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Reviewer: Demize (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 11:Plight

How weird that edward get protective off her when he is involved with someone else regardless to the fact that he had not touched her.. Also why does it seem that bella has no other friend outside that family???? Alice is stuck in the middle of them...

Reviewer: Demize (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2011 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 11:Plight

Well is this a good thing that bella sell the last asset she has to her parents?? And what is up with edward and his need to drag her out of places what is his deal ??

Reviewer: GangstaT (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 1: Prologue

heyy i love this story!! jus wondering whether you are still working on it or have stopped? x

Reviewer: honorata (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 11:Plight

can.t wait for the next chapters

Reviewer: lettheobsessionbegin (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 11:Plight

I am getting sick and tired of Edward dragging Bella from rooms! Surely she has bruises on her wrists by now?!

Stupid possesiveward!

I'm going to make a guess now: Edward is somehow forced into pretending to love Tanya, maybe for the company's benefit...  

Reviewer: Lowana (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 11:Plight

Oh what an exciting story!!!  I love this! Please hurry up and update!!!

Reviewer: liquidtopazeyes (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2010 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 11:Plight

there's more on ff?...yay!

Reviewer: azwhalestail (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 11:Plight

GReat story anxious to see more

Reviewer: fanpire17 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 1: Prologue

i love this story. you should update soon because i cant wait any longer!!

Reviewer: raighn-on-me (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 11:Plight

Oh my where do i start?! This fic is original, gripping, full of fantastic characterisation, sizzling hot and addictive to read! I am on the edge of my seat wondering how the story reaches the climax mentioned at the beginning. Wonderful writing on your part, im your new biggest fan! Please update soon x

Reviewer: CullenDreamer (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 10: Favour

You've got me confused on your timeline.  You keep using four months since Bella's graduation party and her return from Dartmouth.  But unless there was a delay from the time she graduated highschool and the time of her party, that should have been late May/early June.  So four months later would only be September, October at the VERY latest.  Yet you have her returning for the Christmas holidays.  ?????????????

Other than your weirdly monthed world, (and the occasional odd phrasing) your story is a fun read.


Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 11:Plight

Is Bella his toy? That he can yank everywhere? Play with for half an hour when he chooses? That has to do what he says? He says he sees the woman, but he treats her like a child. Trust the people that love you. Fair enough, but you’d think the people that love you would explain more! Grrr!

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 11:Plight

EEEEkk i totally get that bella needs to protect herself and her assets...however i see how edward could be hurt...he cant hold this against her thought because he has held stuff from her.,,,they didnt inform her till the day of about tanya so where was her consideration in the matter.,,,i hope edward figures out who did the threats and who hurt her parents,,,,i want them to end up together and i want the cullens to be a strong family filled with love and all that at the end.,,,,,i hope that everything isnt destroyed.,,,,great story lots of mystery and intrigue

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 10: Favour

ok i think edward doesnt really have a clue as to what is going on for real.,,,i think carlisle knows a hell of a lot more then he is saying.,,,,why is he pushing so hard for tanya when he knows edward loves bella?  i think its for reasons to do with what charlie was working on and of course edward was to young back then to know anything about it and the case could have been hidden by the time edward started working there...,,business wise its smarter for bella and edward to be together because then it would just be the cullen family pie and no one else.,,,i dont get carlisles business sense here.  I think either the denalis are behind charlie and renee;s murder or  carlisle...i know alice and edward are innocent in this,,,emmett too.  why esme would go along with this knowing how much her sons happiness should mean to her confuses me...,,,,and why wouldnt edward tell bella of tanya from the beginning,,,to me all i would think of now is that the cullens wanted to take the company away from bella and tanya and edwards marriage would do that,.,,,edward should really think long and hard about things before he loses bella forever.,,,,how could he hurt her like he has knowing she was everyhting to him growing up...why is he different now? 

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 9 : Fracture

Oh my god....that is brutal...i get why he doesnt want to sleep with her as she is a virgin and he is with the tramp tanya but still how could he mess with her knowing he is with tanya.,,,,how is he to be redeemed at this point??

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 8: Turn

i honestly dont know what to feel.,,i am not mad at bella at all but i worry she will do something stupid like give up the firm or her shares to please edward or to get away from edward,,,,i am curious as to why carlisle and charlie dont have 50/50 shares in the company...i am glad that edward came for bella because he needed to step up especially after that,,,howecer i am worried about jake being in the story,,,i am sick of him most of the time lol unless he ends up being married or gay then its ok...

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 7:Evade

This chapter made me could he? how could he ask her to sell her percent to a company when he knows he is fucking the woman who wants in the ground floor?  how could he deceieve bella like that? Does he not love her at all?  i remember the prologue and how the merger was part of tanya and edwards engagement and bella goes off to work for another company...does he screw her out of her shares? trick her into selling? if that is the case then he should never be forgiven!!! ever!!!  how could he marry someone else that is part of a bad company and get in bed with bella at the same time leading her on?  you have to redeem him if he is to have her in the end...i am curious to see how.....

On the bonus this is a very well written story,,,,usually i hate bella and now all i feel is sympathy for her

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 6: Flight

I would be pissed!  after 4 months he wants to kiss her.,,,what was he waiting for? why didnt he find her at dartmouth then and do it instead of not talking for 4 months?? i get that he left a gift but that is no excuse.,,,,WTF?  are you trying to make us hate him? i have never disliked edward till this story,,,,i hope he is redeemed soon

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 11:Plight


I don't think I've ever been so sad to be caught up on a fic! I very much look forward to more!

Thanks for posting - I'm totally hooked!

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 10: Favour

This just gets better and better! (As well as more and more complicated!)

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 9 : Fracture

Stupid man! Next!

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 5: Flicker

ouch.,...poor girl..,.i understand why he yelled at her,,,he wasnt disgusted with her but himself and he was freaking out but still that had to hurt a 17 yr old girl that hasnt had any sexual experience and the first time she does is with someone she has loved and looked up to her whole life,,,to have him treat her that way had to hurt so bad!....this is angsty wow....i hope you dont make edward too hated or ppl wont like him enough to want bella to choose him lol

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 4:Heat

wow that was intense....the way he was at the club,,,how could he not realize he liked her,,,,and now wow...that is highly to answer that one,,,,

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 3: Warmth

awwww...i am curious how they can go from that to lovers as the case may be...interesting so far

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 2: Frozen

Such a sad way to see your parents die..,,,,an eight year old should have to go through that.,,,this story is so sad already,,,,love edward in this chapter!

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