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Reviewer: carolinagirl2011 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2012 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
Do you know of other BSMD stories have read something about mistress pet and another one can't remember the name. These types of stories are kinda hard for me to find. I also read "A Family Secret" story but interesting!! Could recommend more or write more? Thanks
Loved this one....kinda like you have thing for both!!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2011 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 2
Damn can you write things to keep your readers glued to the screen, lol. Love it!! The emotional energy that you create is astounding. Great job! Hope to see more!!
Reviewer: Cory Farland (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 2
I really like this series, and all of the side pieces that you have done with the All of Me universe you've created, but I have one small thing to ask: Could you do a side story of Bella's time with Carlisle and Esme, as she refers to it far more often than she did the time that she was punished to act like a dog, I would like to see a few chapters of that time, if only to better see what Bella means. Thanks, and keep writing.
Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2011 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 2
Hot, way way too hot. Smoking. 3 way loving A+++'s all the way.
Reviewer: emilychar (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
Holy Hell. "Spread your legs, darlin'." Might just be the hottest command you've written in this entire story. So. Damn. Hot.
Come back, write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*shameless begging*
Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 1
Holy shit, more please!!!!
Reviewer: furiousstrength (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
Mmm, so perfect. I think this is how the real chapter should have gone. Sharing can be such a fine line to walk but I think you did well in writing Jasper and showing that sharing Bella with him is an intimate, loving gesture that Jasper appreciates and lovingly returns instead of some degrading act instead.
Reviewer: writingbabe (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2011 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 1
Dear Flibbins,
I re-read your entire story over the past few days, and wanted to send you a note to say, if you decide to return to All of Me, you definitely still have an interested audience. It's an interesting, well-written story, and I would happily read the rest.
I'm not usually out on the forums, but I checked yours for the first time yesterday and discovered your note from August.
Please accept my sympathy. I miscarried before having my children, and the loss can be so overwhelming.
I hope you are recovered in body and that your spirit is on the mend. If and when you have the heart to try writing again, know that your readers will welcome you back.
Best wishes to you, bb.
writingbabe
Reviewer: KVI (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 1
I.......I.....just......sit....here....sh'''''t, that was HOT!
Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 2
have just re-read these chapters and think they're even hotter second time around!
Reviewer: Cethmisdtmyk (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 2
Awesome, simply amazing, as always... :-D
Reviewer: sbc123 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 2
o...m...g....stil throbbing...cant move...yes..yes..playroom..yes!
Reviewer: sbc123 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'm trying to type but there is no blood flow in my fingertips it is all centered somewhat lower in my body. I loved it when Jasper said "please let her come, Edward..." I was begging for it too! Please, please, please, give me the morning after...my body is aching and humming for it master, please?!
Reviewer: sbc123 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'm trying to type but there is no blood flow in my fingertips it is all centered somewhat lower in my body. I loved it when Jasper said "please let her come, Edward..." I was begging for it too! Please, please, please, give me the morning after...my body is aching and humming for it master, please?!
Reviewer: sayitoutloud (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 1
I really love an all Edward/Bella storyline,but I felt that Bella needed the "attentions" from both Edward and Jasper to keep her from returning to her nightmares and make her feel safe and secure in the embrace of both men. I definitely thought it was hot! Hope everyone else did, too. No, I wouldn't mind another round with Jasper/Bella/Edward.
Reviewer: sayitoutloud (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 2
That was satisfaction guaranteed! For all!
Reviewer: sayitoutloud (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 2
That was satisfaction guaranteed! For all!
Reviewer: sayitoutloud (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
I really love an all Edward/Bella storyline,but I felt that Bella needed the "attentions" from both Edward and Jasper to keep her from returning to her nightmares and make her feel safe and secure in the embrace of both men. I definitely thought it was hot! Hope everyone else did, too. No, I wouldn't mind another round with Jasper/Bella/Edward.
Reviewer: roon0 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 2
What a wake up call LOL.
Reviewer: roon0 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 1
Good lord I need a cold shower.
Reviewer: deesirius (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 2
Shit that was awesome!!!
Reviewer: tightlybound (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 2
Ok then .. Wow what a good host is right !! Having to find and read this till you write more on "All of Me" Tick Tock Tick Tock!!!
Reviewer: pennycocktail (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
So, did you write the morning after one shot??? Can't find it... need to... you are godhead!
Reviewer: ju007 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 2
love it!!
Reviewer: SouthrnBelle (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 2
Fun to read! Very interesting and eye opening. :) Write more!! :)
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