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Reviewer: Twirob (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2016 02:36 AM · On: Fighting Heaven

thank you for putting the effort into this little o/s it's very enjoyable ;D

Reviewer: silvaneous (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 06:07 AM · On: Fighting Heaven

i really like what you wrote here. how edward feels her dying and compares it to before when he 'thought' she was dead - that's a really good contrast. and the pain he feels is so real.

Reviewer: colorado (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 08:56 PM · On: Fighting Heaven

it is very good.

Reviewer: Mystrelle (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 01:56 PM · On: Fighting Heaven

This was wonderful!! Please write more!

Reviewer: colorado (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 10:25 PM · On: Fighting Heaven

you did very well with this one shot. the characters are like the SM told them

Reviewer: saroya (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Fighting Heaven

Great Story,

I really enjoyed reading it, you have explored into edward's mind in great depth. Very moving, heart breaking.

Thank you

Reviewer: nurya (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 05:22 AM · On: Fighting Heaven

I really liked it.

Very Edward in my humble opinion.

Thank you.

Reviewer: banana_sensei (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Fighting Heaven

Awesome! I thought the EPOV was great. Very consistent with Midnight Sun and his dialogue throughout the books.

Reviewer: TraciSnow (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 02:56 PM · On: Fighting Heaven

Great story! I feel like you really got into Edward's head. I could feel his pain and loss, his guilt, his love and excitement over Renesmee, and especially his love for Bella. I've read lots of stories from Edward's pov regarding this particular scene and I feel like yours is definitely one of the best and most true. Thanks again!
Traci
P.S. there was only one problem I had... Edward kept referring to Bella as Isabella Swan, and since he was so excited after the wedding and during the honeymoon, I think he would have thought of her as Cullen...or at the least Isabella Swan Cullen.

Reviewer: solecito (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Fighting Heaven

it was great can you please keep writing.

Reviewer: hush (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 08:58 AM · On: Fighting Heaven

i just loved all the emotions you had displayed for edward in this shot.......hats off to you ..............:)

Reviewer: psjenkins (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 11:23 AM · On: Fighting Heaven

I think you did very well. Especially liked the emotional content and the commitment Edward makes to Bella that seemed to be lacking in the series. I will be looking for more from you.

Reviewer: Bruiser (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:14 AM · On: Fighting Heaven

The detail you've captured! Right down to Bella's head tossing back and forth with Edward's life-support efforts! And I loved that you ran with Edward's thoughts about Jacob giving up and leaving when he thought Bella was dead. Those were thoughts I had as I read SM's version, too. "Who really loves her here?!" It was obvious. :-)

Fabulous job...and I just finished Deliverence in Jasper's POV...these make nice companion pieces.

Your story was marvelous. Edward is very much in character, and definitely his final thoughts make sense in terms of how much he accepted Bella's change after the fact.

Reviewer: rkelekoma (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 02:40 AM · On: Fighting Heaven

i liked it. i cant wait to read more of your stuff

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 02:37 AM · On: Fighting Heaven

I like this, I really absolutely hated not having Edward's POV on several things in BD. I love how hard he fought for her. The only part that I felt was jarring and kind of took me out of the "mood" of the story was when Edward said he felt and (kind of implied) heard her soul being ripped from heaven. I just didn't like that part very much. I would rather have seen it where he felt her soul coming back to him. Then he could have gone on about having ripped her from her place in heaven to have her here by his side, etc. Do you see what I mean? It's one thing to have us accept and believe that Edward could feel her soul leaving his, and his heart trying to follow, but it's another altogether for us to have to accept that he felt her in heaven, if that makes sense? Not sure. It's kind of a fine point, I know. I'm just that way. :)

Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: babsnorwood (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 12:23 AM · On: Fighting Heaven

I really enjoyed this, it gave words to the way I envisioned this scene happening. I hope you continue through the rest of Bella's transformation and how Edward felt during it and how he felt about Renesmee as well.

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 05:00 PM · On: Fighting Heaven

I loved it, I really love Edwards POV and I think you nailed it! Can't wait to read more, please continue!

Reviewer: lido (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 01:48 PM · On: Fighting Heaven

I agree. This is a good story. Keep updating!

Reviewer: jenbeau (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Fighting Heaven

That was wonderful!

Reviewer: muggle1983 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 01:03 PM · On: Fighting Heaven

Wow. I can't believe you haven't got reviews on this before. Its pitch perfect. If the rest of breaking Dawn had been this way. Edwards perspective instead of Jacobs it would probably be my most favorite book. You've hit on the moment. This is where Edward grows up, this is where they really become one. Awesome Job!!!

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