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Reviewer: bigsis0829 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2010 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 7

They finally met!! And Edward called her his girlfriend as soon as he got there, trying to protest her but still. I'm sorta surprised they slept together already.....but then again not really. I mean if I met a guy as hot as Edward I probably wouldn't be able to resist either....no matter how many times I told myself not to be a slut. LOL! But anyways, I'll have to finish getting caught up later......

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 8

What an evening. And what an awkward encounter with Jake! He must be sleepwalking, or how else would he have ended up with Bella's undies? *giggles*

And Edward, having a bit of a temper, do we? Or maybe he's just so insecure and afraid...

Thanks for updating, I really like your story!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 8

I'd like to order Edward...off the menu please?

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 8

she's nuts

Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

WOW...what a jerk!!..lol.

Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 3

wow..that IS terrible...did you actually give him gas money???!



Author's Response:

I absolutely did not...he was kinda upset with me...not that I cared

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 7

yes bella's introduction and then calling out kate -- classic

Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 7

Loved it!

Reviewer: qlsm (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 7

Good story. It's going to be interesting how to get around the Jake thing, aka "stink dog man."

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 7

Loved the awkwardness and the cooking :)

Reviewer: kiviern04 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 6

ok...i really did not expect that one.... they just got it on, really really fast. I loved how he was having a dream....psych!!!! and then BAM...it was real...i think they both needed a bit of release, don't  ya think....can't wait for the Alice-spill-session.... woohoo....

patiently waiting for your next update.... rockin tee ee

Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 4

I'm just starting this story today and liking it so far!  Just hoping for no more Jakehole?  (Nothing against your writing, just hate his character in general).  Can't wait for them to meet in the next chap!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 6

no not a slut

Reviewer: Teaste (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 3

I went a a date once where the guy attempted to blow in my ear all sexy like and he must have forgot that he had food in his mouth and I ended up with rice in my ear.  I was so grossed out that I threw cash on the table and walked home.

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 6

Interesting story.  I like the premise of Edward having no game with women.  It did make my giggle.  I am looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 6

Maybe a teeny bit slutty, but seriously, faced with someone as hot and clearly as nice as Edward, who wouldn't?! Don't look at me...I'd have probably jumped him in the car to be honest! *L*

The whole scene at the start made me giggle....ah, Edward and his dreams of Bella :)

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 6

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Fairest of Them All (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 6

it takes two to tango and you didn't see Eddie complaining!



Author's Response:

True, true...He's a fan of the sexin'. ;)

Reviewer: deleepowman (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 6

Bella's lack of verbal filter coupled with Edward's awkwardness led to a some hawt smexing. Slutty? Who cares. They enjoyed it and used protection



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 5

just read through and like am making fish faces at you

Would you like me to make you a banner. Please check out my thread and email me back with what you think. Thanks, Readergoof.

http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=5683

You can email me at readergoof@comcast.net



Author's Response:

I make fish faces on a regular basis! My kiddo thinks I'm crazy, but I can't find the will to care. (probs because I am crazy!)

I sent you an email in regards to the banner question. It would be from Dandiegoose@gmail.com :)

Thanks for yor review

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 5

They finally met! Edward is the perfect knight in shining armor :)



Author's Response:

He's probably not perfect, but he's got that need to save the girl syndrome. :)

Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 5

That was nice. Completely unexpected to have the 'secret' outed so quickly!

Author's Response:

Is there a better way to out a secret then to revel too much information? I giggled all through it. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 4

I liked it. Even the Marcus date!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 5

Edward is awesome! and I'm glad they are going off together



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 5

Cute ending to the chapter.  i cna't wait to read more.  Have fun on your vacation!



Author's Response:

I'm working on the chapter this evening. I hope that I'll get it up before I go. :)

Thanks you for reading!

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