have so much to do, but I can't stop reading. This story is wonderful.
Author's Response: You are so sweet!
Chapter 4 was one of my faves to write. ;)
Okay, and chapter 2. And 1. And 8. Oh, hell, I liked them all, lol.
Thanks again,
twisted
Reviewer: alphabetty (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 3
I loved Felix. Not so much Emmett. Probably because I see him as more of a bear than a queen ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Good to hear from you again!
Thanks, I loved Felix, too. He just really wants to sink his teeth into Edward. And something else, as well. (oh, did I say that?) ;)
Emmett was screaming in my ear to let him let his light shine, so I gave in. He's quite happy with his little harem of followers, so whatever keeps him happy, lol.
Reviewer: alphabetty (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 1
Indecently eye-fucked is my new favourite verb phrase. I'm loving this so far!
Way to go on your first fic. I know how stressful it can be, I'm posting my first now and as I post each chapter I cross my fingers and hope people like it.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I kind of like that phrase, too, lol :)
It certainly can be stressful, huh? I get a little verklempt each time I submit. I get so happy to send them in for validation, but nervous as hell at the same time. "Will people like it? Is it too lemony? Is there such a thing as too lemony?" lol
Great job on your fic...you have a fan here! :)
-twisted
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 9
Oh no I've just caught up with the whole story and now there is a cliffie. OMG! What's happening???? Ok back down to earth.....wasn't that a sweet thing for Edward and Jasper to do for the girls. I look forward to the next update. Jane x
Author's Response: I'm laid up in bed following foot surgery today, and have thoroughly enjoyed reading your reviews. :) Hope you don't mind that I'm responding in one message.
Alice and Bella are so fun to write. They whisper in my ears what they would like to do with each other, and I just write it down, lol. I'm glad you like how I write them, and I'm honored that this is your first A/B fic. :)
Everyone has thought that Emmie was a transvestite, but in my head he's a big bear (pun most definitely intended, lol). I have loved the evolution of Edward's relationship with Bella, as well. He and Jasper just have big old hearts, don't they? Big, quiet hearts. :)
Aren't Esme and Carlisle fantastic? I wish all gays/lesbians/bisexuals could have parents like E and C. Love them hard.
As for the cliffie, we shall see.....we shall see. That's all I can say about that. *wink*
Thank you so much for letting me know what you think about my little story. Hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters. R/L is getting back on track now, and I hope to get the next chapter posted soon.
-twisted
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 8
Meeting the parents went well and Bella made herself at home. If Alice isn't going to change Bella will be Edward? He seemed to be more relaxed with Bella and with what Alice was thinking and seeing. Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 7
Oh wow, amazing lemon, but even bigger WOW, Edward hugged Bella and doubly amazed Alice by sharing a joke with her. Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 6
So Bella will be meeting Carlisle and Esme, they've go to love her because Alice does. I see Edward in this story still seems to be against Bella becoming a vampire. Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 5
Edward being subjected to Alice's visions of Bella and her body are just toooo funny, poor Edward, bless him at least it helped him out of a bit of an embarrassing situation with his parents. Sounds like Bella has some definite plans about becomming a vampire. Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 4
It's so beautiful the love that they share for each other, will Alice change Bella? What are Carlisle and Esme going to say? Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 3
Felix certainly is a trier isn't he? I take it that Emmie is Emmett and he's a transvestite? How wicked is Alice trying to get Edward and Jasper to do all her dirty work for her? Lol. Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 2
THUD!!!! *fanning myself and the laptop* How do these two ever get dressed and go outside, they can't leave each other alone? Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
WOW! That was hot. This is the first Alice & Bella fic I've read and if you keep that up I think my laptop may just burst into flames *phew, fanning myself here* can't wait to read the rest. Jane x
Author's Response: Wow, thank you SO MUCH! I'm glad you're enjoying it...but I hope you don't blame me if your laptop melts, lol
More hotness to come. Pun intended ;)
Hug,
-twisted
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 9
=O
uh-oh. something bad happened?
Author's Response: We shall see.....we shall see. ;)
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: chelseaterre (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 8
UPDAAAAAAAAATE!!!! PUHLEEZE!
Author's Response: Hi there! The next chapter is in the queue and will be posted any day, I hope.
I have had some RL circumstances that have created a bit of a writer's block. I'm getting back on track now, but it will be a bit before I can get down in writing what Bella nd Alice want me to say. I am thinking about posting an outtake to make it up to the readers for the delay between chapter. Any suggestions?
Reviewer: Cethmisdtmyk (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 8
Awesome. keep it up and post more. :-D
Author's Response: Sorry for the delay in responding to your review. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
The next chapter is in the queue and hopefully will be posted any day now. :)
Reviewer: chelseaterre (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 8
OH MY GOD! UPDATE SOON! PLEEEEEEEAAAAAASE!
Author's Response: So glad to see you're still hangin' with this. Love to keep hearing from you :)
The girls are asking for more alone time in the next chapter, and I hate to let them down, lol. If all goes well, I'm going to send the next chap to my beta this weekend. Hope you can hang on just a liiiiittle bit longer.
Hugs,
twisted
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 1
Holy cow! Don't ready many of this sort, but I imagine you really did them justice!
Author's Response: I'm honored that you're reading this, if you don't read many of this sort (I'm assuming you mean femslash, lol)
My hope is that I'm doing the girls justice...thank you so much for your kind words :)
Hope you will continue reading. Please let me know what you think of the future chapters!
Thanks so much!
Reviewer: chelseaterre (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 7
Yay!!! I'm happy with this chapter! Update soon!
Author's Response: :D Glad you are happy, lol. This was a fun one to write ;)
The next chapter will be posted soon, I promise :)
Reviewer: starryangel1225 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 7
Love it, love it, love it. I think I'm a little jealous of their relationship lol. Let's see if the rest of the family is as excepting as Edward seems to be at the moment...
Author's Response: To be completely honest, I think I'm a little jealous of it, too, lol.
Next chapter will be posted soon...thank you for continuing to review, I really enjoy hearing from you! :)
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 7
So Bella's made Edward into a "hugger"? hehe
Looking forward to the parental responses now, I'm sure everything will be fine, and Esme will possibly even do the "about time you found someone" thing to Alice :)
Author's Response: I just kind of like the idea of Edward being a hugger. Glad you got a chuckle out of that, too. :)
The next chap will be posted soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!! :)
Reviewer: chelseaterre (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 6
Way to cut me off there, dude! Gimmie my teaser now!
Author's Response: Wow, that was one hell of a response, lol. It's on its way in a PM. Thanks for reviewing...even if it was just to get the teaser ;)
The next chapter is in the queue, so hopefully the teaser gets to you before the chapter's posted. :)
Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 5
Esme's worried it will end badly? That strikes me as strange. She was the most enthusiastic and love conquers all aside from Alice when it came to Bella and Edward. Carlisle, I could see as more worried.
Author's Response: Oh, we can chalk up her responses to just initial mother's concern. You know Esme, she's the eternal optimist. :) She'll revert back to type soon.
Thanks for reviewing...again :) You rock.
Reviewer: Gallusbarbie (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 1
Can't get Alice out of my mind. Wonderful short story and my 1st lemon. Addicted. Need more, much more :)
Author's Response: Wow...addicted? I'm flattered! Alice is, too, btw ;)
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: jab1993 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 6
AMAZING :)))
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, and for those five stars :)
The link to the teaser is on its way in a separate PM. You rock!
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