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Reviewer: Ambushed (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Truth in Expressions
OK, I think you are now caught up on here to where I last read on FF. I am so excited for the next chapter!! I will try to wait patiently....but I'm not really good at doing that!! ;) I LOVE this story, I NEED to know about Edward's past, and I KNOW it is him that is giving Bella the sparks. Even Though it is only while she is asleep. Soon it will happen while she is awake. I just know it will!
Reviewer: MagGrrl (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Thankful
That chapter made my heart smile :-)
Reviewer: MagGrrl (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 13 - White Flag
You seriously know how to string a reader along...you are the queen of cliffies!!! Great chapter as always!
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 11 - This is Bad
Nice, scary cliffie. Hope Edward finds her.
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 11 - This is Bad
Scary! I hope someone finds her (maybe a bronze-haired adonis). I am glad you update so quickly, I hope you continue to do that :)
Reviewer: ikinz (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 11 - This is Bad
can I encourage you to post quickly again?!?!? LOL. Will Edward find Bella.......
Reviewer: MagGrrl (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 11 - This is Bad
You are so lucky that you posted the next chapter right away! I would have hunted you down! How could you do that to Bella? LOL...great job!!!!!
Reviewer: White Sands (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 11 - This is Bad
NOOOO! I wasn't expecting that to happen. Edward will find her, right? Right?
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 11 - This is Bad
Normally I would be angry for the clif hanger but since you generously Update alot its okay. I love it keep goin.
Reviewer: elfarmy (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 11 - This is Bad
i am loving this story. update soon please.
Reviewer: Jamiejo7984 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 11 - This is Bad
WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...would you do this to us!! Holy shit.... SHE NEEDS TO FEAL SPARKS!!! (sorry for the yelling)
Reviewer: wishfulthinking (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 11 - This is Bad
More, more, more!
Reviewer: shadyrenee323 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 11 - This is Bad
OMG!!!!!!!!! I Can't Get Enough of this FIC!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: White Sands (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Dinner is Served
Not a fan of Bella kissing Embry, but of course I understand. Glad that Edward is letting his barrier down a little, and I am dying to know what he wanted to say to her. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: MagGrrl (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Dinner is Served
I have to say that I am completely enjoying this story. I look forward to your coming chapters. I actually get excited when I get an e-mail that you've posted. You are one of the best writers I've found on this website (at that's saying alot because there is a lot of talented people on here). I love your Edward, he is a lot like SM's Edward...very complicated and beautiful! Great job so far! I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Dinner is Served
Bipolar disorder--did not see that coming. Excellent chapter. I like how the barriers between B/E are slowly breaking down.
Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Dinner is Served
I trust you with Edward's heart! I'm really enjoying reading this story and am looking forward to seeing how they both heal.
Reviewer: Venus (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Dinner is Served
Okay I looooove how much you update. Two parts in one day? The only thing that could top this would be...three parts in one day. ;) I do have to say I was grossed out by the kiss with Embry. Especially since she opened up to Edward and he's coming out of his shell and overall their relationship is progressing. I understand that she doesn't think Edward would ever like her like that so I get where she's coming from but I just wish Edward and Bella could get together already! Update again soon!
Author's Response: hehehe LIke I said, beta has two chapters! I understand the ick factor - but you're just gonna have to trust me a little. As for Bella and Edward ... without giving too much away, I'm just going to have to ask you to be patient.
Reviewer: Jamiejo7984 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Dinner is Served
YES!!! Drama!! Love the drama! The kiss was...cute. Like you: Team Edward...all the way. I really like your Jacob. :D I have to say...I'm always sitting on edge waiting for another chapter of this story. <3
Author's Response: Thanks! I just sent two chapters to the beta - its a cliffie/resolution combo. Enjoy!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Dinner is Served
I thought the dinner party was great. It gave her hope that her and Edward could be friends. I don't think there is anything wrong with what is going on between her and Embry, everyone needs some kind of dating experience. Its not like she's in love with him.
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Dinner is Served
I really love it.Its awesome. I Think that something really tragic happened to Edward (family) and that is why he became a police officer.He definetly cant be a vampire his eyes are green(or is he?).They arent jumping into a relationship (if you call that a relationship) She is dating around (with one guy) but its great and its developing fantasticly,your writing in phenomenol And I cant wait to see what you have in store for us next. -Twilightx28
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes - there is tragedy in the story on both sides. Yes - this is an All Human story, no vampires here. Just hot human, green eyed, Edward! Thanks again!
Reviewer: stargirl (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Unexpected
Jacob planned it!!!! ok, and the hint was: "Actually, I did know where my mom was, but that was another story for another time. " right?
Author's Response: yup ... good catch!
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Dinner is Served
Are you kidding me 10 chapters already, you really are the best!! I love that Emmett told a kid to ‘suck it up and take it like a man’ that just about killed me!!!
Author's Response: I love writing Emmett - and I was cracking myself up with the mental picture that came along with that line. I'm glad it got to you as well!
Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Peace Offerings
You know that I love it!! And THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for updating so fast, I think you are my favorite author right now!!!
Reviewer: White Sands (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Peace Offerings
So sad, but beautifully written.
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