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Reviewer: jaybean (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 36- Stand By Me

Sorry to keep this so short but I am sick.  cough...cough....

 

Loved it.  From Rob's POV we see that he is more worried about Jen and her safety than himself.

It doesn't matter how far behind you are, I will always enjoy reading this.  OK back to bed...

 

Jayme

Reviewer: emozing (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 36- Stand By Me

Oh how I had already forgotten about Mr. Robertson and Miss Ransom!!!!

I have so many unfinished fics going that I think I may put a few on the back burner until they get further along.  I want to go back and reread the ones from my "Salacious Seven."   These are my favorites.

And who cares if you are 40 chapters behind?  That just means that there is so much more to come. 

As I read this chapter, I remembered back on all the other things that you have written.  Your reverence of Rob and his life come through so well.  Each of his fans could learn from your writings.  Those that are rash and rush for immediate fulfilment are the ones that truly make him withdraw from, what I call, his true fans.  And fans like us, the ones who would observe and never interfere, are the true losers.  And that makes Rob somewhat of a loser too because he just doesn't get to feel the warmth that is truly there for him.

At times I am glad that he doesn't win awards - like last night on the People's Choice Awards.  Let them follow Zac more closely for a little while.  And yes, I am thankful for Ashley and Joe.  They have also taken away some of the limelight from he and Kristen.  Let's hope in the future that all his fans will be a little more respectful of him and his personal life.  Enjoy his talent - don't punish the man.

Sorry, I didn't really mean to go there.  But you, probably better than anyone, know my true feelings about how the fandom treats him. 

Thank you for writing RPOV.  JPOV in NTE is awesome.  But your writing of Rob in OTT is just so unprecedented for me.  Thank you again.

Can't wait for the next update.   :-D

Elaine - sparkledamnu on twitter

Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2011 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 36- Stand By Me

Am I a crazed fan? Probably. But I wouldn't scream, I'd most likely pass out. Anyway, I must be crazed to spend so much time reading fiction about him. But I love it!

Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2011 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 36- Stand By Me

loved Rob's POV on this one.  It seems that the depth of his love for Jen is sometimes overwhelming to him.  And his fear of the paps and fans is very palpable.  Can't wait for the next 40 chaps!  LOL

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2011 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 36- Stand By Me

Sometimes I feel stupid when I don't understand your Robfirmation - I'm probably only a number two fan ;-)

Poor Rob... I'll never understand why it isn't enough for people to just SEE a celebrity - why do they have to try and talk, touch, invade their little privacy. Okay, easy for me to say that, no celebrity will EVER stumble into my remote little hometown. But still.

Happy New Year to you, too! :-)

Reviewer: simplydazzled (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2011 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 36- Stand By Me

To paraphrase another line from the Beatles "And I love them!"

Your attention to detail in every aspect of your writing continues. As both your ongoing stories are at the top of my all-time favorites list, I eagerly anticipate each update. Each character, from principle to walk-through, is written in 3 dimensional technicolor. For example, the waitress in the current episode is not described in detail, however, subsequent dialogue provides a wealth of information to flesh out this secondary player. You do have a gift. Thanks so much for sharing with me and all your cyber fans.

Happy 2011, Keep your head above water.

S.D.

 

Reviewer: mamadog93 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2011 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 36- Stand By Me

So cute!  

Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2011 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 36- Stand By Me

Yay!!  What a day!  Rob on the People's Choice Awards tonight, and an update of Rob's POV!!  **doing the happy dance all day long**

Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2011 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 36- Stand By Me

A very sweet chapter.  It would be horrible to never have any down time without being bothered.

Reviewer: joss859 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 36- Stand By Me

New chapters are just as good as new Rob pictures. honestly, I'd be hard pressed to choose between the two!

A really lovely chapter, I adore Robs point of view *sigh*

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 36- Stand By Me

hammock pics???  what  where??? I am still realing over WFE photo and  video..

ah girlfriend you alwys know just what I need and just when I need it don'y you and this sweet loving did the trick...

Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 36- Stand By Me

I am so glad that, at least for now, I can read these chapters with a smile on my face and in my heart (god that sounded sappy).  I know rougher times are coming, but I am actually looking forward to hearing Rob's pov for those.  You spoil us with your awesomeness Steph!

ILY

t.

Reviewer: karin9166 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 35-And I Love Her

Love it! I NEED more of this AND, NTE :):) Thank you for sharing your talent with us!

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2010 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 35-And I Love Her

I loved this chapter, seeing Liverpool from Robs POV, I love it when we hear from him.  I love how he is constantly watching Jen and how she occupies his every thought, he truly is in love with her and needs to make her his whether it be too soon or not.

I can't wait for the Christmas and New Year chapters, shenanigans are coming up, hehehehe.

I hope you had a lovely Christmas and here's wishing you and yours a Happy New Year.

Jane x

Reviewer: diagirl01 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2010 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 28-She is Love

lol - Robert Thomas Pattinson!!!

srsly love rob in trouble - why this makes me all giggly I'll never know... and momma & daddy p - awesome!!

i want to spend christmas with the pattinson clan :)

onward and upward :)

claudia

 

Reviewer: diagirl01 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 27- Crazy Love

oh those magic words - naughty panties ;; *giggle*

and again - BEST. REUNION. EVER!!i

is it wrong that i now want to have dreams of giggling *winkwink* with rob on blue plaid? yeah, I didn't think so..

off to read some more ;0

claudia

Reviewer: diagirl01 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 26-Home

have I told you how much I love assertive rob??? he's taking names and kicking butts - mainly nick's the way it should be.. :)

and finally they are together!!! the best renunion ever!

and yes, finally leaving a review.. plus it felt right reading (or re-reading) rob and jen's christmas since it is christmas and all :0

off to read some more :)

 

claudia

 

Reviewer: emozing (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2010 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 35-And I Love Her

I can't believe I missed this update -- must have been in dreamland - duh.  So here goes ---

I love how you pick his brain and then translate into fanfiction 3D in my brain so that I can feel what he does.   I tend to believe that being female it would be much easier to write JPOV.  But not for you -- no -- you delve right into that perfect Brit bain of Rob's.  It's as though you have inner sight into his soul!

These are just a few of my favorites in this chapters -- "I have to admit it scared me just a little.  Her excited noise and the bouncing.  She looked a little manic.  Like a fangirl.  Funny she didn't act that way when she met me... Her excited bouncing beside me was a little unnerving, but adorable in its own creepy, fangirl sort of way.  I supposed that was all right. Even if she didn't squeal for me.  Even slightly alarming to behold she was adorable.   But the squeal. I had never thought of her as a squealer."  He seems to be a little jealous that he didn't fangirl him to some extent.  But then he couldn't read her mind - could he!!!  Oh if he only new.

And his comparative thoughts on The Beatles to his mates "It was a humbling experience really. To see such great musicians' simple beginnings. They were no different than Bobby or Marcus or Sam. Or me, really. They were charismatic young blokes that had come together to do something they all loved. To make music that touched their soul. And in looking at notes and journals displayed there for all to see, I understood so much more of the four musicians that grew to be legends.  They had heart.  They had worries that they would never reach the world with their work.  They struggled everyday with making melodies and lyrics.  Just as my mates did.  We weren't very different at all.  We cared about our art. We cared about making it right. "  Every thought so perfectly written to make the reader feel his innermost ramblings about them.  His thoughts into reality!!!!

And when I  read his thoughts of Jen -- "I was undone at her words.  How could I have found someone so perfect for me, by chance?  How did I have the luck, at my age, to find my everything? She felt the same for me as I did for her, cementing my desire to make her mine forever.  She truly was a healing entity for me."

And I am not even going into his mindful ramblings on her lovemaking.  You have heard my musings on them in prior reviews. 

OMG -- how do you continue to deliver again and again with each chapter?  You just soooo take fanfiction to the next level.  Like  novellas in each chapter. 

So sorry to do a length review to you again.  But I can't help it -- it's all your fault!!!

Thank you so much for continuing to write for us.  I hope all readers appreciate you as much as I do.

Elaine -- sparkledamnu on twitter

PS - and QuantumFizzx and The Plan don't hold a candle to you!!!!

 

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2010 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 35-And I Love Her

What a sweet chapter.  I loved their Beatles experience.  Rob really lives in his head, doesn't he? :-)

Have a very merry Christmas, sweets!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: jaybean (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2010 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 35-And I Love Her

It's Christmas, and I only have a minute to review.  I loved this chapter from Rob's POV.  It's so sweet to read how much he loves to make her happy, and that he wants her forever.

I can't wait until Christmas Day at the Pattinson home!

Merry Christmas to you, Steph, and thanks for the wonderful gift of OTT!

 

Jayme

Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 35-And I Love Her

Thanks so much for another great chapter... I love reading from Rob's POV... I am eagerly awaiting the next update for this story and of course Need to Escape also... both are truly some of my favorite stories out there... Keep up the great work... it is really appreciated!

Reviewer: mylittlebakersdozen (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 35-And I Love Her

hahaha!  what i wouldn't give to see rob under my tree.  i'd happily kick out hubby and the kids!

another gem, my sweetie!  thank you for the xmas treat!

happy ho-ho to you!

 

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 35-And I Love Her

Yes, I want to go to Liverpool, too! Rob is just so wonderful and so in love with Jen. It is so special to be reading this at this time of year!

Reviewer: lushloulou (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 35-And I Love Her

have a lovely and safe holiday season nand thanks again for bringing us rob view ,I`m such a sap for his view and you do it so well !! cheers lou xoxox

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 35-And I Love Her

Oh, I'd like to unwrap Rob too - uh, can I rephrase that? ;-)

He really created the perfect surprise for Jen. But his inner musings made it clear that he is not ready to go public yet. Lucky for him that no one spotted them...

Happy Holidays!

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