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Reviewer: lily_zen (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 04:59 AM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

More please. ^-^

Reviewer: audpod (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 04:17 PM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

amazing!!

Reviewer: Bella de Jour (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 08:44 AM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.

I have been waiting for daaaaays! Please, we need another chapter, I love this Jasper/Bella combination.

Reviewer: concreteayngel (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 11:49 PM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

OMG! I'm totally Team Edward, but who would have thought a Jasper story could be so HOT??!! He didn't even touch her...Very original and creative, I loved it! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: justbitemeplease (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 08:03 PM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.

Wow!! That was hot! Can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 04:46 AM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

So good! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: Demosthenes (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 12:46 PM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

This is a seriously twisted situation, but you've handled it well. You've built a plausible, and yes, heartbreaking dilemma, with an even more heartbreaking solution.

I find it fascinating when fics explore the barely-managed darkest side of Edward. It's so easy to forget that yes, he is a killer, despite what his heart wants and needs. The very possessive nature of his love for Bella makes this an even more difficult story to read, but, I must say, I'm curious as hell to see how it ends.
Thanks for going the unconventional route.

Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 08:12 AM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

I really enjoyed seeing more of how Alice and Edward came to this decision. of how they could help Bella without there being casualties. I do have to admit, the Mike Newton senario was funny and disturbing all at the same time. Great work and I'm looking forward to more!

Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 05:31 PM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

I am so impressed that each different POV actually brings something new to the story. Too often, it seems like different POV's are just rehashing the same stuff...that isn't the case here.

Reviewer: morgan_taggart (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 01:10 PM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

this was fantastic! i love the whole jazz/bella thing beyond belief.
don't get me wrong, i effing LOVE edward but jazz is so mysterious and sexy. i love the other side of the coin! keep writing, its stunning work!
:D

Reviewer: GiveUsAKiss413 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 04:38 AM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

This is great, I love the plot and pacing.

Well done.

Reviewer: twilightjie (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 12:15 AM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

i pity edward :(

Reviewer: awesome_stuff (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 03:31 PM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

ok I'm just going to say it. I HATE the whole jazz/bella thing. I don't want to sound mean witch i am right now but i'm all team Edward and nothing else

Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2008 03:21 PM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

You know, I keep trying to rationalize this in a way that would actually allow Edward to do this, cause I just can't see it - but then I realized that I just don't give a crap because the story is awesome on it's own!
Keep it up, I am loving it!!

Reviewer: Bella de Jour (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 12:42 PM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.

I do hope you will not take so looong for another chapter, been checking every day for a month now!!! Great story by the way, Love it!

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 11:54 AM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

I liked getting more to the backstory. It was super fun to see all the various horrific futures.

Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 11:52 AM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

Gah! It's so good. I've gotta say, I like that Edward's control would have finally shattered in this story...it always bugs me when his control is too perfect. Yes, he would never want to hurt Bella, but the fact that the lust would win out despite his better intentions is....hot. That's prolly a little sick. Oh well.

Reviewer: KatieBelle (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 10:00 AM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

Yay! I squeed a little when I saw your update! hehe
I feel so bad for poor Edward. There really isn't anything left for him to do! It was nice seeing all the options, though. I was really wondering how so many people would end up getting hurt with any other course of action. Can't wait to see how the story progresses from here, it's fantabulous. :)

Reviewer: valeri29 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 09:29 AM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

I really feel sorry for everyone concerned here. There is no perfect solution in this case. Feelings are going to be hurt no matter what. But I really love how you're telling this story and can't wait for your next update.

Reviewer: TwilightChicky (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 09:07 AM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

I'm really enjoying this. It's an interesting look at what could have happened if Alice saw Edward had lost control and needed to find another option of making her happy. I'm looking forward to more, hopefully soon.

Reviewer: obsidian (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 09:04 AM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

this is really quite original. i can't tell you how excited i was when i saw the update. onward and upward.

Reviewer: lambTOslaughter (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 07:45 AM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

I think this story is great. I'm partial to the Jasper / Bella stuff anyways but the way you did it was awesome. The twist you took with his ability was very creative and I was impressed with your knowledge of science and anatomy with all that hormone stuff! The whole fact that Jasper never actually touches Bella was what made the story so hot. And I love the chapter titles: "Look, Bella, no hands." LOL. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 07:35 AM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

I just can't imagine having to endure your brother using his mind powers to get your girlfriend off...I love this story...it is definately original!

Reviewer: TwilightFiction (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 06:49 AM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

Very interesting twist! I liked the explanations of all the bad things that could happen if they didn't solve this problem. It made the story seem a little more believable. Great job! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 06:38 AM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It

That was INTENSE. I'm glad you finally updated! I feel so bad for poor Edward. And what about poor Bella! I really hope that you can develop perhaps some middle ground between Edward and Bella. And I cannot wait for more! WOO-HOO!

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