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Reviewer: dbg (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Wedding
awesome!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Although, they don't remember it, I didn't see any reason not to show it.
Reviewer: shanno716 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Wedding
That was amazing. I loved every last detail.
Author's Response: Thanks! There are more coming soon! These two are just too easy for me to love!
Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 3: The Birthday Party
ouch!
Author's Response: She's so much fun, isn't she?
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 3: The Birthday Party
I don't think what Tanya felt was true love. I think Edward was Hot, a Dr and an excellent lover and she wanted that more than she wanted his heart and soul. If she could brush off the rejection so easily then I can't see that she loved him the way Bella and Edward loved each other. Sorry, I still don't like Mz Tanya. LOL It's like having a pet snake. You never know when they'll strike at you. Viper...
LOL *hugs*
Joanie
Author's Response: I think Tanya loved Edward in her own way, just like the canon Tanya, but it was nothing like the love shared between Edward and Bella. When she realizes that in the hospital, it is the impetus for her giving up. Thank you and I am so glad I have you as a reader!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 2: Alice's Wedding
The begining brought back horrible memories for me. My mother in law didn't like anything I had planned for my wedding to her son. ANYTHING! LOL Not the church, the dress, the reception... ugh. Anyway, I felt bad for Esme because sometimes as parents we speak before we think and if you don't have all of the facts, you should learn to HUSH! Hopefully, all will work out when Bella wakes. very very nice. :)
Joanie
Author's Response: I am glad that you also recognize that sometimes we fail as parents and say things we do not mean. I think we have all been guilty of it a time or two. We should hush, but sometimes the link between the brain and the mouth gets... broken. Thank you!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Wedding
That was funny and romantic and wonderful all wrapped up in one big bang! LOL Even if they didn't know each other more than 2 days, who would argue that that was a beautiful honeymoon night! That was GREAT!! 2 Thumbs up! More if I had them. LOL
Joanie
Author's Response: Thank you! And now you know the rest of the story (or at least how it all started!)
Reviewer: Lisalou (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 3: The Birthday Party
Very good. I can't wait for the next update on the regular story. The Derby was so muddy this year. I hope you enjoyed it. I'm from Louisville, but moved to Jacksonville Fl. Each year all my Ky friends and family have a Derby party. It was a lot of fun. No rain here. Our horse came in 3rd.
I really enjoy your writing style.
Author's Response: Thank you! I update the regular story every Thursday, so you don't have long to wait. Derby is always fun around here but we avoid the Downs as much as possible all weekend.
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 2: Alice's Wedding
Oh Poor Esme, thats exactly how I thought she would react. Loved it as usual!
Author's Response: I am glad that it worked within the confines of the story as I've laid it out. Thank you!
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 2: Alice's Wedding
It is most definitely what I expected from Esme. I never thought that they would actually try to tell Edward what to do. Even if he had married Tanya, why would it be ok?
Author's Response: It wouldn't have been okay if he had married Tanya but they recognized that their reactions had not been appropriate or well-timed. Tanya was a disaster from the word go.
Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 2: Alice's Wedding
I actually think Esme and Carlise should pay the kids a visit. They screwed things up- with Edward, but the need to do more than call now. But I am not driving this very fun fic, so I will be quiet now. lol. Thanks for the outtake- this was the one I wanted to read. nancy
Author's Response: Thank you, Nancy. I cannot spoil and tell you when they are coming but they will make at least 2 trips to Chicago in the remainder of the fic.
Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Wedding
The poor couple doesn't even remember it. Glad we got to! Thanks
Author's Response: Thanks! I am writing a scene right now related to this and it is interesting to say the least.
Reviewer: leigh1080 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 2: Alice's Wedding
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Lisalou (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 2: Alice's Wedding
This was good. I'm glad I got to see her side of it.
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it! Thank you!
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 2: Alice's Wedding
That's exactly how I would have thought esme to act. This whole thing is so sad still : ( poor esme... Poor Bella... Edward is still an asshole lol
Author's Response: I am glad that it lived up to expectations! This is a very sad period but there is a light at the end of the tunnel.
Reviewer: tinywit3 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 2: Alice's Wedding
this was perfect!!! if i ask i will receive.... lol.. i just asked for esme pov and BAM!!! i get one!!! lol. great chapter!!
tiny
Author's Response: Of course! Just for you, tiny! I am glad you liked it!
Reviewer: FloraLoves (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 2: Alice's Wedding
I love the outtakes, I really do, but it's such a tease when I don't get the next piece of the story.
By the way, you will have one very unhappy reader if Bella and Edward don't get back together...so they better.
Otherwise, I love this story!!
Keep writing so I can keep avoiding my homework.
Author's Response: I am an HEA girl all the way so don't you worry! The next chapter is already with my beta and you should have it Thursday!
Thank you so much and don't avoid too much. It will catch up with you at some point!
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Wedding
i always wanted to know how that night went...now i know and im glad i got to see it..
Author's Response: I hope it lived up to your expectations. I sure had a lot of fun writing it!
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Wedding
HEHEHEHE awesome and the best part was that neither remembered lol thats kinda sucky not remembering your wedding night though. Great job letting them let loose!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hoped that you would like it!
Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Wedding
awesome outtake! I'd love to hear Alice's inner dialogue when she finds the pictures. She's such a character!
Author's Response: I might just have to do that for you--it would be a mini outtake! Thanks!
Reviewer: hmregan13 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Wedding
So glad to know what happened on their wedding night! It doesn't seem like they used a condom- remind me, is Bella on the pill? Just wondering if this will become an issue later....
Author's Response: She is on some form of birth control--it will be addressed later! Thank you so much for the review! I am glad you liked it!
Reviewer: tinywit3 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Wedding
LOOOOOVE IT!!!!!
Reviewer: tinywit3 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Wedding
LOOOOOVE IT!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: tinywit3 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Wedding
Wow!!! love it!!! so that's how they ended up married..lol. great outtake..
tiny
ooo i was just thinking, since your last chapter in your main story brought tears to my eyes. i was wondering if u could do esme Pov of when she overheard that edward had gotten married. just a thought. lol...please dont leave me hanging tooo long for tge main story. i just loooooove it!!!!
thanks again for this great outtake. =-)
Author's Response: I love you, Tiny! I actually just wrote it today and will be posting it tomorrow.
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