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Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 02:29 PM · On: Let Your Dim Light Shine

Aww... poor Jasper... well written though, thank you for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thank you soo soo much for your review :) 

On my FF.net account I recently added a short but sweet sequel to it.... just to wrap things up because people have asked me to.  I'm thinking up a final conclusion for it but I'm still tinkering around.

I'm soo happy you like this o/s.  I seriously have thought about making it my Nano (but original) because I uber loves it too :)

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 10:43 AM · On: Let Your Dim Light Shine

This is one of my favourite one shots, probably because it never fails to make me cry. The ending is so sudden and.. gah, just emotional. This line kills me every time: And that's when I realized that no one was listening.

I know I'm reviewing again.. but I felt like it :)



Author's Response:

Thank you soo soo much for your review :) 

On my FF.net account I recently added a short but sweet sequel to it.... just to wrap things up because people have asked me to.  I'm thinking up a final conclusion for it but I'm still tinkering around.

I'm soo happy you like this o/s.  I seriously have thought about making it my Nano (but original) because I uber loves it too :)

Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 05:27 AM · On: Let Your Dim Light Shine

What?! She died?! I wasn't expecting that.. and it just happened. I had to go back and read it again because it was so fast.

I'm still in shock. She died! They were so in love! And the ring.. you described as something so beautiful!

I liked this :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. 

 

YES YES!! I made it all tragic kingdom, huh?

 

I have thought about writing a sequel... like... what happens when Jasper gets home? 

 

Awesome that you liked the ring!!

 

Thank you so much for the review! It means so much to me ;)

- erikasbuddy

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 12:54 AM · On: Let Your Dim Light Shine

Oh my god. I'm bawling my eyes out here! I'm speechless. I had a thought that maybe she was going to die, but I didn't want to believe it, and then it happened so quickly. The tears just started flowing the second you said this:

The breath that I screamed came out in coughs. And that's when I realized that no one was listening.

I'm still in shock, and still crying. That is really really emotional stuff at the end. I loved the start, it was beautiful how they were together every day and how she said to him that she missed him, but then he said it to her.. *cries* The last line was pretty heartbreaking, but an amazing closing line.

Well done :)

I'd love to add this to my Eternal Hope series for Alice/Jasper stories, I want other Jalice fans to read this.



Author's Response:

Hi there!!

I'm soo happy you liked my story!!

 

I'd be honored for you to add it to ETERNAL  HOPE series (would also lovers a link so I can check it out ;)  I'm not down on all the sights lolz)

 

I wrote that for the BLACK BALLOON contest on FF.net.  We had to write ANGSTY stuff.  THe hubz swears that wasn't angsty but hey lolz... I tried ;)

 

I do have one more ALICE/Jasper story called the STORYTELLER (its the only other one I have on my page).  Its about JASPER as a homeless man and Alice as a receptionist.  It all takes place in Bham (where I live)

 

OMG! But seriously!! Thank you soo much for your review. It makes me soo happy that people out there take the time to tell me their thoughts.

 

I lovers you for it!

 

-erikasbuddy

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