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Reviewer: Marlebelle (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 09:25 PM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights - Chapter 5 - Sheep in Wolf's Clothing

really like the Jacob comforting Bella scene, very sweet. Great description of how she is feeling/thinking. crazy dream ^_^ loved it though...........

Reviewer: Marlebelle (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 09:20 PM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights - Chapter 4 -- The Surrogate

I really like how you have written the Cullen's a little colder, more structured and controlled, as the probably would have to be so survive and not get caught out. like the homage to Breaking Dawn, with the whole Jacob substituting thing. Not sure that Jacob would have taken it so well, Jacob pre phasing maybe but not post I don't think.

Reviewer: Marlebelle (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 09:15 PM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights - Chapter 3 - Killing Her Softly

This is more how I though he would feel and think about Bella before the she "changed". though I do kinda feel sorry for him as well, internal battle and all that.

Reviewer: Marlebelle (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 09:12 PM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights - Chapter 2 Female Trouble

Love this bit, I think Bella's subconcious is telling her something "Cognitive dissonance... Edward's hands and mouth were always so cold, but this dream had been almost unbearably hot and steamy"

Reviewer: Marlebelle (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 09:04 PM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights - Chapter 1 Jacob's Need

*pull's mind out of gutter* poor Jacob, I'm sure someone around here can help relieve his tension ^_^

Reviewer: Marlebelle (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 08:58 PM · On: Prologue Part 2 Sam/Leah

Wow, that was a pretty full on chap.

Reviewer: Marlebelle (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 08:57 PM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights -- Prologue Part 1

Oooh!!! Sam and Leah, I like this twosome.........

Reviewer: jam148 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 08:20 PM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights - Chapter 7 -- Rivers and Tides

All Done!!!!

Author's Response:
Your lemon was sent earlier today using your contact info on your profile here. Maybe check to see if your current email is different than the one listed here on Twilighted.

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:28 PM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights - Chapter 7 -- Rivers and Tides

I'm all done, I'm looking forward to the out take1 :)

Dixie

Author's Response:
One lemon, coming up!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:24 PM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights - Chapter 2 Female Trouble

I think it's ahoot that Bella's sex dream was about Jacob and not Eddie! lol

Dixie

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:11 PM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights - Chapter 1 Jacob's Need

God he has it bad for Bella, i hope you make all his fantacies come true! ;)

Dixie

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Prologue Part 2 Sam/Leah

Wow that was so hot. I just love these two together, they are such a good match. It's nice to see Leah all happy positive feeling good about herself for once in a story!

Dixie

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 06:23 PM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights -- Prologue Part 1

Damn, I forgot how good these first few chapters were! I like Leah and Sam together.

Dixie

Reviewer: Navari (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 06:01 PM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights - Chapter 7 -- Rivers and Tides

What a great scene! You did a great job with this chapter, you make Jake and Bella seem so right together. I am looking forward to the next installment!!

Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 04:36 PM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights -- Prologue Part 1

I cant get to my lemon...can you email me at liljules@hotmail.com?

Author's Response:
Ok! I've resent more detailed instructions to your email addy. ; ))

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 01:41 PM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights - Chapter 7 -- Rivers and Tides

I have to go back and see what chapters I have review and what ones I didn't, I want that oneshot! But first i want to catch up, I don't for the life of me know how I missed your updates!

He could not control the deep, ecstatic groan that issued from his throat. It rumbled through the kitchen, and was soon joined by another, and then another. The flavor seemed to evolve and intensify as he rolled the glorious substance around in his mouth: tangy, succulent, wild, comforting; a complete and extraordinary gastronomic pleasure that infused his body with delirious intoxication.

You are so good at describing things! How you can turn eating rabit stew into a thing of sensual beauty is beyond me! If your that good with food i can't wait for the real lemons to began, I hope I have enough clean panties to change into! lol

Dixie

Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:56 AM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights - Chapter 5 - Sheep in Wolf's Clothing

So lovely!

Author's Response:
Your lemon has been sent! enjoy.... ;; ))

Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:53 AM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights - Chapter 4 -- The Surrogate

Great work!

Reviewer: missyangel87 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:17 AM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights -- Prologue Part 1

girl i definetely love you! =)

Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 07:50 PM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights - Chapter 3 - Killing Her Softly

Ah man so intense!

Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 07:38 PM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights - Chapter 3 - Killing Her Softly

Ah man so intense!

Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 07:32 PM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights - Chapter 2 Female Trouble

I cant decide how i feel about edward...so torn!

Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 07:29 PM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights - Chapter 1 Jacob's Need

So sweet and melancholy!

Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Prologue Part 2 Sam/Leah

Lemony fresh!

Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 07:25 PM · On: 1001 Jacobian Nights -- Prologue Part 1

I SOOOOO want that lemon!

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