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Reviews For Halfway Gone
Reviewer: SonnieShine (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Before the Dawn - Part 1

Um someone is going down a prescription medication addiction road that they seriously need to detour off of.

Great update, looking forward to the "good stuff"

Reviewer: PrettyChikin (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 11:20 AM · On: Before the Dawn - Part 1

This is heartbreaking.  I want to watch this story and hope for a happy ending...

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 06:07 AM · On: Before the Dawn - Part 1

Well it looks like Bella is NOT handling things well.  I am surprised that her mom left.  I am really surprised that the pharmasist refilled her perscription.  That just doesn't happen. Anyway, I cant believe Lauren, uuugghhh she needed to be bitch slapped.  I am so glad that you are finally going to give us EPOV and then the good stuff.  It takes a long time for an update and I get impatient sometimes. lol.



Author's Response:

Yes, sorry it takes so long for updates, we both have kids and sometimes everything just gets ontop of us.  Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 04:38 AM · On: Before the Dawn - Part 1

so much pain, hopefully things start looking up

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 04:13 PM · On: Baby Mine

Poor Bella! My heart aches for everything she's been through.



Author's Response:

She is definitely doing it tough.

Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 05:23 PM · On: Baby Mine

Wow she is goin to be allright I hape. Another great chapter!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing  :)

Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 04:31 PM · On: Breathe Underwater

Wow found guilty that suck for him.....another graet chapter

Author's Response:

Yeah, he thinks it sucks too lol.  Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Mercy

Wow that is sad I hope we find out about sam soon,,,

Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 03:30 PM · On: How Does It Feel

Aww so good but so raw!!!!

Reviewer: sammijane (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 01:32 PM · On: Baby Mine

i think ive lost my mind last week im sure  eead about bella taking an over dose am i wrong please tell me xx



Author's Response:

lol.....

All will be revealed soon  :)

Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 01:16 PM · On: Angel of Mine

Awww that's sad!!!! I really should not be reading this story.. Its sad!!! My aunt was in a car crash yesturday, and she might not make it.. Her best friend died on the scene!! Wow life is sad!! So my motto 4 the day is call the ones you love and tell them you love them... Sorry little side track great chapter...



:( kym

Author's Response:

Sorry to hear about your aunt.  We hope that she is ok. Life is sad  :(

 

Thanks so much for reviewing

Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Poison

Wow what a great start.. Edwards an ass !b

Reviewer: edwards_cousin (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 12:13 PM · On: Baby Mine

I feel so bad for Bella. So sad.



Author's Response:

It is heatbreaking what she is going through.

Reviewer: dark edwards girl (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 12:12 PM · On: Baby Mine

omg read it on ff.net too, poor little lucas broke my heart. amazing chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  And thanks for reviewing  :)

Reviewer: 1ljreader (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 10:06 AM · On: Baby Mine

Oh no..I was hoping that at least the baby would have survived. She's really going to need some therapy. So sad. BTW,   I love that you update so quickly.... :)



Author's Response:

We had a lot of chapters already written but now we are all caught up, so not sure if chapters will be updated as soon as they have been.

 

Thanks for your review

Reviewer: Morena (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 09:58 AM · On: Poison

i liked your story soooooo much!!

i can't wait for an update :)


it's so sad what happened to Bella... a bunch of tissues went away on that last chapter... and Renee and her 'helping'... geez!!! i'm SO glad that you made Bella snap at her and send her away... she may be her mother, but she deserved it by being completely inconsiderate towards her own child in such a state of grief over the loss she suffered...

and Edward.... don't even get me started on that one... i mean, i had this huge urge to do something really bad to him because he is such an arrogant and self-centered asshole (sorry for my bad language, but this is the mildest word i could come up with describing his character at the moment lol)

i love how you are developing the characters and the story itself!!!

keep up the good work and thanks for an awesome story to kill my time with when i'm bored out of my mind or when i just want to escape reality for a while :D



Author's Response:

That chapter was a sad one to write, but you may still need your tissues....

lol, Edward is a huge asshole, but don't worry, he will improve  :)

Thanks so much for your review.

Reviewer: HiDHo (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 09:06 AM · On: Angel of Mine

Wow!  I stumbled onto this story on the "Most Recent" tab & I'm hooked.  I also noticed that you mentioned Kayla Cullen as one of your beta's.  I'm reading one of her stories too!

Onto chapter 3

Take care,

HiDHo

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 08:46 AM · On: Baby Mine

Wonderful story - I hope Bella can heal in time & that Edward matures in time!



Author's Response:

Edward has a lot of growing up to do  :(

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 07:42 AM · On: Baby Mine

Well I know we need to see just how bad Bella is suffering but I just wonder when Edward is going to come back into the picture?  It seems that maybe bella needs to be in the hospital.



Author's Response:

Edward will be re-appearing very soon  :)

Reviewer: SonnieShine (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 06:46 AM · On: Baby Mine

<sob> Poor Rose, I would hate to have to be the one to tell anyone something so heartbreaking. Good to see Bella moving out of numbness into the anger stage but she can't do this alone!Great update and looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review.  :)

Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 06:30 AM · On: Baby Mine

You know...I would probably have been meaner to Renee.  I am sorry, but I can totally see she is so no helping.  Yeah, help will be good at some point, but Bella has to get to the point to want it.  It being pushed and forced is going to do nothing.



Author's Response:

You're exactly right. Bella feels forced and she just isn't ready to ask for it.

 

Thanks for your review.  :)

Reviewer: katee412 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 11:45 AM · On: Breathe Underwater

The characters have been established really well and it will be interesting to see how they develop. I'm looking forward to the next update!

Reviewer: 1ljreader (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 06:31 AM · On: Breathe Underwater

God he got off easy..250 hrs c/s. Still arrogant and contemptuous. Why do we still love him?

Great chappie :)

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 11:53 PM · On: Breathe Underwater

Edward is such a dick!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing  :)

Reviewer: SonnieShine (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 07:42 AM · On: Breathe Underwater

Wow Edward way to be a dick! There is a man dead, a woman in yet unknown (to us anyway) condition, and you have a chip on your shoulder the size of Mt.Everest and are complaining about having to hand out meal trays!

Awesome update , can not wait for the next and especially can not wait for E&B's meeting.



Author's Response:

Bella will be up next and we will find out everything that has been happening with her.  E/B meeting is not far away!!

 

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