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Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

that was kinda hot.....it could of been longer though

Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

Woah.This was awesome, in the true sense of the word.
I loved the whole structure of it, really easy to read, but also really full of everything. You did a really good job, you're a great writer.

Reviewer: Pigpen (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2008 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, that was amazing, very sensual! I wish there were more to read. I may just feel disappointed at Stephenie's portrayal of the event (if it happens). You definately need to add to this, especially if it doesn't happen in the BD.

Reviewer: Meg (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2008 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

Unorthodox grammar emphasizes the inability of language to truly describe a moment such as this one. Short, sweet and very well done!

Reviewer: RunsWithVampires (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2008 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

I know I am his and he is mine and this is the Limbo - not Hell.. Hell is forever - to pass through for him, for us, forever...
I love how you say this is the limbo not hell.

Reviewer: silly bj (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2008 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love it, I just wish it was a little longer. I need more.
Thanks for the French lesson,"la petite mort"~the small death~ what an apropos way to discribe an orgasm.
My favorite line:
'He is not ready. Not yet. Each time he kisses me I hope... imagine... prepare... desire... wait... want...'

Reviewer: JenWordSong (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2008 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

I've been meaning to read this story for a while and I'm glad I did so. What a sensual, erotic portrayal that was. And guh, the art that goes with it? Intensely sexy. Thanks for linking it. Nice piece of work.

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