This was such a GREAT story!  I was really unsure about it but I decided to give it a shot and I am so glad that I did.  You did a fantastic job!  I would recommend this to anyone who reads the reviews first to give this one a shot.

awesome this is such a creative story!

Enjoyed the story thoroughly from start to finish.  Actually was very upset with Edward through most of it with his attacking Bella at every turn.  Understandably his trust issues were on high alert, but everything about her was totally different than Jane.  Her personal record information and historical documentation was plentiful and available easily where Jane's was like pulling teeth.  Bella had existing family nearby and in Florida.  Edward was just too stubborn to admit his first instincts were wrong to accept her.  By his actions and arguments he drove her right into the hands of the Volturi.  Granted Edward, Alice, Jasper, Emmett, and Rosalie went to rescue her in Italy along with local authorities via arrangements started with Charlie.  It pays to have a dad who is Chief of Police of Forks with contacts that spread throughout.  All the evidence they discovered of the crimes of Volturi's past, the current caper where they wanted Bella to kill the top officials, and her kidnapping will keep them all locked up for a very long time.  Happy ending with Edward and Bella realizing that they are soul mates and can share thoughts and talk to each other mentally.  Reading Edward's POV made him even more of a jerk than the original story, especially when he knows he's being a jerk, but continues being one.  Always taking it up to the next level, pushing her a little more to make her break to reveal the truth.  Bella isn't what she appeared to be.  Too bad he didn't realize Bella was exactly what she seemed to be.

loved it!

Very intriguing plot. And you are a wonderful writer! Very descriptive! Referred by cyrabear

I've really enjoyed reading EPOV.  I'm a little sorry to see that this is the end.  However, it is a good place to stop (I totally understand that it was meant to me a long outtake).  There is a sort of "and the rest is history" feel about it. 

it's hard to take sides when your know what happend to each of them. But Edward did go overboard.

everything she does just makes him more and more suspicious........

Love EPOV!! Thanks for the outakes.

Thank you!

Just want to say, I loved this story!

I loved how you gave Emmett the gift of "genius"...he's normally portrayed in fan fiction as a dumb yet funny and loveable jock and I don't think he's been given enough credit! :) Also, having Rosalie have the ability to astral-project fit very well with her persona! As vain as she is, it only makes sense that she has the ability to have herself duplicated! Plus, you did an excellent job with the other characters and I think it's great that Edward and Bella took time to build true love.

Finally, I want to THANK YOU for writing in past tense...it aggravates me to no end to read an amazing summary, and then not be able to get through the first chapter because the author chose to write it in present tense. It just irks me and is a huge pet peeve for me. It's refreshing to read a great story, with great characters, by a great author. You have an excellent talent in writing and I hope to read many more from you soon!

Wow...just wow.  Excellent story!  I just found it and read the whole thing.  You are a great writer!