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Reviews For Eighteen
Reviewer: elegantbonz (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 11:06 AM · On: Beside You

I took a chance and read your story,when the 'death'beside her
truck almost turned me away...but the rest of the chapters were very well written and caught me immediately...I love your Alice and descriptions of the other characters.
Edward is cool and mysterious...i liked that part....and chocolate finger writing and the 'be mine' was just delicious and giggle producing....I will await the coming chapters...but I dont want Bella to die.....i wont read ttat part...
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Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking a chance with Eighteen and for sharing your thoughts. I promised it won't be too bad, hopefully you'll stick around. Glad that you love Alice and the chocolate sauce :)

Hope to hear from you again x

Reviewer: Nova (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 03:58 PM · On: Beside You

It's getting so good! I love how you are building the relationships between the characters, you are doing so well as making them feel real, even with the changes in the canon story. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, loved hearing your thoughts. I'm glad you seem to be enjoying it and I look forward to hearing from you again! x

Reviewer: Nova (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 02:58 PM · On: Preface/Fairy Tales

So cute! I adore 'The Velveteen Rabbit' as it has been one of my favorite stories of all time. Wonderful opening to the story. Can't wait to read the rest. It looks so good.

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 04:35 AM · On: Snow White

If I am allowed to say so, your summary is not that enticing, so people do not read your story. I understand you don't want to give things away, but the result is not positive. One does not know what story is reading, nor if that will be a completely tragic plot or not. The first chapter hints to tragedy and not everybody wants to read tragedies in fanficion. I don't, so I am not sure I'll continue...



Author's Response:

I didn't realise twilighted didn't show categories. This is slight angst, though not through the whole story - up to you if you read stories like that. If I think of a better summary I'll change it, though I haven't had any problems with readers on fanfiction. Thanks for the suggestion.

Reviewer: brown eyes (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 11:43 PM · On: I Still Haven't Found What I'm Looking For

There is nothing here to deserve a rating of NC-17.  Please designate a G rating until there is something worth a NC-17 designation.  Otherwise, well written and interesting concept.

 

 



Author's Response: My understanding is that the rating is for the overall story, not each chapter. I have questioned this though, and will change if necessary. I am reluctant to rate the story G until something nc17 happens, as people may start to read who shouldn't/don't want nc17. While it is timid compared to some, there are later chapters that meet nc17 guidelines. Otherwise, thank you for your feedback.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 12:23 AM · On: When You're Gone

still interesting



Author's Response:

Thank you for your short but sweet reviews. Hope you continue to find it interesting.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 12:22 AM · On: Preface/Fairy Tales

interesting

good writting

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