Fabulous story, I've been addicted for the last week. I especially love the more mature version of Bella. Please finish it!

 

This is probably my favourite fanfic!! But, it is incomplete and it's been at least a year... I hope it hasn't been abandoned :((

I guess everyone is moving on. I just wanted to wish you well. I have truly enjoyed this story and it's one of my favorites. Thank you for sharing it with us all. 

Will you be finishing this story? It has been a year sence your last update. The story is very good and I hope you will be updating soon.

Thank you for playing upon one of the sweetest lines from New Moon (you give me everything just by breathing). {sigh}

I really enjoyed the progress in their relationship. Edward wanting to wake her up, so he could kiss her and Bella waking up not regretting their conversation about marriage and actually trying to take credit for proposing were great moments. I liked that Bella wanted him to share the bedroom space with her and to feel comfortable around her without the distance.

I loved Alice and Edward’s phone call and how she did not step over his boundaries. It was really sweet that she was genuinely happy for him and tried to help by packing his mother’s ring for encouragement. I was pleasantly surprised that she managed to keep his progress from the family. It was nice to see Edward mulling over ways to propose to her while she was visiting with Caroline. I had to laugh at Alice sending Edward the text as he was debating whether he was frustrating his sister with his indecision about the various methods.

 

I am glad Edward discussed with her about the threat this newborn poses to her safety. I can understand his desire not to share Bella with his siblings and to spend this precious time alone. It was kind of sweet. I am glad that he also told her how hard it is for him to rein in not giving her gifts and I enjoyed the conversation that followed.

 

 

Thanks for the update!  

Is Nessie going to make an appearance?

Oh my! I just got really choked up at Bella's apology and declaration of what Edward means to her and then to have him return the same sentiment. Wow! Awesome.

This reception was really good. I loved that Jessica had the band play "Sweet Caroline" for her daughter to take center stage and included her in her special day. I liked that Caroline was more accepting of Edward. It was sweet to hear how Jessica's friends, Renee and Mike rallied together to pay for her daughter dancing lessons. It shows their devotion to this little girl.

I love how this Bella and Edward talk to each other and this chapter had some great conversations. Bella blurting that she was still a virgin how she did was freaking hilarious. It was really sweet of Edward to divulged his own status and reinforce his love for her, so she didn't feel that being a virgin was something to be ashamed of.

I am glad that they confessed about their individual talks with Renee and how she came to the conclusions that she did. Their discussion on love and romance was very good. I look forward to that discussion on marriage when Bella is more coherent.

I loved how Angela came to the rescue at the end of the reception to push Bella away from clean-up duty and into Edward's arms, or room for the night as it turned out to be. I am glad that Bella decided to postpone going home and extend their little vacation together.

Thanks for the update.

(* happy sigh*)

Lots of Bella and Edward... it was definitely worth the wait. Thanks for this great chapter.

You- suck----in good way-maybe----urghhh  where is the happy ending??

I'm glad Bella got through the wedding and the recieving line safely before going with Edward to her ankle checked out. It was quite awesome how the Cullens worked together to help Bella get medical attention for her ankle and get quickly back to the reception.

I liked that Edward told Bella about what happened with the newborns and the threat that still looms. I enjoyed their discussion about his desire to protect her by asking her to call out from work for the next few days and that he used examples of his family to show that the behavior was not just because she was human.

It was funny seeing the effects of Bella accidentally mixing alcohol with her meds when Jessica publicly thanked her. It was sweet how Edward told her that he missed her and she returned the sentiment.

I appreciate that you are taking extra care to make sure the end of the story does not fall flat. Thank you again for this great story.

I really hope Edward comes around with the "changing" aspect. I'm sure he just can't see what his reaction is doing to her. I can't wait for your next update! Do you know how many chapters you might have left?