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Reviewer: willyjoe (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 03:24 PM · On: The Battle!
Still great!
Reviewer: willyjoe (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 02:39 PM · On: The Strategy
I love how this story explains all the holes in breaking dawn! Excellant, can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks! When an author doesn't tie loose ends up - it leaves us readers hungering for more, so this was one of my goals, so thank you for noticing.
Reviewer: idealskeptic (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 05:34 AM · On: The Epilogue
This was much closer to the way the end of Breaking Dawn should have happened. I read it in two sittings, because I had to sleep, after all, and I loved it! I'm sorry you lost readers, I really don't know why that would be. But rest assured, you've got a fan in me.
Now I'm off to see if you've written anything else yet!
Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thanks again for your comments! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate the stars! I agree with you... my version works better (and it's Hollywood friendly in addition!)
Reviewer: idealskeptic (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 05:09 AM · On: The Aftermath
May I quote you?
Edward continued. "Jasper already had his own hunger to deal with... and it takes a certain amount of willpower for him to refrain. But add the fact that he could feel my singer's hunger as well. It was magnified to an unbelievable point... and when Bella got a mere paper cut, it not only sparked his own bloodlust, but my siren bloodlust as well."
That explanation really & truly needed to be in the book! I've always gone with the idea that Jasper felt his entire family's thirst but "singer's hunger" and "siren bloodlust" are so much more than that. It's the perfect explanation & a missed opportunity in the books.
It's almost like Edward wasn't so much protecting Bella from Jasper when he threw her against the table (and spilled more blood) as he was saying "Mine, mine, mine!" and protecting his singer's blood for himself.
Maybe I'm reading too much into it, but that is the best way I've ever seen it put!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your observation... and I don't think you are reading too much into it - for certainly it makes sense! I will admit, though, that I read a theory similar to this in a tale at another site, and although they didn't explain it exactlly as I did, it did provide me the insight to come to my conclusion. You just took it a valid step further in providing what Edward felt during the attack. :-)
Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 04:42 AM · On: The Epilogue
I liked your ending Better than SM's. They way she left the threat of the Volturi over the Cullens head, knowing she had no intention of ever following up on the story, never sat right with me. In SM's world, the Volturi would have left that day and started planning how to defeat the Cullen's. Aro would not take his humilation in front of so many, lightly. I thought your ending was well thought out and gave attention to so many intersting characters that we only got a glimpse of in the original books. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review... I appreciate it! Yes, I agree with you one hundred percent, otherwise i wouldn't have felt compelled to write this tale. :-)
Reviewer: sdcullen (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 01:05 PM · On: The Epilogue
This was fantastic! Please write more stories!
Author's Response: Thanks for the note and stars! Writing more stories is very time consuming. I'm amazed at some of these very long sagas - for this 55,000 plus word tale here took a tremendous amount out of me. :-) It makes me appreciate all these other authors more! Thanks again!
Reviewer: mommakat (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 11:42 AM · On: The Epilogue
Hi again! I had to finish reading this- today lol. I didn't find fault, I did find it believable and you did a great job! Again, thank you very much for sharing and I have you on author alert!
Kathryn
Author's Response: Well, your welcome again... and thanks again, for more stars! Glad this hit a homerun with you! :-)
Reviewer: mommakat (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 08:23 AM · On: The Battle!
I'm so sorry to hear you lost readers after the first chapter. I think your story is wonderfully written, stays in canon, and I'm so glad I found it. Thank you for sharing it!
Kathryn
Author's Response: Thanks Kathryn, I appreciate your words and the stars! :-)
Reviewer: kayariley (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 02:14 AM · On: The Epilogue
The parts with Charlie made me cry!
Author's Response: Thanks for the note and the confession. I found myself quite emotional when I wrote it as well... even when I recently proof read it. Grammatically, I'll be making a few changes, but it will remain just as emotional. Thanks for letting me know. :-)
Reviewer: Jo1978 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 02:08 AM · On: The Shield
i realy liked your story
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: RoseKelly1021 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 01:01 PM · On: The Epilogue
This was great ~_*
Author's Response: Thanks. :-) Love those stars!
Reviewer: AnnieBella (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 12:00 PM · On: The Epilogue
I loved it. Thanks for the fantastic story!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the note - and thanks for the stars and exclamation points! :-)
Reviewer: SkittleE (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 08:44 AM · On: The Epilogue
You know, if they had resorted to a fight in Breaking Dawn, it would have turned out so much better. Thanks for writing this, I always thought that SM ended it in the wussiest way possible.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it AND thanks for the rating! :-)
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 05:56 AM · On: The Epilogue
I have just read this in one sitting, and I have to say I prefered your battle to SM's!!! (Although I did hear an interview with her where she hinted that she had a fifth book in mind, which I always assumed would be a big showdown.) You killed off all the right people too! I liked Marcus' role and Maria was an interesting addition. I also liked the idea that Charlie got to know the truth too. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the high compliment! :-) Yeah, it was unsettling to end the story while the Volturi threat was very real in the future. I hadn't heard that she was thinking of a fifth book to tie up loose ends, and I'd be shocked if she wrote it. I have a sneaking suspicion that the fifth film (BD2) will have some of the battles that the book didn't. I could be wrong. We'll see. Thanks again! Yeah, Charlie deserved to know... and leave life with his immortal daughter and granddaughter as his side.
Reviewer: lightspell (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 01:58 AM · On: The Epilogue
This was an amazingly original take on Cannon leading to AU. So very interesting and exciting. I like the idea of all the hidden missions and the way Jasper really worked his magic. I, too, felt he wasn't utilized enough in BD by SM. I knew Alice would NEVER leave her family without reason and this story really satisfied my curiosity as to their plan. I really enjoyed all the points of view and could easily see these events taking place. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind words. Yes, we are in full agreement regarding a missed opportunity in using Jasper. Simply by using the same ingredients SM had at her disposal, I thought there was no way Jasper (with his superior know how), would ever allow the Volturi to walk away from that battle field to regroup. :-)
Reviewer: tappsmom (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 03:20 PM · On: The Aftermath
Loved Charlies POV! Its so great he is in on all the secrets now.
Author's Response: Yeah, I always felt Charlie should know the whole story as well... but not until the Cullens could ensure his absolute safety. Thanks for the note, and be advised - the Epilogue is in the queue and awaiting to be posted. :-)
Reviewer: annicullen (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 07:17 PM · On: The Aftermath
Excellent, can't wait for the Elipogue!
Author's Response: Thank you! Rough draft is about 2/5 ths complete. Struggling whether to go with Jasper or Edward for the early POV. Carlisle's POV follows... and then I end the story with Bella's POV. For she is my favorite. It might be awhile before I promise a solid Epilogue. :-)
Reviewer: tammgrogan (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 12:32 PM · On: The Aftermath
You did a geat job with the whole thing, I can't wite untill the next chapter. hanks again.
Author's Response: Thanks again. Working on the Epilogue every day. :-)
Reviewer: sdcullen (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 12:31 PM · On: The Aftermath
You did a great job with Charlie!
Author's Response: Thanks for the note regarding Charlie. I always felt they'd be an initial shock. I mean... our automatic response to the word, Vampire, isn't something that brings a smile to our face for sure. But when it finally hit him that the Cullen family didn't fit his preconceived idea of that word - I think it was easier for him to ignore the label and not look at the Cullens with horror.
Reviewer: tammgrogan (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 11:38 AM · On: The Shield
This is a GREAT STORY, I only wish that I could give you a higher rating that a 10!!! It should be a 10++++++++. Thank you
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words and rating! I'm glad you find this entertaining!
Reviewer: RoseKelly1021 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 04:12 PM · On: The Proposal
OMG!!! This is fantastic! This is a wonderful story and I hope, pray for more soon. Wonderful job!
Reviewer: RoseKelly1021 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 04:12 PM · On: The Proposal
OMG!!! This is fantastic! This is a wonderful story and I hope, pray for more soon. Wonderful job!
Author's Response: Thank you for the kudos and rating! Still working on the next chapter so it might be awhile. Then the Epilogue and it'll be a wrap. Thanks again for your compliments!
Reviewer: annicullen (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 02:04 AM · On: The Proposal
Excellent version, love it! Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks for the kudos... glad you're enjoying it! :-)
Reviewer: Roonie (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 10:22 AM · On: The Shield
Sorry. I've been on here for a while and have never messed with the stars. Corrected!
Author's Response: LOL... seriously, you didn't have to do that - but not complaining you did - and thanks again! :-)
Reviewer: AVIDREADERGREEN (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 02:50 AM · On: The Proposal
EXCELLENT. IT JUST TOOK ARO TOO LONG TO DIE..LOL I THINK U DID GOOD WITH MARIA, IT ALWAYS STOOD TO REASON FOR ME THAT SHE WOULD SOMEHOW BECOME PART OF THE VOLTURI SINCE SHE WAS ALWAYS CREATING ARMIES
Author's Response: LOL... yeah, believe it or not I had him dying during the battle in my first draft - but then I thought he might prove entertaining when Maria showed up. :-) Glad you enjoyed her motivations and thanks again for writing me a review. :-)
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