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Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 05:14 PM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.
Wow. That's the best purpose I've seen Jasper use his abilities for yet! :))
Reviewer: kelseymarie33 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 11:22 AM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.
Oh. Oh. Oh. I fell in love. Thank you soo much for this story.. Please continue. :D
Reviewer: Momstheteacher (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2008 08:07 AM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.
This is an interesting story. The fact that Edward has not busted in with the jealous and overprotective vibe is strange. I am very curious to see what you do with this story line.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! Hopefully, Edward's motives will be a little clearer after the next chapter. We'll get a closer look at what he is thinking and feeling. I appreciate that you took the time to comment. Thanks!
Reviewer: sirenastarot (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 06:34 PM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.
That was awesome. I'd love to see another chapter.
Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 03:43 PM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.
Oh my. I love that Edward set Jasper on Bella...to protect her. It is so Edward...in a sweetly twisted, AU kind of way. ;) This story was gorgeous and steamy...and the most erotic part for me was how Jasper was affected. mmm. Prettyplease share the rest of the story!
Reviewer: Djanga (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 03:12 PM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.
Luscious hotness! More, please.
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 01:10 PM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.
AMAZING!! Can I borrow Jasper!GUH!!! Fantastic!!
Reviewer: MissNebraskaLIVE (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 09:55 AM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.
This is SUCH A COOL IDEA. I really really want you to continue it; I love the Jasper and Bella chemistry.
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 08:35 AM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.
Wow! Wasn't expecting this at all. Um, not sure what to say except, thanks? *bats eyes* I've got serious pervy thoughts of Bella/Jasper (even though I'm team Edward), so this was quite fulfilling.
Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 05:49 AM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.
I'm definitely interested in readung more of this! Makes me wish Jasper's gift was real! ;) Also curious to see if Edward changes his mind. Once the damn breaks, etc...*wicked grin* Bella will only want more. Lucky Alice!
Reviewer: jr17 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 04:40 AM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.
Yessss, Jasper hotness! I hope you continue this, it has so much potential for both guilty pleasure sexiness and a pretty great character-study story, especially with the hint of Jasper's mixed motivations. More!
Author's Response: Isn't Jasper yummy and maybe just a little naughty :) Thank you for your comments, there will be some character-study and certainly more sexiness to come! Thanks.
Reviewer: mcs530 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 03:36 AM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.
This REALLY needs more chapters--I'd love to see what happens next, both with Edward and Jasper. That kind of intimacy, even without touching, is bound to have an effect on everyone. Anyway, great job and I'll look forward to more!!!
Author's Response: There will be definitely be consequences. Thanks for reading, I'll be posting more soon!
Reviewer: elphabacy35 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 03:21 AM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.
There is interest in more!! From me at least!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll definitely be adding more soon. I appreciate the encouragement.
Reviewer: ShesDiabolical (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2008 02:57 AM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.
Okay, so this was AMAZING!! please please PLEASE tell me your thinking about extending this.....first of all, it would be an AMAZING edwardxbella fic with the control and thing, and on the other side it would be an even better JASPER BELLA fic!!!! aaahhhh I've never even considered this side of his powers...kindav like a darker side of Jasper. I LOVE IT!! Can you tell?? lol, please update soon. I'm waiting kindav impatiently :P
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed this. We're going to get a look at Jasper's thoughts in the next part. Stay tuned!!
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