Tell you what, I can really see the TWtWB influence here (in a good way, of course). I love how you've captured their canon personalities, yet managed to draw parallels to the TWtWB characters!

Let me see:

Bella = Ellie (of course)

Alice = Corrie

Edward = Lee (not Vietnamese like Lee was, but that doesn't matter)

Emmett = Homer (good fit)

Rosalie = Fi

Jasper = Kevin

Angela = Robin

Does that make Mike = Chris?

The only thing that's worrying me at this point is the deaths in the  TWtWB series. Are you going to include corresponding deaths here...

Definitely can't wait to read more!

I found your entry on the forum asking for a beta reader. I don't know much about the writing part of fanfic (which is why I joined the forums), but if you're asking for someone to proofread for spelling, punctuation etc. I would be willing to give it a go. I have done similar for Leanne Golightly and I think she was/is pleased.

I have read the first chapter on fanfic and thought it was very good. I am a little confused though, why do you need this if the chapters are already on fanfic? Or do you just need chapter 8 onwards?

                                                                  Isabel

Very intriguing.

I don't know whether this means anything to you, but it really reminds me of the Tomorrow series of books by John Marsden. Which is a good thing, I love those books.

Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

:D What a clever cookie. The Tomorrow Series is exact what this story is based on. I love them a shitload too, probably more than twilight, shhh. I can't wait for you to read the rest. Im trying my best to get the next chapters posted asap, but Twilighted in being difficult. 

Please don't forget about me in the mean time. I know if you love the tomorrow series that you'll love Burning Dawn.