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Reviewer: mamadog93 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2012 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 47-Please Forgive Me

Oooh...poor baby! He's such a sap....a moody, ridiculously aggrivating sap sometimes which makes us love him all the more.  *sighs* I will cling to this story as NTE comes to an end.....you do realize that my world will shatter when that happens, right?  You'll have to fly to Georgia to hold me! *whimpers*

Reviewer: orangeappeal (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2012 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 47-Please Forgive Me

YAY, thanks for the new chapter and satisfying my yen for Jen! I don't fully understand why I find these two so vibrant, compelling & addictive OR how you manage to come back after being away and slide right into the heart and voice of your very appealing characters. Amazing! thank you, thank you....

Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2012 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 47-Please Forgive Me

Worth EVERY minute of waiting!

 

Catherine

Reviewer: cmg1218 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2012 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 47-Please Forgive Me

I feel bad for him...he asks alot of jen and knows the cost!

Cant wait for more!

Reviewer: suzuki (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2012 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 47-Please Forgive Me

awwwwww he's already driving himself crazy and she's not even gone yet =P That's gonna be awesome =D I've been waiting forever to see Rob's side of things for that chapter =D great job and plz update soon ^^

Reviewer: AmayaBlack (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2012 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 47-Please Forgive Me

Tsk tsk Rob and his not so good surprises. I like Rob is managing himself during the sex discussion even though he's a bit terrify about full frontal. Is going to be interesting seeing him make this movie from his pov. Great chapter like always :-)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2012 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 47-Please Forgive Me

Woohoo!  An update, I've missed this story so much.

Poor Rob being chastised from all corners.  At least it was done with love and not malice and Rob has come to realise a few things.  We all make mistakes, nobody's perfect.  Now with things more on track with him and Jen and she's going to be leaving for the states, Rob's not looking forward to the separation and who can blame him he loves Jen so much.

I'm looking forward to hearing this in Rob's POV even though it's going to be a really tough time for him.

Jane x

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2012 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 47-Please Forgive Me

well you already know the chapter Dougie and I have been waiting for .....but this was nice

Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2012 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 47-Please Forgive Me

I shouldn't be so excited about her leaving but I can't wait to read his broken hearted POV of what is about to go down...him missing her so badly, him finding out about the miscarriage, learning she was pregnant in the first place, his mothers' comfort, Jen nearly dying on him, him withholding sex to keep from hurting her again, sorting through his feelings about not being able to father a child with her...  Maybe I like the drama a little too much.  Was this their last time together sexually before she leaves?  Because I would like to respectfully ask for some more details during their private times.  ;)  You write the best love scenes and there won't be any for a long time as soon as she leaves.  Maybe that will make their reunion more explosive?      



Author's Response:

oh you have no idea how much i want ( and am terrified) to get to the next dozen chapters. heheehhee

we love the drama and that angst it seems! 

i totally agree with you on needing some loving time (and thank you so much for the sweet words about love scenes, mwah!) there are one or two more chances for that, and should be good coming from his side, his need to have her, the desperation of needing her before she leaves... ah the angst! :D i do so love to torture... 

 

thanks hun! 

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: timidvampire (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 47-Please Forgive Me

just love Rob and also Mack's pov. x

Reviewer: handa (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 47-Please Forgive Me

Good to see you back- I've been pining.....

Reviewer: reading chick (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2012 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 5 Safe with You

Shit!

 

Reviewer: reading chick (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2012 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 4 Sail Away

My word this is fun.

 

Reviewer: reading chick (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2012 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 3-Help!

I am loving this story.  I need to go back and read the companion as I go.

Reviewer: suzuki (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2012 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 46- The Rain

ohhh man will you update this soon? T_T I really liked the Green eyed monster chapter in Need to escape and I really really want to see it from his point of view lol... pleaseeeeeeee update?

Reviewer: Marliarna (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 22-Breaking the Girl

This made me cry.

Reviewer: ducksandruns (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 46- The Rain

Hope you update soon.  I love hearing his side!



Author's Response:

Thanks hun! I am really really hoping to update soon. RL and things have dramatically tightened up my time. But I really want to move forward with this story, for sure! 

Thanks for hanging in there! 

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: ducksandruns (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 46- The Rain

Hope you update soon.  I love hearing his side!

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2012 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 46- The Rain

This is one of the chapters I was anxiously waiting for (okay, all of them!). I love how you take the time to think about how Rob would say things and even spell words the British way when appropriate. As always, you nailed it. I especially wanted to see Rob's POV of coming home to find the house empty when Jen was out for her run in the rain and of their lunch and how it came about. Awesome chapter!

I often read on my phone and can't review, but I asways at least rate!

By the way, I am hanako425 on twitter.

Reviewer: carpe (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2012 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 46- The Rain

Your Rob is delightful to read about over and over again!

Reviewer: missharley (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2012 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 2-Brown Eyed Girl

You are such an amazing writer. Jen is quickly becoming my favorite fictional character. Need to escape and On the Threhold are easily my favorite fan-fictions. absolutely brilliant. Much love,

Liz.

Pleas keep them coming, they're quite addictive!

Reviewer: fleur50 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 46- The Rain

Je suis si contente de cette mise à jour, il fait mon bonheur.   

 

J'ai très hâte aussi de lire la suite de NTE...  En fait, je l'attends aussi impatiemment que j'attendais les nouveaux chapitres de MOTU.

Reviewer: NKubie (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 46- The Rain

Yup. Silly, silly boy.

It broke my heart a little to read how panicked he was when he got home and Jen was gone, though it was pretty clear in NtE. But still, this was obviously more emotive for him.

I'm looking forward to when Jen helps him get in character. ;)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2012 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 46- The Rain

Poor Rob, he constantly worries and feels that everything is his fault and that he's putting his foot in it every time and true he does make some mistakes, some sillier that others, but it's not all his fault.  After everything they've been through it should be a time for them settle and get to know each other even better.

Lunch with the other Kristen and the rest of the girls, a little daunting....yes but Jen can hold her own especially with Rob by her side.

Jane x

Reviewer: jennaeve (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2012 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 46- The Rain

Oh FicRob can't get anything quite right can he.  It's like he is always wearing a left shoe on the right foot...technically it is the proper object on the right piece of body...just something isn't quite right.

 

I wanted to know what you thought of the hoopla around Fifty Shades with the movie rights and the NY Times Bestseller designation. Would you ever sell one of your stories, have the main characters changes slighty for a publishing deal or are a "this is how I wrote this story (as a fanfiction) and that is how I want it to stay?  You can feel free to expand but I adore your stories...I really think that Amishward could be a movie character....and I was just wondering if You had any thoughts. 

As for MOTU, I read it when it was online and snowqueen's icedragon was updating. I remember when the last chapter of the first section came up and I knew it couldn't be over...if it becomes a movie it will need to be epic in its sweep.  The books are long, complex stories and take place al over the world.  It will be a spacial and sensory overload kinda movie...plus between you and I, I cannot wait to see the Red Room of pain in full cinematic vision!

Thanks for the chapter and your future comments.

Jenn from Victoria BC

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