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Reviewer: fanpire-4-life (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2012 03:51 AM · On: Part Two
I love how real this story is. A lot of the other stories that are similar to this don't feel real. Everything is too perfect and wonderful and all the right things happen. I like this one better =]
Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 07:39 AM · On: Part Two
Delicious! I loved your use of Edward's mind-reading abilities and Bella's inner psychic to slowly, awkwardly, reassure each other that they weren't just satisfying their hormones ---that they loved each other, too! This is a story I'll keep in my favorites!
Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 05:39 AM · On: Part One
That was soooo HOT! More, please!
Reviewer: sam681 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2011 12:46 PM · On: Part Two
awwww, a very sweet and sexy story.
good job.
Reviewer: Bella3268 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 10:17 AM · On: Part Two
That was wonderful !!! Do keep up the good work !!!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 01:21 AM · On: Part Two
I have to say "HOT". I really like this Edward. He appears to be very confident, experienced, and self-assured in his abilities. Inside he was just as nervous as Bella about losing her. Both afraid this would be either the beginning or the end. I liked him playing as Professor Cullen. Where can I get some extra credit homework like that with Professor Cullen?
Reviewer: ceejayruka028 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2011 11:46 PM · On: Part Two
Hot!
Reviewer: breakingdusk (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2011 04:51 AM · On: Part Two
Amazing! You should definately turn this into a long story. I would call off work to read it. ;)
Reviewer: obsessivebehaviors (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2011 09:51 PM · On: Part Two
Why not take this love story further? You have the beginnings of a great romance. They head off to college, life goes on…
I would love to read more about Edward and his back story, Bella and her insecurities, too.
Please continue on with more about this couple and their “love by the dashboard lights”, sorry had a Meatloaf Moment there.
Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 04:43 AM · On: Part One
Love you, NO. You can't pull a cliffy in the middle of a finger fuck, that's mean.
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 02:19 PM · On: Part Two
great job!
keep up the fantastic work!
Reviewer: aechorp (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 05:53 AM · On: Part Two
Great car X.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Part Two
Sorry about waiting to read both parts before reviewing, I just wanted to have both Bella and Edward's thoughts in mind. That was incredibly sexy and arousing and needless to say you did a teriffic job of telling all of us how good their first time was. In a lot of ways it was also sweet and touching, because of their mutual vulnerability. Altogether, very satisfying.
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 05:59 AM · On: Part Two
Nice. A perfectly arousing tale, without resorting to dirty.
Not much, at least. :)
And it was so tender at same time.
Good for him this Bella isn't shielded, huh?
Very good.
Reviewer: cullenetc (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 05:59 AM · On: Part Two
This was a great story. Very realistic and sexy.
Reviewer: SweetRena85 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 05:41 PM · On: Part Two
Really enjoyed your story :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for your review!
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Part Two
Great job!
Author's Response: :-D Thank you! So glad you enjoyed the story.
Reviewer: Reese1603 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 09:04 AM · On: Part Two
this was a really cute story!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 10:15 AM · On: Part Two
wow, i love this story, and the sex scenes were written perfectly. ima perv whjo knows good writing when i see it. anyway i was upset that it is only chapters and i never read one shots or 2 chapter stories so during my EB search i came across this and the summary caught my attention. im glad i didnt skip over it like i usually would. i prefer longer stories but im still upset that this isnt a full length story i like how you write edward and bella together i like how you have his ability to read people in here, i wish i could have read about the moments of them being intimate together earlier before they got to this point. you should make this into a full length story. im adding this to my favorites and you to my favorite authors. you've seriously brightened my day. i will be re-reading this and looking to see if you've written any other stories.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!!! I am also working on a Bella/Edward story titled Solar Midnight, which will be full length. The third chapter is coming soon (a matter of weeks) but as a whole, it may be moving a long more slowly, since my primary focus right now is Love Phase, my Leah Clearwater story. I will seriously consider adding a few supplemental one-shots to go with Final Destination. Perhaps Bella & Edward's first meeting, and maybe a "five years later" type of thing. I hadn't even thought of that at first, but you've given me a lot to think about. :-)
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 09:32 AM · On: Part One
damn im gonna have to read that again. loved all of it. love the role playing and the cocky edward.
Author's Response: :-D
Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 02:49 AM · On: Part Two
adorable =)
Author's Response: Thanks!!! :-)
Reviewer: DirtyAim (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 11:20 AM · On: Part Two
Awww, that was sweet and hot all at the same time! Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! That's just what I was going for. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the rating!
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Part Two
Loved it!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad!
Reviewer: nanin90 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 04:38 AM · On: Part Two
aww luv it especially cause you made seem vunerable
Author's Response: Thank you for your rating and review! I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Part Two
What a sweet, hot, sexy little story. I loved Edward and Bella steaming up the car windows, reminded me a bit about high school, hey, don't judge me! LOL :) Your little story brought back some good memories. ;) I hope you have written other stories, I'd be happy if you have and that they are more than two chapters, I'm going to check and see. If you haven't, then you should. I'm just saying I'd sure read them. :)
Author's Response: Lol. Don't worry, no judgement here. Writers are supposed to write what they know so...ahem...you get the point! Lol. Thanks so much for your rating and review. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. And, yes! I do have some other stories up on Twilighted. Love Phase and Solar Midnight. I hope you'll check them out.
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