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Reviewer: FrankieCullen18 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2012 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 21
i think she;ll be embarrased but forgive him, 'cause he's Edward! who wouldn't!
Reviewer: twilightloverr18 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2012 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 21
Oooo she'll probably be hurt that he didn't tell her
Reviewer: 10of15 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 21
great update! Bella is going to be very angry with Edward ... I wonder how much groveling he will need to do? I am looking forward to the next chapter. thanks for writing
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2011 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 21
Thank you!
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2011 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 21
I'm begging...don't make us wait too long for the next update. I'm a selfish wench, but this is too good!
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2011 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 21
Interesting! I guess her reaction may be a little off to start with, but she'll come round. :)
Reviewer: hot99z (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 21
oh my gosh, i hate cliffies... please be quick with your update. i love this story and need more... thx
Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 21
Wow. Can they like get out of the hospital first? I mean ok maybe in case of her hurting him when she discovers it is a good setting. hmmmmn.
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 21
Dangit!! Why do you leave us hanging like that!? >.<
Gah such a great chapter!
I really really really hope Edward finds a way to tell Bella EVERYTHING, including that he's in love with her, and keep her from freaking out!
Can't wait for more!
Update soon!
Reviewer: Bleeding_Mascara_Tears (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2011 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 20
YES! Shoot that package up Embry! Nice touch there at the end. Poor James is in soooo much trouble!!!!!!
Reviewer: 10of15 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2011 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 20
Good chapter! Hi "package" is likely so small that the bullet would have missed and hit Bella. They better not let James make any calls or their undercover assignment is lost.
Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2011 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 20
Love the way you worked this...great.
Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2011 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 20
That was great! Loved the shot in the ass!
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2011 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 20
Oh, I'd definitely have loved it if Embry shot up his package! Great chapter. Thanks for the heads up about this story also being on FFNet, but I'll stay here and help pump up your numbers. Love this so much!
Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 02:22 PM · On: Prologue
okay, I've gotta admit... that was really hot... I kinda like the idea of Bondward using his gift for deviant reasons... doesn't that make me kinda a deviant too?? hmm... most likely yeah... oh well... I like this story and I'm 'bout to read as much as I can :)
Thanks,
Dijah
Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 20
Ok but are they gonna be real ambulances? Cause embry just put his foot in bella's mouth! Oh no.
Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 20
Nah... I think getting shot in the ass was just perfect!
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 20
No I think an ass should be shot in the ass. Now let's get Bella back to Edward and see some sparks fly.
Lilly
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 20
Thank you!
Reviewer: crystalminx08 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 20
i love love love frickin love this story please continue soon everytime i like a story its never finshed so please continue and finish i cant wait to see what happens nextttt...im anxious pulling my hair out for whats about to happen.....uggh
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 20
Lol wowww. Niiiicely done Embry! XD
and You go Bella! :D Now you get to go back and grip Edward out about knowing these things xD lol and get answers there.
Can't wait for more! Update soon!
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 20
Hell Yeh! But his ass is 2nd best. lol I was actually hoping that Bella would get to bite it off :)
Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 20
ha ha ha. i love that he got shot in the ass with his pants down
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 19
Please update soon! Great chapter.
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 16
i hope bella give him a knee to the groin!
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