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Reviewer: goldenpixie (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 11:58 PM · On: Selfish Acts
This one-shot is good. There are a few grammar errors, though. I like the small plot. It actually explained a lot of things.
For me, I think Jacob's attitude in this one-shot is like the attitude of normal, gangly boys. No offense. It's like he isn't the usual sunny Jacob. He's a bit different, especially with the language.
Good job with this one :)
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