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Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 3

happy is alice, doc is carlisle, sleepy is jasper, grumpy is rosalie, dopey is emmett, bashful is esme, and sneezy is edward.

Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 3

Loved it! :D I'm glad you're continuing with the story:)

Hmm... well Rosalie's Grumpy, that doesn't take much effort to figure out;), Sleepy would be Jasper, and Dopey is propably Emmett (or Alice, but Emmett is sillier)... Happy would then be Alice, Carlisle is Doc, Bashful would be Edward? since he's blushing so much it would make sense.. Well, that only leaves Sneezy, and since Esme was recently sick, I guess that's her:) Correct or not even close? :D

Can't wait to read more! :) 



Author's Response:

me too... Took me long enough, right? XD

And you're completely correct! Dind ding ding! winner winner, chicken dinner!

Ahem.

Anyway, for guessing correctly, I have a gift for you--the opening quote for the next chapter...

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Chapter 4: "Where is she? I swear to God, if that girl managed to find trouble here of all places, I'll never forgive myself for leaving her alone..."

Yay? XD

Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

Lol, probably, but then there are the people who think this is a new story and wonder how they missed the first 2 updates ^_^

I started cracking up when you told me about the slap. Dude. I semi-become my characters too, so I always feel what they are feeling at the time, lol. Like with Edward, Bella and James in the ally, I had no clue how that scene would go down until I wrote it. Wow, we as authors are strange species, lol.



Author's Response:

Lol, yeah, I know. Same with the people on ff.net who have me on author alert, and they were wondering why they only received chapter 3 emails... I feel bad for letting the story ;lapse as long as I have, lol. But chapter four is already in the works! I have 1000 words of it down already XD

Ha ha! I think it's a good thing that you didn't know what was going to happen in that scene because it made the character HAVE to come to life for you, and therefore not do anything that would be out of character for them... So yay for us, strange species... Lol.

Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 3

Edward=Bashful

Rosalie=Grumpy

Alice=Happy

Esme=Sneezy

Carlisle=Doc

Jasper=Sleepy

Emmett=Dopey

Great chapter.  Thanks for the update!  Good to hear from you again!

 



Author's Response:

Ooooh... Good guesses, my dear! In response to youre awesomely correct-osity (lol) I have a teaser quote for the next chapter: <!-- @page { margin: 0.79in } P { margin-bottom: 0.08in } A:link { so-language: zxx } -->

Chapter 4: "Where is she? I swear to God, if that girl managed to find trouble here of all places, I'll never forgive myself for leaving her alone..."

What do you think? XD

Thansk so much for not giving up on this story!

Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

Holy shit, Batman! It really has been a year! A year and two weeks, actually. I thought you were over exaggerating, lol. You kept me waiting a whole freaking YEAR? Lmao, boy I must really love you ^_^



Author's Response:

Hahaha!!!! Yes, it has. No exaggeration, though now I miss my kitty (his name being Bruce Wayne XD)

I'm just glad that you were willing to wait a year and STILL be excited for the new chapter... I have a feeling I've lost readers, lol.

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 3

Omigod, omigod, omigod, omigod! Yay! You hav eno idea hpw happy I am right now! I loved it, of course. Jacob, though, *sigh*. Lol, i have to admit, however, that I reread the first two chapters and found him far more enjoyable knowing where Bella's heart lies. I really like what you've done with the Cullens too. It would be so easy to go over the top and make them unrealistic or caricature, but you've added in their dwarf personalities while still keeping them relatively sane, lol. And here goes my guess.

Carlisle, Doc (duh, lol)

Esme, Sneezy

Rosalie, Grumpy

Jasper, Sleepy

Alice, Happy

Emmett, Dopey

And Edward, Bashful

 

I love there characters ^_^ And I simply adore Edward's blush, lol. He is so adorable! Man, Rosalie with the slap? I felt my jaw hit the floor. Seriously, I think I was more shocked than Bella was, lol. I can't wait to see what you do with the next chapter! Less than a year this time? Maybe? Lol, I have no trouble admitting to my impatience. As for LiFL, it's coming eventually. I have a couple things to get done before I can commit to the next chapter, but it's getting to the good E/B stuff ;) haha. And Jake is in my next chapter, too :p 



Author's Response:

Lol, your typos show your excitement, and it makes me happy because I do the exact same thing when I'm super excited about an update XD

First off... I'm glad that you feel a little better about Jake now that you know the truth ha ha ha... He just seems like a cute little kid with a crush to me, but everyone assumes he'll get in the way of everything, so they automatically dislike him... I'm glad you're taking it easy on the poor kid XD

And you like my Dwarf-Cullens! Yay! No, I didn't want to make them over the top in any way... Just give them enough dwarfliness that you could tell who they were, lol.

Yay for correct guesses! In exchange, I have a teaser quote for you for the next chapter: <!-- @page { margin: 0.79in } P { margin-bottom: 0.08in } A:link { so-language: zxx } -->

Chapter 4: "Where is she? I swear to God, if that girl managed to find trouble here of all places, I'll never forgive myself for leaving her alone..."

Yay.... XD That was actually the opening quote for chapter three originally, but I realized I was already at 6,000 words and hadn't gotten to that part yet, so I postponed that scene hahaha

Hahaha, yeah. Rosalie's slap surprsed me, too when I wrote it... I didn't see it coming, and it wasn't in the outline, and I worte it and I choked on air. I think I get far too into my stories for my own good XD

Oooh! Jake in the next chapter? You know just what to say to get me revved up for LiFL, lol. I have a review to submit for that as well as the outtake, but it's saved on my laptop, which is in need of a new charger, it seems... I had to borrow someone else's just so I could go to the library to check my email hahaha

I'll talk to you soon, my dear!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 3

Carlisle - Doc
Esme - Sneezy
Alice - Happy
Jasper - Sleepy
Emmett - Dopey
Rose - Grumpy
Edward - Bashful

Those are my guesses... I really want to go watch Snow White now. Maybe have a Disney marathon...

Loved this chapter. Can't wait to read more. Please please please don't make us wait that long again for an update.



Author's Response:

My gift to you for the correct guesses: (XD)
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Chapter 4: "Where is she? I swear to God, if that girl managed to find trouble here of all places, I'll never forgive myself for leaving her alone..."

A little teaser quote for next chapter for you. Yay? XD

I understand your meaning... I watched snow white before I sat down to finish up this chapter, lol. In fact, I have a "fairy tale" playlist for listening to DURING the actual writing process, lol.

And I promise, it'll be less than a year for an update. That's one promise I can definitely keep, hahaha

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

love this

Reviewer: AliciaZA (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 3

Hi There

I just discovered this story and I LOVE IT!!! So much fun, so sweet and cute. I adore the Bella and Edward relationship and really wish the queen would feed Jacob Black the poisoned apple. Arghhh, so not a fan of Jacob - especially in this story, he's killing the romantic moments of our cute couple. Can't wait for the next chapter....

P.S. Hope you update your other story soon - with the uber funny and sexy teenage next door neighbours Bella and Edward.....



Author's Response:

Lol, I'm glad you're loving the story... And sad that you want to see Jacob dead! :(

I understand your motivations, though, and I can promise you that Jacob won't be as bad as you're thinking he might in the story... He adds conflict, but he's not our main adversary here, alright?

As for My Beloved Window... Yes, the next update for that story is in the works. SSA is next in line for an update (and it might have actually been updated today if it weren't for my laptop needing a new charger and me not being able to access my files when I had the opportunity to go to the library), then Two Weeks, and then MBW. It's not forgotten, it's just that I don't have much opportunity to write and most as of late, unfortunately.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 2

Wow!!! Love the Snow White parody!! Can't wait to see what happens next! This is a really good story!

Author's Response:

Weeeelllllllll.... I hate to break it to you, but you won't be able to find out for a while.

I love this story to detah, but I just don;t have the time to work on it without passing out from exhaustion. If you'd like to see all my lame excuses, feel free to check otu my responses to previous reviews. I really AM sorry that you decided to pick up this story now instead of in the far off future when I have the opportunity to add a new chapter, but I am in no way giving this story up. It's just on hold for an indefinite amount of time :(

Once again, thank you so much for your enthusiastic response, and I'm sorry if I've disappointed you, my darling

Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 2

I comlpetely understand, and I can't say I didn't expect it;) I'll just be looking forward to the time when you've got some more time, although that would probably mean you wouldn't be writing your other stories, and I love them so much too....oh well, either way is good:D so I'm content for now;') I really think you're brilliant writer though, definitely one of my favorites on this site! :)  



Author's Response:

Well, thanks for being nice about it all :) just so you know, 2W is more than half over, and MBW (I see you reviewed that! I'm just now responding to those reviews XD) is a little under half done (I think--I don't have the ending for that officially planned out as of yet). Once both of those are complete, this story will be back in the works... because I ahve a plan, you see. Once 2W is done (since that will be complete first), i'm going to begin my posting of the already almost completed SSA (don't ask what that is; it's top secret! :P) while still working on MBW. Whichever one is finished first, the time I used for working on that will be used for the 2W prequel, and then the other story of those two will be complete, during which time I'll either work on THIS story or another one I have sitting in wait on my ff.net account (that one has been sitting since last july, and this one since last november o.0).

I hope that's how things will go down, and quickly, too, since I'm going to be out of town for the entire summer, working at a camp where there probably won't be time to work on my stories, and even if there is, there won't really be an opportunity for me to post. So yeah. It'll be a while for this story to continue, but I do have a plan at the very least!

thanks again for being understanding, and now I shall go reply to your review for MBW hahaha

Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 2

I love this story, much as all your other stories I've read. I really think it's incredible sweet and adorable..:) I noticed you haven't updated it since 2008, so I'm going to beg you now to write more!!! Please? PLEASE??? Pleeeeeease?!!! :D Once more just for the hell of it... PLEEEAAAASSE?!! I'm begging here! :)  

I really enjoy your writing, and this story is just too cute not to continue with! I'm going to resort to being desperate and needy here aren't I? (like I wasn't earlier in this comment:) LOL) Alrighty then, I'm truly begging you to write more, so I'll hope you'll just wake up tomorrow and think: 'yeb, this it definitely the day I'm going to continue writing my story(this one!)' LOL:D



Author's Response:

I always feel so horrible when I see that someone else has read this story, and I've even considered taking it down for the time being, but I just don't have the heart to do it.

Yes, it will be continued.

No, it won't be any time soon.

If you read some of my responses to my earlier reviews, you can see my reasoning why, but really, there are a lot of factors and the most important is that I really just don't have the time. I picked two stories (my most popular of the two) to keep working on consistently, and the others were put on hold until I have a completed fic, and have the time to work on it. I love the idea of this story too much to just slap some writing together and post it, because it wouldn't be quality stuff. And I don't want to post chapter 3 tomorrow, and then wait six months to post chapter 4, so I'm just not making this story even a secondary priority. I promisepromisePROMISE that this story WILL be continued, it will just take a while.

You said you read my other stories, so you've probably seen how often they're updated, which is every couple of days usually. That means that i don't have time to bang out 6,000 for this story even once a month, especially considering how I'm also trying to simultaneously work on the prequel for Two Weeks, AND there are two other stories on the backburner that are waiting (im)patiently to be posted once I have 2W and MBW complete. And those stories are so epic (XD) that they take way too much energy out of me...

So I don't really even have time to work on the stories that I DO work on, so this one has to wait. Have I attempted to justify myself enough to satiate your need? I really AM terribly sorry that you chose to pick this story up now, instead of later when I have the opportunity to continue it :(

Reviewer: Mamasebring (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 2

I love it. I hope you come back to it soon.



Author's Response:

While I'm glad you like this story, I honestly on't have the time to work on it right now, I'm sorry you chose to pick it up when there wouldn't be regular updates. I AM still working on this when I have the chance, but it's slow going... Thank you for taking the time out to read, review, and rate though! It made my day to know that people still want to hear more from this story :)

Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 2

This is so cool.  I love it.  When does the next chapter come out???



Author's Response:

I've been trying to work on getting the next chapter out for a long time... a month of the delay was dueto computer problems, but once I got me beloved laptop back, I was too busy working on another one of my stories that had been neglected even longer... And now I'm just fighting for the inspiration to return to this. I have a solid outline for the next chapter so that's been helping, but I only seem to be able to write a couple sentences at a time before my attentions wander to another one ofmy stories...

Long story short: I'm trying! But it's not working out so well XD
Hopefully the next chapter will be out soon, with the support of sweet reviewers such as yourself. Thank you for your kind words, honey!!! ^.^

Reviewer: Katy_Baby_Ann (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 2

i loved it

Author's Response:

thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I am in fact currently working on TRYING to work on the next chapter hahaha

Reviewer: CarolinaBella (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 2

OH please please please write more!!!!! i love this!!!

Author's Response:

Of course I'll write more! I had to take a break from it because of computer troubles, and I just recently got my laptop back from being repaired about a week ago, and I used that time to update a story from my fanfiction.net account that had been left to suffer for four months. no worries, though,  I have the next chapter for this story outlined, and I'll type it up when I have enough time off from work.

This story has not been forgotten, just delayed by unexpected circumstances... :)

Reviewer: Katy_Baby_Ann (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

i loved it

Author's Response:

And I'm so glad you did! I just got my laptop shipped back to me after it went in for repairs, so I shall be updating soon.... once I canget through my hundreds of emails.... o.O

Wish me luck! lol

Reviewer: lilisle (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 2

Awww. I loved that chapter very cool. I have to say Edward the "protector" is extremely hot and the fact that he's jealous of Jacob just adds to it. *sigh* Bella is so lucky.

I really enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait for the next one. Update Please.



Author's Response:

haha, yes, we all love Edward in that role... and any other one, really... lol.

And I'll update as soon as I get my laptop back, my dear. It had to go in for repairs, unfortunately. It will be back soon, I hear, though... *crosses fingers and knocks on wood* :) 

Reviewer: screamingSOUL (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 2

LOVE this story! That's right, girl power! It was my first time voting, & damn it felt good!

Author's Response: Oh yay! I'm glad you liked it and im glad you enjoyed the girl power and im glad you voted!!!! I'm just glad all over the place, especially since im going to meet Robert Pattinson on Monday!!! (I'm sorry, I can't seem to make myself stop saying that hahaha)

Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 1

Don't worry! I love Jacob, too. I only meant that his thoughts about not saving Edward were douche baggish ^_^

Author's Response:

Oh good. I'm sorry if I went a tad overboard... I'm used to having to defend his honor hahahaha

and yes, it was slightly douche (nice spelling, hon! ;P) baggy there... but he had suffiecent motives, thinking first and foremost about Bell, not just getting rid of the competition... And his first thought WAS to save him, so he's not a hrrible person.....

^.^

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 2

aww why couldnt I have fairytales like this when I was little

yeah it probably would have been a little too R rated

lol thank you for another wonderful chapter!

xoxo



Author's Response:

yeah, thats why. the massive swearing... lol

and your welcome for another wonderful chapter! I'm just so pleased to have you like my work! XD

lawl....

Reviewer: Morgan (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 2

This is wonderful. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you, Morgan! I don't think you'll have to wait long, but I don't think I'll be posting anything more until Monday night at the lastest... I have to wait for a day off work to take my poor Debby (the laptop... lol) to be fixed, and hopefully it won't be long after that. Thanks again for your wonderful words!

Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 2

Wow, let me tell you. I love this story. Jake is a freakin dusche bag! What the hell?! I was so pissed, haha. This has got to be the best third person writing I've read on here. It's really easy for it to get confusing when you're writing for several different view points, but I'm never confused when I'm reading your story.

I loved the twist of Edward falling in instead of Bella. And the fact that he risked his own life to save her. Ome, I loved it! And, best compliment I can think of, this chapter was uber long, but it felt like it was short. I never wanted it to end! You have a talent for getting people lost in your writing. Nice job. I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hmmm... just so you know... the word is spelled "douche" and that's nothing like what Jacb is like!!!! :O I love that boy with a passion, but he won't end up with Bella so there's no need to insult him, okay? lol

And thank you! I find that the best way to edit work and make sure it makes sense is to read it aloud, and if words get jumbled or the he/she's get mixed up, then something is wrong. I'm glad that taking an hour just to read a chapter actually pays off, and that y'all appreciate it :)

And I know! I spent a long time deciding who it was that would fall in, and in the end, well, you know what happened. Foreshadowing of the danger, making it seem like Bella would and letting Edward sae her, then flipping it around! who'da'thunk that could happen??? (not me! :P)

And I thank you for the best compliment ever. I'm so glad that you can think such positive things about my writing style, and I appreciate you taking the time out to 1review for me. Thank you!!!

Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 2

My my my, there was a lot taking place in this chapter. I loved how Bella was not about to lose Edward or Jacob for that matter in the lake. It's so sweet how much both guys truly care for and love Bella. I can't wait to meet the family once they make it to their destination. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

Author's Response: indeed a hell of a lot happened... we learned what happened with Charlie (like you were curious about), all the traveling took place, Edward and Bella start to fall for each other, JACOB BLACK (the sexinexx imaginary person in the universe XD) showed up, and our Bella saved the day! And in only a little more than 6000 words, too! lol
And I know.... in the Twilight world as well as this ne, she would never let either of them be hurt if she could help it, and bravery comes from that... fun stuff there... lol
And about meeting the family... I'll give you a little teaser and tell you that for some reason, the last sentence of the chapter didn't show up.... I probably missed that part when I copied and pasted... meaning that something very important was missing there, and now it's not a family-related cliffhanger! So you'll be meeting at least one family member where chapter 2 leaves off. i shall talk to you later, dearie!

Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 2

I really take interest in this story.Its really different from the other stories. I think that you could make this into a fabulous story you already got these amazing chapters so please continue on.Update soon.

Author's Response: Wowzer... I take your words to be an extreme compliment (you know, a compliment that goes bungee jumping and sky diving :P) because I always try my hardest to make my work as unique as possiblr, so thank you... your sweet words mean the world to me....

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