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Reviewer: karenbush2007 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2010 02:11 AM · On: An Assumption

i love how edward wants to take care of bella, its sweet. I like it!!!

Reviewer: leeseeq (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 03:57 PM · On: An Assumption

Loved this one shot, that's a clever idea about him worrying about his eyes.  It seems like somehting he'd worry about.

Reviewer: 78slayer (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 04:44 PM · On: An Assumption

Silly Edward, I love this short story.

Reviewer: shammy (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 01:25 AM · On: An Assumption

like it...

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 08:59 AM · On: An Assumption

nice. i've wondered about edward's eyes before, but i haven't really seen it addressed before.

Reviewer: Edward Cullen Rules (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 09:27 AM · On: An Assumption

very cute, I love it. That sounds like an assumption Ewdard would make :)

Reviewer: Nimoko (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 03:31 AM · On: An Assumption

Oh, this is so perfectly Edward!  He would be concerned about something as silly as that.  Your characterization is spot on.

Great 'fic!

Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 06:45 AM · On: An Assumption

I love the paint comparison... great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I looooove little missing scenes like this. Fun! ;)

 

<3Alissie

Reviewer: bellablue (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 05:04 AM · On: An Assumption

I think the paint is perfect - Edward's well-versed in the arts, it doesn't surprise me. 

Laundry also would have worked. How many cycles does it take to turn pink underwear white again? :) 

Reviewer: christinemarie13 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 11:15 AM · On: An Assumption

This was cute. Edward is always so protective of Bella's nonexistent feelings. :)

Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2008 09:05 AM · On: An Assumption

Wow - I never thought of the idea that Edward's eyes would probably turn slightly red because of the blood.  Great insight.  This was quite refreshing to read.  Love missing moments!!

Reviewer: silly bj (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 03:11 AM · On: An Assumption

Great job.  Very in character.  Now I need to see if you have written any other stories.  I hope so.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm slowly submitting new chapters to Among the Revolutionaries, my other story on here. There's a few more on my fanfiction account, buuut the first few I wrote were pretty horrible. xD

 

<3Alissie

Reviewer: BettingonAlice (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 08:38 AM · On: An Assumption

That was fun.  Edward, Edward, Edward--always has to have something to be angsty about.  :-)

Author's Response:

But of course! It's one of his... ehrm... /endearing/ qualities! ^-^ And what a thing for him to be worried about, right?

 

<3Alissie

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 03:35 AM · On: An Assumption

This was a sweet little missing moment.  You did a very good job of staying true to the characters.  It was very intimate and very affectionate.  I very much enjoyed reading it.  Well done! 



Author's Response: Thanks! =D I'm glad that you liked it. It just seemed like a very... /Edward/ thing for him to be worried about. I thought of it randomly when wondering if he hunted at all when she was in the hospital.

Reviewer: pixieyow (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 02:16 AM · On: An Assumption

this was so cute!

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad that you liked it! :)

 

<3Alissie

Reviewer: RunsWithVampires (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 12:42 AM · On: An Assumption

 You should add more to this story I liked it.

Author's Response:

Oooh, I'm glad that you liked it! ^-^

I wrote it just as a one-shot for a contest, and the rest would probably be a bunch of various Bella-torture games until Edward came back.

What I like the most is that if he had THOUGHT to ask Alice, she would have been able to check and see that his eyes were perfectly fine. XDDD

<3Alissie

Reviewer: NoMoreThanUsual (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 11:54 PM · On: An Assumption

This was very sweet.  I loved it.

Author's Response:

Ooh, I'm glad that you loved it! ^-^ It was a lot of fun to write, too.

 

<3Alissie

Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 06:21 PM · On: An Assumption

Very Edward.  I like it.  :)

Author's Response:

Thanks! Edward's one of the characters that I have the hardest time catching, because he's so... clear-cut, almost. Really defined. Still, I'm happy with how this turned out. ^-^

 

<3Alissie

Reviewer: elmathelas (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 05:51 PM · On: An Assumption

The paint thing made a lot of sense, especially since a few drops of red in a gallon of white will throw the color off, like he said.  I really liked this, it seemed just right.

Author's Response:

The funniest bit for /me/ is that, if Edward had even THOUGHT to ask Alice, she would have been able to see that his eyes were fine. ;)
Psh. Men. XD

Thanks, though! ^-^ It was a really random comparisson to think of, but it seemed to fit. :)

 

<3Alissie

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