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Reviewer: graciegrl (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2012 01:37 PM · On: Prologue
aww, it's alright, thank you lovely! xx
Reviewer: kayariley (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 10:52 AM · On: The Beginning and the End
I just found your story and read it from start to finish without stopping! I would like to read the epilogue if you still have it available.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your lovely review! The epilogue is actually posted on FF.net, togheter with the first part of an outtake, and I'm going to send you the link to it. Posting on Twilighted is really complicated, so I won't post the epi and outtakes here at all, they will only be on FF.net. Thank you so much for enjoying my story. Here's is the link to the epi:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5774933/30/The_Secret_Changes_within_Bella_Swan
xox Sara
Reviewer: graciegrl (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2011 11:19 PM · On: The Beginning and the End
gosh, this is such a beautiful story, i can't believe i just found it. i realised, after reading this story, that i have never cried so much while reading, good job! :) i would really love to read the epilogue, if it isn't too much trouble. thanks for the lovely story!
Author's Response: Dear graciegrl, I'm so sorry for not responding earlier! I've not been on Twilighted for such a long time... The epilogue is actually posted on FF.net, togheter with the first part of an outtake, and I'm going to send you the link to it. It's such a hassle posting on Twilighted, so I won't post the epi and outtakes here at all, they will be solely on FF.net. I'm so grateful for your review and your nice words, thank you so much for enjoying my story. Now, here is the link to the epi:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5774933/30/The_Secret_Changes_within_Bella_Swan
xox Sara
Reviewer: nbowling (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 07:46 AM · On: The Beginning and the End
I truly enjoyed the story and your style of writing. You are so right -- marriage is not about a happy ending, it's about trying to get through each day. I would love to receive the epilogue if possible. Keep writing.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and enjoying my story, and for seeing that happy endings are something you have to work on every day. I sent you the epilogue, but I'm not sure it got through! Let me know if it hasn't showed up, and I'll send it again. I have other stories on my FFnet profile, if you'd like to read more.
/Sara xox
Reviewer: oulous (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 11:43 AM · On: Photographs and Phobias
Please make it a HEA. I'm still a sucker for E & B's love.
Author's Response: Well... I am a Bella/Edward girl, aaaaall the way. JSYK ;) Please keep reading!
/Sara xox
Reviewer: oulous (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 11:29 AM · On: Love and Laundry
Love that the premise of this story is so different from all the others. Anticipating each chapter. thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing, and for seeing that it's different than a lot of other stories. I hope you stay with me until the end.
/Sara xox
Reviewer: likeaghost (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 03:55 PM · On: The Beginning and the End
I really really really liked this. I find that I don't need your Epilogue because it's true, you have to work your way to Happily Ever After every day, and I really appreciated this.
Favoriting :D Thank you so much :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm so grateful that the ending makes sense to you, and that you see that it is indeed happy - happy like it is in reality!
/Sara xox
Reviewer: austoz (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 10:44 AM · On: The Beginning and the End
Great story, thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing this story, I'm so grateful that you followed it 'til the end.
/Sara xox
Reviewer: Aiti (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 06:12 AM · On: The Beginning and the End
I really enjoyed reading this story and I loved the ending, your Bella is incredibly brave. Thank you.
If possible, I'd like to read the epilogue.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my story, and for believing in Bella. I'm so grateful that you see her as being brave! I will send you the epi in a PM. Let me know if it doesn't show up.
/Sara xox
Reviewer: simplydazzled (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 06:41 AM · On: The Beginning and the End
Thank you for writing this wonderful story. I have enjoyed it immensely.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this story, I have appreciated it so much. I have an unofficial epilogue that I probably won't even post, but if you'd like I'll gladly send it to you in a PM.
/Sara xox
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 06:30 AM · On: The Beginning and the End
im excited to see the changes that happen in the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! Like I said in the author's note, this was the last chapter. There may be outtakes or futuretakes, but I'll post them on FFnet only since the validation process here takes time and my VB has retired. I have an unofficial epilogue, rough and unbeta'd, that I probably won't even post. Let me know if you'd like to read it, and I'll send it to you in a PM!
/Sara xox
Reviewer: simplydazzled (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 08:03 AM · On: Gaining Grounds and Losing Orgasms
What a slice of reality! So brave of Bella to be honest with Edward about her previous faking--maybe not the best timing, but perhaps it was now or never. She's right--life is not what is depicted in fiction or porno films. I'm amazed at all the "first time and every time" and "on command" orgasms in fanfiction. I hope no one really believes that!
Bella's depressive symptoms are not unusual. It is pretty easy to hide over the long term--at least it was in my experience. After awhile, it just seems like normal life.
Good work! and yea, another chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for that wonderful review! I think you're right, there isn't such a thing as good timing when it comes to the faking confessions... The first time orgasms and on command stuff bothers me too, LOL. Not that it's not hot to read, but really... IRL that doesn't happen very often! And you are so spot on about it being "normal life". When you get used to it you never really question why you feel the way yo do!
/Sara xox
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 12:28 PM · On: Gaining Grounds and Losing Orgasms
well shes opening up more! cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter is the last one. I know - already? I think it makes sense though. Last chapter is on FFn now, and will be validated here in a few days. I hope you'll enjoy!
/Sara xox
Reviewer: jinlor2 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 08:58 AM · On: Gaining Grounds and Losing Orgasms
Poor Edward, feeling inadequate but I hope he will understand that it’s Bella’s issued and not him per se.
Author's Response: Yes, poor Edward... And poor Bella for feeling like she had to fake! Not having orgasms everytime doesn't mean you're "issued". A lot of women live in that reality, but I don't think men realize that all the times.
/Sara xox
Reviewer: flyrbrd (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 06:29 AM · On: Gaining Grounds and Losing Orgasms
I love that Bella is honest with Edward. She may not orgasm from every position, but he knows that and now they can work on things that do work. Or at least finish the way that works for Bella sometimes and ways that work for Edward the other times and sometimes it will work for both. It's all fun trying ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! This chapter was somewhat a divider among the readers - some thought it was good that she was honest, and some that she was being mean and harsh. I do think you have to be honest about those things if your relationship is going to grow. You don't love a man just because the orgasms, and now Edward knows that!
/Sara xox
Reviewer: LittleMissScatterbrain (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 05:24 AM · On: Gaining Grounds and Losing Orgasms
Jeg elsker, at du ikke skynder dig igennem historien, at de ikke bare lige pludselig er lykkelige, det er fedt at følge hendes kamp, deres kamp for at få det til at fungere.
Og, det er nogle tunge emner, men du får det hele til at glide og være spændende.
Det siger noget om forfatteren, når man som læser glemmer, at der i det hele taget er en forfatter, at det ikke bare er en virkelighed, som man har del i.
Jeg følger en del historier herinde, men din bliver altid læst først, når der er mange updates på en gang.
Tak fordi du bliver ved!
Author's Response: Tack så hemskt mycket för dina fina ord! Den här historien är snart slut, eller så slut den nu kan bli... Verkligheten tar ju liksom aldrig slut, men en historia måste någon gång göra det. Sista kapitlet lades upp på FFn idag, och ligger i kön för validering här. Jag hoppas det inte tar mer än ett par dagar! Jag kommer inte lägga upp mina andra historier på Twilighted, de ligger på FFn (länk på profilen) om du vill läsa mer av det jag skrivit! Tack för att du läser.
/Sara xox
Reviewer: peoplelikeus (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2011 05:22 AM · On: Gaining Grounds and Losing Orgasms
I loved this chapter and how real they are with each other. I'm glad that it's not over yet, i will miss them when it's over
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll miss them too >.< I posted the last chapter on FFn today, and it's waiting in the queue on Twilighted. It feels strange...
/Sara xox
Reviewer: bellamie (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 05:15 AM · On: Knights and Shining Armours
Looks like Bella is having some "DEPRESSION" issues without realizing it. Oh dear, she will need some chemicals to balance her out.
Author's Response: It's so nice that you managed to pinpoint her issue so early in the story! And you are completely correct, she doesn't realize it yet, at all.
/Sara xox
Reviewer: bellamie (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 04:57 AM · On: Gardening and Growing Hope
Your story is so original,so different from other fanfic. i'm loving it. I'm so excited to read the rest.
Author's Response: Thank you! That makes me so happy to hear. It's hard to be different when there is so much out there...
/Sara xox
Reviewer: flyrbrd (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 02:53 AM · On: Diagnoses and Disorders
Thanks for the great update. I love where E & B are headed. I can't wait for more ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! There's not much left to wait for. Also, I kind of love you a little for reviewing on both FFn and Twi'd...
/Sara xox
Reviewer: simplydazzled (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 10:50 PM · On: Diagnoses and Disorders
Food for thought--nicely done
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much. That is wonderful to hear!
/Sara xox
Reviewer: peoplelikeus (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 08:25 PM · On: Diagnoses and Disorders
I am so proud of Bella!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you're proud of her - she's made progress, I think. Also, thanks so much for reviewing all those chapters, it made me so happy to have those review alerts popping up today!
/Sara xox
Reviewer: peoplelikeus (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 08:09 PM · On: Tulips and Love Letters
go brave
Edward
Author's Response: I know, he did good, right? I'm impressed by him as well... :D
/Sara xox
Reviewer: peoplelikeus (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 07:42 PM · On: Confession and Confirmation
Oh Edward!....sigh
Author's Response: LOL Yeah, he's a cutie... I'm not sure I could take that many nice things. I freak out when my husband gives me compliments. I want to hide!
/Sara xox
Reviewer: peoplelikeus (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 07:26 PM · On: Helpless and Liberated
I loved this chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! Writing it was... nice ;)
/Sara xox
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