Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 05:08 PM · On: 15. Declaration to Conspire
Awesome Chapter! glad u updated! XD
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm putting the next chapter up for validation tonight..
Neliz :D
Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2011 04:21 PM · On: 15. Declaration to Conspire
I think you stopped the chapter at the perfect spot. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Will they all get out of their alive? Will Royce & Jessica be killed?
Great chapter.
Author's Response: *grins* Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I think this is my best chapter at least to me. I'm was very proud of it
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 09:17 PM · On: 14. Getting Things Rollin'
Oh man! I am eating this story up! Love it!! Love that its sooo not the usual read, & that u gave Bella some balls! U go girl!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 05:31 PM · On: 14. Getting Things Rollin'
Great Chapter......
Reviewer: cruiz107 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 05:48 PM · On: 14. Getting Things Rollin'
What I don't get is if Jessica was always a thief herself or did she just join Royce and start that way? Anyway, good chapter and I can't wait until the action really starts. I hope there's a lot of violence. hehe
Author's Response: Thank you! Jessica's position is a secret I still haven't revealed. I think in the next or the one after it will be revealed. Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 03:26 PM · On: 14. Getting Things Rollin'
awesome chapter!
Reviewer: cruiz107 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 03:07 PM · On: 8. Mixing Business with Pleasure
Holy Shit. Jessica caught me completely off guard. I'm only a few chapters in but this shit is great.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 12:54 PM · On: 14. Getting Things Rollin'
Well Hells Bells...things are definalty picking up. It's about damn time Edward starts realizing he needs Bella just like all the rest of them do.
Emmett is going thru so much but I have a feeling he's going to have a hard getting to Jessica before Bella.
Jessica really is delusional and I think she is going to be surprised as hell when Bella fights back. Hope to all that is holy that Bella kicks her ass before she is ended.
This is getting exciting...
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 11:52 AM · On: 14. Getting Things Rollin'
I can't wait for Bella to kick Jess's ass. Payback is such a bitch.
Reviewer: LadyAngel (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 02:14 PM · On: 13. I'm A Big Girl Now (Shasta53)
Ugh no! I want more...you have me hooked now!
Author's Response: I'll give you more! The next chapter is up for validation!
Reviewer: belachia (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 01:12 PM · On: 8. Mixing Business with Pleasure
totally didn't see that coming...but since jess is supposed to be a product of james..
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 06:20 PM · On: 13. I'm A Big Girl Now (Shasta53)
Damn author honey, I am in stunned awe that Bella slapped Edward and bitched him out...wipes tear from eyes...I am so proud of Bella. Edward definalty needs to pull out of his emo mode...Rose is right about him loosing her if he doesn't knock it off. I am so excited for what is to come!
Author's Response: *grins* THANK YOU! Edward will do good. I have faith in him. LOL
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 06:24 PM · On: 13. I'm A Big Girl Now (Shasta53)
awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter is up for validation already!
Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 06:09 PM · On: 12. Destruction and Disbelief
This story is captivating. I do not really see a problem with Bella's interogation technique. Edward needs to open his eyes and accept certain realities in the world he is operating in. Ethics and morals are good negotiation tactics in some crowds but you can't catch all insects with honey.
Author's Response: You get me! LOL I know, not with these people. I think they like it rough
Neliz
Reviewer: kathy6900 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 03:40 AM · On: 1. Somewhere To Go
Interesting start! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: kathy6900 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 03:35 AM · On: 1. Somewhere To Go
Interesting start! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: wonnabcullen (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 06:27 AM · On: 6. Consequences
I always counted 4 muskateers Aramis, Arthos, D'Artagnan and porthos never really got why they wer refured to as the 3 muskateers? any way soooooo not the point im loving the story ur an amazing writter u totaly rock!
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 10:10 PM · On: 8. Mixing Business with Pleasure
no i didnt see it coming.. lol... this story is like a movie :)
Reviewer: opalmoon (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 06:50 PM · On: 12. Destruction and Disbelief
Wow, I know Edward is a bit freaked, but geez he's has gone overboard as Assward. Maybe Bella should have shot Edward in the butt just for good measure. Maybe she'll get the chance later. :-)
Author's Response: LMAO! He did go overboard. But I'm gonna chuck it up to him being in shock LOL.
Reviewer: opalmoon (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 06:37 AM · On: 11. The Calm Before the Storm
Go Bella. She just seriously lost her shit there, not that I can blame her.
Author's Response: She did loose her shit. But she is who she is LOL. Thanx for the review
Neliz ;D
Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 12:31 PM · On: 11. The Calm Before the Storm
Ok Ive caught up and the story is very enjoyable to read. I was curious from the very beginning what Ed and his family did for a living. Such a neat concept. The only thing about Jake being the bad is that it is hard for me when Jake is a bad guy. I get over that fast though because when I started reading this I knew it was a Ed and Bella story which I love when the six pack is together. I am just team twilight and Jake is the only one besides Edward that I hate seeing as 'bad', ya know. Enough said about that. Loving the story and Bella the 'badass' that she is being. Hope to see an update soon after that cliffie.
Hugs, Stephanie
*I also think emily B. is super! So are her stories so I have to give props right back too! :)
Author's Response: I love Emily! LOL. She's fantastic. You know I never really Jake. But it had to be done for Bella's sake. On the next story I plan of write he will not die ;D
Neliz ;D
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 05:25 AM · On: 11. The Calm Before the Storm
let dying dogs lie
Author's Response: LOL Yup, Thanx for reviewing
Neliz ;D
Reviewer: prettypoisin23 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2010 02:10 PM · On: 11. The Calm Before the Storm
I freaking love this this story. I love Edward as the not so perfect guy. Your fucking awesome and cant wait for an update!
Author's Response: ;D If you see the grin in my face right now, you would probably think I'm some psycho person. Thank you!
Neliz
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2010 01:05 PM · On: 11. The Calm Before the Storm
omg omg! EPIC BELLA! AND YAY THEY DID IT! LOL
can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: LOL Funny how that's all people paid attention too! The next chapter is up for validation
Neliz ;D
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 06:08 AM · On: 10. Jealousy, Surprises, and Amendment, Part 2
OH NOESSS!!!! NOT EMMETT!!!
Yay Edward appologized. Now Bella and him need to get back together. This Jessica crap isn't good!
can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Yes, he did. Edward is special and confused LOL
Neliz
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