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Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Surprises
OH MY GOD!!! Can you do it any better? HOT!!!!!!
Need a cold shower now! :)
Reviewer: AgMag (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Shadows
Oh my god... My body is shaking.
That was so intense.
I'll secretly be craving more surprises...
Reviewer: gentlereader (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Shadows
“Get some rest, Bella,”
“You’ll need it.”
My body is covered in goosebumps and I am more than a little dizzy. I need to go lie down.
Thank you VERY much
Reviewer: jenjen519 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 04:16 AM · On: Surprises
I need a cold shower...NOW!
Reviewer: sc4536 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Shadows
Oh. My. God.
I've just read both chapters at once, and they were both so hot!
I sooo can't wait to see what you come up with next!
It's just a shame I can't rate this more than 10 stars!
Reviewer: RaeCullen (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Shadows
Oh KB.. Domward is seriously my favorite. You rock my socks girlie. This was so fricken hot. I love you and your writing.You are WIN. =)
p.s. I'm anxiously awaiting at PYB update ;)
Reviewer: sarawthouttheh (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Shadows
Dearest KatieBelle, Mistress of Teh Smut. I bow down to your greatness. And Edward's dirty mouth.
Reviewer: BeCullen1 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Shadows
You are wicked, but I love it. hehe
Reviewer: BeCullen1 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Surprises
Nice chapter.
Reviewer: Klassisa Vernette (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Surprises
HOLY FUCK.
BEST FIC EVER!
This seriously has to be one of my top favorites out there. Please write more!
Reviewer: trudy_lowe (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Shadows
Hot damn! I don't think I can say anything more than that. Hot damn!!!!!
Reviewer: Cloudy_SkieZ1 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Shadows
oh my.....good lawdy! That was....fucking rockin!!! Amahzinggg
Reviewer: bondgirl (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Surprises
Wow! This was extremely erotic! But tasteful also, not what I expected. I don't know how Bella could have just sat there and not jumped on Edward there and then, that's what I would have done! Good story. Can't wait to read the next.
Reviewer: xjennjennx (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Surprises
Well my mind is officially blown. haha.
Reviewer: RobertLover (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Shadows
This was so so hot, I loved it. Great job. I will definately keep a lookout for more. Love it Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Shadows
That second chapter was awesome! Hope you find inspiration in surprising places soon! ;)
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Shadows
Yes. YES! Keep it coming --- fantastic story!
Reviewer: NKubie (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Surprises
That was incredibly hot! Nice work.
Reviewer: holnico (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Shadows
Loved it! it made me hot that is for sure. I am definitely looking forward to seeing what Edward has in mind next for Bella's two day weekend, and see if she actually gets the real thing by the end. I am curious I have read allot of postings and I wonder why they do not write about Bella giving him some pleasure once and a while, I know this sounds kinky but I believe as partrners and especially lovers it should be on equal terms as well. I hope you post soon the anticipation is haunting.
Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Shadows
Oooh, hot, delicious, love that dirty-talking Edward! You do some mean smut, girl!!
Reviewer: CullenDreamer (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Shadows
I get that you're trying to keep them virgins until the wedding night just like canon - I'm assuming? But can't they do something else besides Edward watching Bella touch herself? The setting changed but it was pretty much the same thing as chapter 1.
Reviewer: L-cuLlen (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Surprises
oh my f'ing god...
i am in desperate need of a cold shower right now...that was damn amazing...
update soon...pleaseee
x
Reviewer: otter68 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Shadows
me likey.
Reviewer: St0pSmackinMe07 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Shadows
AWESOME!
more please. :)
Reviewer: melsie69 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Shadows
So. Fucking. Hot.
I have no words.
Just, more.
Please?
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