Reviewer: kara1977 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2014 04:46 AM · On: Money Can't Buy Jasper Love
I like this story. Thank you very mach
Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2013 06:23 AM · On: Money Can't Buy Jasper Love
Naughty Naughty... This is gonna definitely get uglier before it gets better. It has been quite some time since this story updated & I hope you haven't given up on it. I will keep it in my faves just as it has been awaiting your return. I hope all is well.
Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 02:54 PM · On: Begwards Can't Be Choosers
Oh Edward....that is only gonna make matters worse.
Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 02:42 PM · On: Ignorance is Bella
Oh Jasper ... you beautiful creature... you just began a shit-ton of unnecessary drama.
Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 02:34 PM · On: But Edward, Someone's Got To Do It
What a position for Edward tobe in.
Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 02:20 PM · On: It's a Dirty Job, Jasper
Oh Boy....
Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 02:04 PM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.
Wow! Who the hell needs toyswhen you can have Jasper huh? *sigh* if only......
Reviewer: Tanya71 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2012 06:36 AM · On: Money Can't Buy Jasper Love
When will the next chapter be posted. I am addicted to your writing...
Reviewer: GeezerWench (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2012 11:13 PM · On: Money Can't Buy Jasper Love
Oh my. That was, eh, uh, "steamy".
But, besides the subject matter (which was rather intriguing), that was written well.
Reviewer: ahommel (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 12:50 AM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.
Please finish this story! I can't wait to read what happens next. :)
Reviewer: Team Jasper (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2011 06:03 AM · On: Money Can't Buy Jasper Love
You have such a dirty mind ;) I wish Jasper would visit me ... *sigh* ... Well update soon, I'm waiting for Jasper to get his share :D :D
Can't stand Edward somehow :/
Reviewer: TLMORRIS (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2011 12:39 PM · On: Begwards Can't Be Choosers
This storyline is wonderful...so much potential to go in so many directions
Reviewer: Squirt (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 07:09 AM · On: Money Can't Buy Jasper Love
You are an evil woman with a very dirty mind! I love it!
Reviewer: bella m kasprzak (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2011 07:51 AM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.
please update!!! finish this story!!
Reviewer: bella m kasprzak (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 04:23 PM · On: Money Can't Buy Jasper Love
that would be awesome if jasper visited me!!! this story is really good anxious for what happens next please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: bella m kasprzak (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 03:36 PM · On: Begwards Can't Be Choosers
keeping this story for the future
Reviewer: bella m kasprzak (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 03:01 PM · On: It's a Dirty Job, Jasper
omg
Reviewer: bella m kasprzak (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 02:31 PM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.
oh my that was amazing i definitely think jasper could manipulate like that it is not too far fetched!
Reviewer: Crunch (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 12:25 PM · On: Look, Bella. No Hands.
You have to add more!!! Pretty pleeeeeeeeeeaze!!!
Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 04:26 AM · On: Money Can't Buy Jasper Love
I sure hope you are about to update this really soon.......pretty please...
Reviewer: Mrs_Rug (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 12:18 AM · On: Money Can't Buy Jasper Love
Possibly Jasper could help Edward out in the shower the same way he has helped Bella?
Reviewer: Draven Angelis (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2011 11:57 AM · On: Money Can't Buy Jasper Love
Ye Gods... *exhales* Girl, that was intense. I am so loving this. Excellent work. *needs more to get her Jasper fix*
Reviewer: furiousstrength (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2011 03:49 AM · On: Money Can't Buy Jasper Love
I'm loving the story but I think you have to many different POVs going on because the story is getting really repetitive from chapter to chapter. I like hearing everyone's point of view but by the time I'm done I've read 6 chapters and barely 8-12 hours of the day is passed and the story has repeated 6 times. I don't know, maybe hold off on showing every point of view for every situation and only keep it to one or two. Maybe combine two points of view to one chapter. I luckily read this after all 6 chapters were posted but I can see it being really frustrating to have to wait a week or two just to read the same thing from a different pov, then another week or two to do it a third time. Honestly, I think Bella's is the least interesting pov as she has the least internal and inter-personal conflict and she knows the least about what is going on. I could see maybe doing a scene from her pov in a breif fashion and then doing a more in depth version in Jasper or Edwards pov in the same chapter.
I don't hate Jasper and find this darker side of him interesting and hot. He didn't want to be in this situation and Alice/Edward knew what they were throwing him into and what could come of it. It's a bit hypocritical of Edward to be mad at Bella. She has no clue what is going on and he pushed this on her with no explaination on his part, walked out the door and just told her he was a-okay with it. She's not versed in their abilities.
I can't wait to see where this goes! I know you've got some stuff going on so it maybe a bit before you update so I've got this and your other story favorited for when you do come back! <3
Reviewer: carebear31374 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 10:52 PM · On: Begwards Can't Be Choosers
really enjoyed this story - would like to have seen it continue - would love to read anything your wrote - great job :)
Reviewer: carebear31374 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 09:33 PM · On: It's a Dirty Job, Jasper
LOVED the JPOV - wow that was really hard for him. i guess they saw his reaction coming - poor edward and alice - but no other choice :(
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