this is an amazing story, thouroughly enjoyed it, thank you

Author's Response:

Thank you for your note of approval - glad you found the tale enjoyable.  I go back and read this tale every now and then and find myself enjoying it just as much as writing it.  Thanks again!

I'm so excited about the battle.

Author's Response:

Given you most undoubtedly read that battle -  I hoped you enjoyed it!

Great story!! I always wondered what could have happened had it came to a battle, and I think you done a fantastic job! I enjoyed the way you made use of Alice and Jasper's gifts and expertise in warfare. Thank you for sharing!!!

Author's Response:

Yes, I always thought Jasper was underused myself... its almost like Stephanie Meyers forgot how incredible she had made Jasper.  Thanks for the rating and glad you enjoyed it!

*sigh* I completely love this it is just what I would want to happen if there really had been a battle. The thought that the Cullens would share their rule had never occurred to me but now I can't imagine it happening any other way. Love the time staggering in the epilogue since the Cullens will live forever it's hard to write an end to their story but this was a very satisfying You know what's funny when I first read the description I was afraid to read this story because I didn't want to read about anyone dying but now I am glad I did it was just so brilliant. I mean it should be obvious that Jazz would take command and lead everyone to victory but I somehow didn't see it coming. So thank you so much for taking the time to write this! P. S. Now I want to read about A&J doing espionage type activities thanks to this ;-P

 

 

 

Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your kind words... and I'm glad you liked it and I didn't disappoint you.  Trying to ensure it came across as realistic, I knew there would have to be sacrafice, so picking the two characters who "lived" the longest was a no brainer.  Jasper's character is a strong one, and deserved a greater role in this confrontation.  I kind of thing that Stephanie might have simply been too tired and that's why she didn't go in a direction that brought greater closure.  Thanks again! 

I loved this story! It was really well written and had a great storyline. I especially like how you showcased General Jasper. Keep up the good work and you get a 10! :D

Author's Response:

Thanks Bri - I appreciate the note.  Yeah... I always thought Stephanie missed a great opportunity to use Jasper... basically wasting him.  So, I simply did something about it.  :-)  

A MA ZZIIIIIINNNNGGGG Story. GR8 JOB!!!!.

Author's Response:

Thanks!  That's gr8 that you enjoyed it!  :-)  And thanks for the stars!

i dont like that maria and dane will be watching without being seen. i kindof do but i really dont. oh well.

Author's Response:

Keep on reading.  :-)  All is well - I assure you.

I really like your story so far. I love the way Kate/Garrett are interacting and all of the different visions - how far Alice can see into the future. A lot of the times in fanfic, I notice people seem to make her powers inept like she's constantly messing up and that's not her at all so I really apprecaite the way you've written this :)

Author's Response:

Hope you eventually finished the tale and it held the same fascination.  Glad you enjoyed it thus far and I'm sorry for the late response.

I enjoyed this alternate ending to BD.  I felt it really tied up all the loose ends.  It was interesting to see the story from so many POVs.

Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving this note.  I apologize for the late response, but RL has a habit of distracting from time to time.  Glad you enjoyed it!

This is how the true ending should've been! All issues resolved and no one important left in the dark. I really hate how SM leaves Charlie's character out of the know amd left to speculate and doubt his own instincts. He deserved way more than that! I can just imagine how this battle and ending would've translated on the big screen....epic! Well, I'm still looking forward to seeing the final movie, but it's nice to imagine this ending too. You've done a great job here... Very well constructed.

Thanks again for sharing!

Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you, thank you... yes, I agree... tie up all those loose ends!  :-)  Yeah, too bad Hollywood didn't use my battle, huh?  Thanks again!

Hello. I'm readng this way after it was originally posted, but I hope that you still receive notification of new readers. Just want you to know that I am enjoying the story very much and cannot wait to read on! I am very anxious to see how the battle plays out. You've done a great job expanding the canon, and have put together something totally believable and great! Nice job!

Chyla

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review and the stars!  The fact that you've been enjoying it thus far is a plus... as I'm told the early chapters drag.  I'm currently giving the entire story a smoothing over, and unfortunately, I don't see where I can make the early chapters any stronger.  In any event - thanks!  And expect the tale to really take off now!  :-)

A long epi. I see you like to cover ALL your bases. Nicely wrapped up. Congrats on finishing.

Author's Response:

The epilogue kind of got away from me, but oh well.  And you're right... I did try to wrap everything up.  I knew if I was going to reflect scenes from various time periods - that I would have no choice but to cover Charlie's passing.  But I didn't want the final scene to be so depressing; so why not throw Angela into the mix.  Thanks for reading - and reviewing.  Now, get back to work on your own tale!  :-) 

To me, it was sad that Garrett and Kate's furture wasn't gone into farther in the books. However, so near the end, SM had to be concerned with the pace and flow. I supposed taking the side path of G&K would have disrupted that.

Interesting twist with Maria.