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Reviews For 100 Hours
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 02:56 PM · On: 30 Hours Part Two

yay



Author's Response:

Thank you!

xo

Reviewer: 3kdz4me (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 10:32 AM · On: 30 Hours Part Two

I think it's really fucking hilarious that you didn't try and make it some long drawn out, porn type first time for them.  This was MUCH more realistic!  Great chappie!



Author's Response:

Thanks you times 1 million! I get tired of the perfect first time. This seemed more appropriate for them anyway. I appreciate the review and am happy you enjoyed it.

xo

Reviewer: Tina02 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 11:41 PM · On: 30 Hours Part Two

great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

xo

Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 05:02 PM · On: 30 Hours Part Two

Yeah! She told him....:0)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

xo

Reviewer: Gone_Crazy109 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 12:45 PM · On: 30 Hours Part Two

that was sooooo cute!!!! less than five minutes? really? damn lol



Author's Response:

Lol, he was excitred and overcome w/emotion! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xo

Reviewer: nocturnal_rendevous (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 12:36 PM · On: 30 Hours Part Two

I really liked this one.  It's nice to see a fic where Edward, teenager or adult, that's not some inexplicable sex god and that he's normal.  It's just not realistic.  I sometimes get irritated at the fics that have him go for hours or just repeatedly re-animate immediately.  I enjoy the more realistic ones from time to time.  This was as sweet as this E/B could be and loving as well.  Great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you! That's what I was shooting for- reality. Now I can embellish, lol.

xo

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 12:08 PM · On: 30 Hours Part Two

What a wonderful chapter...  loved how jacob had to open Bella's eyes to the truth.  Thanks for sharing



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the time you took to read and review!

xo

Reviewer: titan24 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 09:28 AM · On: 30 Hours Part Two

Brilliant foreshadowing.  That was hilarious.  And they finally said it.  YEAHHHH!  Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the time you took to read and review!

xo

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 09:25 AM · On: 30 Hours Part Two

Poor Edward! I'm still chuckling! Well, he IS a teenager! I think he would like it if you foreshadowed a looooonger chapter next time!

Author's Response:

Lol, yeah next one will be longer. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xo

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 06:36 AM · On: 30 Hours Part Two

i hope that the next pratice lasts a little longer for her! but they are so sweet!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the time you took to read and review!

xo

Reviewer: inbetweendayz (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 06:30 AM · On: 30 Hours Part Two

i love this edward and bella they have the perfect mix of good and bad



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the time you took to read and review!

xo

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 06:25 AM · On: 30 Hours

So glad Edward decided to let Bella in.  I think he didn't realize how much he needed her emotionally,  this is all new to him as it is to her. They are both used to being so self-reliant and its a new thing to have to consider someone else. Love your story, you are doing a great job with it and look forward to your next update. 

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 09:33 PM · On: 30 Hours Part Two

Aww :) I don't think that's the response you were looking for, but it was cute.



Author's Response:

I look forward to all of your responses! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xo

Reviewer: twilightlovergirl (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 04:06 PM · On: 30 Hours

love as always

 

Reviewer: vampiregirl1001 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 10:59 PM · On: 30 Hours

Loved it!

Reviewer: titan24 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 05:23 PM · On: 30 Hours

Unfortunately, Edward is a hypocrit.  But i'm glad bella straightened him out.  Great job.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: mrsrob2 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 02:42 PM · On: 30 Hours

I love these two!!!  I can't wait for the next chapter... This story is so addicting and the characters are so amazing.  Loving it :)

Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 08:00 AM · On: 30 Hours

FABULOUS STORY!!!!

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 06:23 AM · On: 30 Hours

so big boys don't cry? i hope that someone gets the chance to beat alec down!

Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 02:43 AM · On: 30 Hours

awww. i was so worried about them but i knew they'd pull through it! Loved the lemons! HOT!! he he!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2010 02:31 AM · On: 30 Hours

Their first real fight and they came out like roses! Now it's make up time! Sigh, I remember that was the fun part! At least they know they both felt the same way about being apart!

Reviewer: Tina02 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 09:58 PM · On: 30 Hours

great chapter.
glad they were to talk things out.
Alec is creepy.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 07:18 PM · On: 30 Hours

Glad they resolved everything. Poor Edward! His grandpa's story was sad :(

Reviewer: karenlillie (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 06:13 PM · On: 10.5 Hours

Im confused now... Is Tanya a girl from forks high trying to vie for Edwards attention or his cousin that owns the bar? Or are there 2 of them this story?

Reviewer: bcdw (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 04:35 PM · On: 30 Hours

love love love love!!!

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