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Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Chapter Three: Questions

This is really a good story. I'm interested in how it turns out and the road in between :)

Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 11:27 PM · On: Chapter Three: Questions

wah.. poor edward.. well if you wake up in la... go and chase down bella ofcourse!! and grow your hair out! lol

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 11:27 AM · On: Chapter Two: Erased

Love it!!

Reviewer: shannonluvstwilight (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 11:08 AM · On: Prologue

I loved the first chapter!!! I'm interested to see how the story progresses :)

Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 08:26 AM · On: Chapter Two: Erased

lol I loved that movie so Im sure your fic will be great!

Reviewer: lickshislips (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 03:57 AM · On: Prologue

This story is amazing so far! Please update soon!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Chapter One: Glimpse


Reviewer: Kateration (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 11:13 AM · On: Chapter One: Glimpse

I really love your story. The premise is awesome, totally original. I'm totally hooked except...may I make one tiny suggestion?

I'm having a really hard time reading with the huge spaces between paragraphs.

Instead of being able to read a whole page and then scroll down, I keep having to read then scroll, read then scroll, read then scroll.

It's sort of distracting from the story.

I can't wait for an update. : )

Reviewer: chance (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 06:20 PM · On: Chapter One: Glimpse

haha,this is so good! can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: cindyrella0016 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 05:00 PM · On: Chapter One: Glimpse


i love it <3


Reviewer: Celticgirl264 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 05:16 PM · On: Prologue

I love this movie and so far I love your story. I like your interpretation of the movie and the start out to it. Cannot wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: fiercepixie (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 03:29 AM · On: Prologue

I think this is a very good start. Cannot wait to read where you take this story. Blue eyes huh?

Reviewer: edwardluva84 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:27 PM · On: Prologue

Good chapter.  Can't wait to see what you have next.

Reviewer: inge80 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Prologue


I just read the first chapter and I really like it.

Because it’s the first chapter and I don’t want to spoil anything with my questions I’m gonna wait patiently for the next chapter(s).

I’m looking forward to the rest!


Inge :)

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 04:18 PM · On: Prologue

Love it !



Reviewer: katiecave (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Prologue

First review!!! Score!!! I'm very intrigued with this story. This chapter was very well written and I can't wait to get to the teaser that you posted for chapter nine. Please keep up the good work.

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