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Reviewer: One way (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2017 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 40-Peace Talks?
Where is the end? You can't stop here!!?!?!?
Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2017 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 40-Peace Talks?
I was finally able to get inti my account and catch up...and find a big cliffie? Thanks for all your hard work on this story. I really like reading it.
Reviewer: LovesCurse (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2016 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 40-Peace Talks?
Any chance of a new chaptet soon?
Reviewer: princess123 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2016 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 40-Peace Talks?
I need more to the story you have to finish this it is soooooooo good
Reviewer: princess123 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2016 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 26-Dreams and Reality
cliff hager that is what I think. This is the best story I have ever read.
Reviewer: louis-swan (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2016 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 20-The Verdict
This is my first fanfiction and I am OBSESSED!! I love that you go between different POVs, it makes it so interesting! I'm desperate to find out what happens next. Longer chapters would be great, but only because I'm a greedy reader and can't get enough! Thank you for writing this - it's great!
Author's Response: I always enjoy hearing from a fan. I can't take all the credit as the characters are Stephenie Meyer's creation. However I do love hearing that someone enjoys what I write. Thank you
Reviewer: Debbie1870 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2016 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 40-Peace Talks?
Why wouldn't Bella stick around to protect everyone? Where is Ella and Harry?
Where is Renee? Wow, this is a really bold move by Aro. Love the story, keep
writing!
Author's Response: Renee was left out of this. She is human and with Charlie and Sue gone, Bella wanted to protect the only human family she had left. Bella left with Liam because even though he is powerful, he is still a baby. Ella and Harry are around.
Reviewer: B Black (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2015 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 4-Mental Rambles
Hey! I just read these, they're really good! A couple paragraphs don't flow, so watch that but otherwise a really good fan fiction. Thanks.
Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2015 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 39-Uncertain Outcome?
I have missed this story and look forward to more!
Reviewer: Phb4367 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2015 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 39-Uncertain Outcome?
Enjoyed the story very much
Reviewer: Debbie1870 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2015 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 39-Uncertain Outcome?
Keep writing. I like the flow of this story and the pov's. I think if this is a trap then Aro and Caius will be dead very soon. Why didn't he bring Jane or Renata? Aro and Caius should really watch out for Ella & William.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2015 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 39-Uncertain Outcome?
So, you lived up to the title of your story, it sure is an uncertain future now! I don't trust Aro and Caius any further than Renessmee does! I will hold a good thought for the outcome of this so-called peace talk! Hope to see you sooner than next year!
Author's Response: Thank you for your comment. I look forward to writing more often!
Reviewer: Twihard4life002 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2014 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 38- Baby Boy...Big Issues
Some bits I didn't understand but really great story line and price of writing please next chapter soon
Reviewer: liz119 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2014 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 18-Mile High Club
Another great chapter!
Reviewer: liz119 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2014 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 17-The Journey Begins
Exciting! :)
Reviewer: liz119 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2014 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 16-Growing Pains
I think it's great! :)
Reviewer: liz119 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2014 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 15-Awaiting a Message
Great! :)
Reviewer: liz119 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2014 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 14-A New Development
Great! :)
Reviewer: liz119 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2014 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 13-Change of Heart
All I can say is, "Wow! :)
Reviewer: liz119 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2014 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 12-Joy Rides and Cliff Dives
Great writing! Like I said before, the story and charactors are just like I imagined they would be. You are a great writer! :)
Reviewer: liz119 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2014 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 11-Alice's Vision
Good idea! I'm looking forward to Jacob and Renessmae's story. Thanks!
Reviewer: liz119 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2014 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 10-Love, Marriage, Surprise!
Perfect!:)
Reviewer: liz119 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2014 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 9-Past, Present, Future
Great! :)
Reviewer: liz119 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2014 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 8-Wedding Planning
Very good! I enjoy this very much. :)
Reviewer: liz119 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2014 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 7-Life's Little Crashes
Great! :)
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