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Reviewer: kayariley (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2011 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 13 - A Haunting Past

i just found this story and i read it straight through. i would really like to see what happens next! please update!

Reviewer: lacenleather (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2011 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 13 - A Haunting Past

Very Good! I'm excited to read the next instalment!

Reviewer: elle2010 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Returning Home


Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 13 - A Haunting Past

i love it dearest

Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 13 - A Haunting Past

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE update soon! 

Reviewer: Crity (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 13 - A Haunting Past

Amazing! You have a gift Girl! I can't wait for the next chapter. I have so many theorys running ramped in my head right now. I can't wait to see how close I am. Update soon!



Author's Response:

oooohhh you can't leave me hanging like that.  You are sooooo mean!!! what are your theories????  If you tell me your theories I will promise to get a chapter to Hannah this weekend to get posted!

Reviewer: Crity (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 10 - So We Meet

GGRRRR I love a me a angry Edward Yummy! LOL Keep up the good work!

 



Author's Response:

Angry Edward is hot.  That is sooooo true!

Reviewer: Crity (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Learning More

I'm SO excited for the next chapter! This wait is killing me, but I love it! Onward I go.



Author's Response:

oh my word, how can the wait be killing you when the chapter is posted!!! imaging waiting weeks for the update!!!  That would be way worse.

Reviewer: Crity (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Revelations?

Holy Crap! great chapter! I am so getting addicted to this Story! Onward I go!



Author's Response:

hhhhmmm I don't know that I want you to be addicted . . . who am I kidding!  I'm totally addcited to so many stories! 

Reviewer: Crity (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Breathing Her Scent

LOL the last review I left was for this chapter but I had to log back in to leave it I didn't check what dang chapter is was on when I did I was just in a hurry to leave you one LOL so yeah Really great chapter!



Author's Response:

Hey that means you gave me two reviews for this chapter!  Dang it must have been good.  LOL  ;)

Reviewer: Crity (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Returning Home

Wow Another great Chapter. You keep me so interested in whats going on with your writing style Bravo! Can't wait to read on.



Author's Response:

thank you for the awesome thoughts.

Reviewer: Crity (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 6 - If My Heart Could Race

Hey Great Chapter. sorry I haven't read in while been traveling all summer. I can't wait to get caught up! Loved this chapter.



Author's Response:

I hope you've had fun traveling!!!   Glad you're reading again (HUGS)

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 13 - A Haunting Past

Awww! Progress!! And she took the first step! Amazing!!!

Ohh I can't wait for more! I am SO glad she leaned on Edward (literally!) Yay!!



Author's Response:

I am soooooooo glad you are happy with her step.  It seems soooo small to so many but you are right that for her it is HUGE!  Now she will freak over it eventually but for now be happy and know it is a stpe in ther ight direction!

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 13 - A Haunting Past

so we find out a bit more about the plot! there are more players involved? and so i assume her mom and dad are dead, and thats why bella wanted emily to get flowers, to take to her grave. i wonder if bella was interested in one of those guys and they raped her and killed her parents?



Author's Response:

hhmmmm  good thoughts though I have to say most are wrong. There is a lot in Bella's past and I'm not going to give otu enough to get it all solved ebfore she finally breaks and tells her story, which is  aways away, sorry to say.  But the poor girl is so broken and has never really shared her story so it will take a lot for her to open up.

Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 13 - A Haunting Past

 Great chapter!   I love that they are getting closer!   : )  *doing a happy dance*                               ~   Jeannie



Author's Response:

They are slwoly getting closer.  But Bella will be freaking overit soon.  That's just the way she is.  It will take a while for it to all come together, but I promise it will!

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 10 - So We Meet

Aww I LOVED their meeting! So sweet! & the crazy Pixie too! LoL at least she let them have some alone time :-)

Kudo's to Rose! I don't care what the reason--I'm glad she stood up to trashy Jessica for Bella. Still hope they do something more to Jess...hmm. Pop her fake boobs in front of everyone?? Mike throw up on her? LoL

I can't wait til Edward can hold Bella at night & make her bad dreams stay away!!



Author's Response:

Pop her fake boobs in fornt of everyone!  Classice and Awesome!!!!   I like that!

I'm glad you liked their first meeting.  I had fun getting them to FINALLY get to talking to each other!

Reviewer: dhebabydoll (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 13 - A Haunting Past

just read this whole story.

it's amazing! i can't wait til'

the trial so we can know what

happened, i wasn't expecting

murder to be involved either! &

LOL, i'm still mad edward got mad

@ seth for offering bella a place to

stay, i guess i can understand jake

i can't bella/jake together but seth's

her friend & a good kid. edward's just

a broody emo guy LOL. but this moment

they're having right now is so sweet, but LOL

@ edward's erection. sad about bella not caring about her bday.



Author's Response:

Lol  I'm glad you are liking the story. Don't hate Edward to much for the Set thing.  He is jealous and possesive and doesn't get why and Seth does want Bella for more than a friend but also knows it will likly never happen.  As the story proresses he will get it and I promise to find an awesome girl for him!

Glad you're liking Edward and the story.  He is a bit clueless and broody AND emo but I love him like that!

Reviewer: Milliehud (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 13 - A Haunting Past

DAWEEE!!! XDDD more more more! 



Author's Response:

Thanks.  there is moer coming I promise!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 13 - A Haunting Past

Oh god, poor Bella. The pain she feel just radiates off the screen. I am beyond intrigued at what we have learned so far. I can't even imagine what she went thur, the horror show going on in my head has me shuddering in dread.

I can't help but be encouraged by the slight softenings of Bella towards Edward. That poor soul needs all the comfort she can get...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind review.  Bella is in pain.  That's true.  I promise she will be healed by the end of the story. 

She is softening towards Edward but has a long way to go!

Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 13 - A Haunting Past

For many chapters now I've had a theory as to what happened in Bella's past, and the clues in this chapter have kind of solidified them in my mind.  Without knowing any details, I'm going to guess that there was some kind of home invasion or something where her parents were killed, and she was also assaulted and possibly raped.  Or something along those lines.

The poor girl - even if I'm wrong in what I think happened, she's obviously going through a hell of a time.  I'm glad she has people (other than the Cullens, who obviously know what's going on) that care about her and check up on her.  I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and seeing what's in store for Edward and Bella now that they've forged some sort of silent bond (and now that Edward has realized he has more than just "concerned friend" feelings for her, lol).



Author's Response:

ooohhh I like your theory, but I'm not going to say if you're right or wrong. But you are right that she's been through a hell of a time.

Just remember that Bella is broken and may take steps forward and then go backward.  Plus you have Edward who is still kinda clueless.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 13 - A Haunting Past

well that's a big step for him......she just might let him in, she seems so comfortable with him. i'm dying to know what's going on with her......2 trials, 2 different guys, murder.......i;m so intrigued !

Author's Response:

It is a big step for him.  Will it be enough????  Slow going but every little stpe is a big one too.

What is all that witht he 2 trial and murder, huummmmm    I'd tell you but then you'd be bored and give up reading the story, so I'll have to let you wonder.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 13 - A Haunting Past

I'm so glad to see that Bella is letting Edward in a bit.

So I guess her parents were murdered a year ago, and Bella wasn't there when they were killed, so she feels guilty?  She thinks she could have prevented it?



Author's Response:

:) nope.   Though i give you points for a good guess!

Reviewer: misssina (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Mental Meanderings

Very enjoyable, please update soon :)



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I will try to update soon.

Reviewer: Arabella_ (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Mental Meanderings

I lost this story a long time ago, so I'm very happy to have found it again. Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you found it back :)  Hope you continue to like it!

Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 6 - If My Heart Could Race

Please let Edward and Beela have a conversation!



Author's Response:

They will be talking.  I may take things slow but they will get there, promise!

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