Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:08 AM · On: These Days That Last A Lifetime

Loved it. Love the way you discribed it and evyerthing. Very well written

Reviewer: IHeartJazz (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Being Immortal Ain't Easy

So I've been a totally crap reader and havent reviewed in a few chapters, but Im here to make up for it just by telling you that YOU ROCK!!!  As for the story... I totally heart the LPOV!!!  not to mention the slow to start and yet still budding friendship going for edward and leah, and as always leah is an awesome bitch!

Reviewer: Jaenanda (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 01:40 AM · On: Everything Smells Like Leeches

I've been following this story for a while, and I'm consistently impressed, and so, so, so glad that you're keeping up with the updates, even if they aren't as regular as you (or, admittedly, us readers) would like. Kudos for getting this far- I can't wait to see where your yarn will take us next!

I love the way you write Edward, btw. He seems perfectly Edward, only veiwed from an absolutely different perspective, of course. Stripped of his "perfection" we get a better idea of the flawed, complete character.

And Leah just rocks, you know. I loved her SO MUCH when she told off Sam.

Reviewer: wolvesrmyhomeboys (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Smelling, Yelling, and Sappy Sunrises

I love the convo between Edward and Leah...it seems so plausible.

 

Also, I LOVE Emmett in this chapter!  I agree with him...He and Luke were practically made for each other, lol!

Reviewer: wolvesrmyhomeboys (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Bloodsucker Bonding?

I think Edward and Leah will always have tenuous relationship...

 

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER :)

 

P.S. May I just say  that I love your chapter titles?

Reviewer: wolvesrmyhomeboys (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:45 AM · On: It's a Good Thing We're Going to a Hospital, 'Cause Seth, I'm About to Rip You Apart...

YAY!  Leah imprinted!!  Sucks that he's sick, though...I hope he isn't terminal.  Leah deserves something good to happen to her.

Reviewer: lucy the divaqueen (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Being Immortal Ain't Easy

this is a great story, you totally made me ry and luke is SUCH A PERV, <3

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Being Immortal Ain't Easy

Squee!  Taht was a very detailed change!  OMG that was so awesome it was sureal!  I can't waitto see how the whole you stink thing works for them hopefully he has no scent that would be a blessing for her.  If he was untracable!  I am so excited!  Wow a new Cullen hehehe

Post again soon I am so excited!

Reviewer: PrinccipezzaDiDrama (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 09:58 AM · On: It's a Good Thing We're Going to a Hospital, 'Cause Seth, I'm About to Rip You Apart...

I just love how well you've incarnated Leah and stuck to canon, really getting the characters and using their day to day slang. Great job!

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Being Immortal Ain't Easy

Great chapter. I read the last one first from Leah's POV and then to read Luke's POV was awesome. Thanks for sharing!!!

Reviewer: Swedish_Chef (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 01:10 AM · On: Being Immortal Ain't Easy

Awesome!! I love Luke's character and inner thoughts, very entertaining and detailed. I think this is one of your best chapters in writing and description and such :) Again, I can't wait until he fully wakes up as a vampire!!

Reviewer: JayEddie1008 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 12:46 AM · On: These Days That Last A Lifetime

Good chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.