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Reviewer: Tookie83 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2020 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 3

It sucks it wasn't finished :/

Reviewer: JAZZPURR (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2013 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 3

This story makes me laugh and makes me cry, you see I fit in Bella´s world.   I wish they had such programs when I was that age and able to physically participate oh an my very own Edward would have been nice.  Oh well, please continue this B/E story, love it.

Reviewer: hey-you (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is really good so far. A definite favorite. Do keep writing please... Soon?

Reviewer: ting (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 3

So glad to hear that you plan to finish this! You've found the balance between humor and realism; looking forward to more. 



Author's Response:

Thank you, ting, that's definitely what I'm going for, and keeping my fingers crossed that I can maintain without making it so humorous that it borders on silly, or so real that it becomes depressing. 

I'm halfway through pre-writing the rest of it so that it can be posted on a regular basis and not completely mess up the overall readability of the story. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, and I hope you'll come back for more once I start posting regularly!

Reviewer: Kyrandiana (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 3

hey i just wanted to tell you i love this story andd i hope you keep up writting this i check back daily to see if youve updated please do so soon i love this story

Author's Response:

Hi Kyrandiana,

First, thanks so much for reading. Second, I just realized today there were a couple of reviews here that I hadn't seen and answered, so my deepest apologies for the untimeliness.

I decided to take some of the feedback I was getting about chapter lengths and updating speed to heart and try to craft the story in a way that will (hopefully) maximize reader enjoyment.

So, I'm trying to get the rest of it completely written before posting again. When I started it was going to be about 18 chapters (each chapter spanning a week on the show), but that was resulting in mega, 10k + words, which a number of people constructively told me in PMs was daunting. So, I've now redrawn my outline to split each week into two manageable chapters each-- which will bring this total story to around 35 chapters now. (I'm a little past the halfway point right now). As soon as I've finished, I'll start resending them to be beta'ed and posting them at least once a week, if not more frequently.

Thanks so much for your interest! I hope you'll rejoin me when I start posting them again!

Reviewer: kathrynk (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 3

I do hope you continue this story.  I've been watching out for it for a while now.  Thank you for sharing with us



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review... It's fully outlined and a few of the future chapters are already written. I've been around the fandom long enough to know how frustrating it can be to have someone start and never finish, so not finishing is absolutely not an option for me.

I'm just painfully slow, but I swear, I'm working on it! ;)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2010 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 3

So Alice, Jasper & Bella are all fat?? This could be a really fun twist!!! I like it!! :)



Author's Response:

They're all battling the bulge together. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: LipsForBiting7 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 3

This is so different from any other fic I have ever read, and I love it. You are an awesome writer and I can't wait for another update. I'm excited to see how the Edward/Bella romance unfolds.



Author's Response:

"Different" is such a hard thing to do in this fandom given its size, so I take that as a HUGE compliment! =)

I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Aalfons (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 3

I cant understand why you have so few rewives. This story Is well written and I just love it. I liked how Edward is trying to be a bit softer and Its gonna be intresting to see if its gonna be any arguing from the production team about it. And also ofc where its gonna leave E and B in the end. Even if you dont update that often I defenetly think its worth following cus when you do update you have (atleast so far) made huge chapters, so thats fine.. as long as you dont stop. :D

What I like most though is that I might recognize in the situation Bella is in. Not physicaly wise, but just emotionally and what Edward said to her to start beliving she is worth something but that you need to fight for it is so true.

All love to you.



Author's Response:

Aww big hugs to you! ((HUGS))

In all honesty, I don't get caught up in review counts. I was in the fandom as a reader and a beta a while before I got the nerve to start posting, and I knew before I began that even some of the juggernaut stories only have something like 10% of readers reviewing. Honestly, just knowing people read this feels like an honor to me. The reviews are like icing on the cake though, and I love every one of them!

I sincerely appreciate you taking the time though! So thank you for that, and I'm glad you're finding these characters easy to relate to. That's definitely one of my main goals-- keeping them real.

Reviewer: darkchyld1980 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 1

Excellent beginning. The first three paragraphs were extremely detailed rich and I almost felt like I was there running beside him. Your attention to detail is fantastic. I have not read your one-shot yet, but I will. Just wanted to say that your very first paragraph drew me in, and that is a sign of a good author. Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thank you. That means a lot to me. I struggled for a while with trying to find the right tone for the very first paragraph of the very first chapter. For some reason, the opening was the scariest part of all of this so far.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Cathy (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 3

Hey HEAR,

Finally a new chapter of WI:LTG !
I liked it that that you wrote Edward's POV about the meeting in her room. In this chapter I really gained insight on his character and he's a good guy that searches for love .
Haha I liked his thoughts about writing that self-help book, he should really do it.
I'm looking forward now to the start of the show.
I guess Oregon is Jacob , isn't it?

I hope you'll update soon
Yours,Cathy

Author's Response:

Good guess, but Oregon is actually Seth. No love triangles here... They'll have enough to figure out without adding too much of that in... :)

I thought it was important to give a glimpse of Edward's experience of their first week together, but this will probably be the only time I go in depth covering the same event from two different POVs. I'm going to try to avoid the redundancy that that tends to cause sometimes.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Cathy!

 

Reviewer: peacheschica (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 3

Yay yay yay!!! You updated :D I love the dynamic between Edward and Bella. I've never watched big fat loser or chance - whatever it is- but you do a really good job of laying everything out. Edward should definitely write a book. Keep up the good writing! I can't wait until your next update!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! I was worried about laying out the mechanics of the show since I know not everyone has seen the real thing, so I'm glad it wasn't too confusing.

Thanks for reading, and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Cathy (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 2

Hey HEAR,

I've finally found the time to read and review the next chapter of "Weighing In".

I liked it very much that you described a bit more of Bella's background and that you described how shitty her life really is, with her mom bothering her all time and how her weight constricts her social life and the quality of her life ,a fact which hasn't been so clear before.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter on the farm .
I would love to give you some suggestions but since I#ve never seen the show I don't have any idea but I'm sure you will come up with something.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
Yours,Cathy

Author's Response:

Thank you, Cathy. The next chapter is in the queue!

Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

So will the next chapter be from Bella's pov?? I think I like how this story is evolving!!



Author's Response:

It is indeed, and the third is in the queue.  Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Chalger33 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 1

Absolutely loved the one shot an d I can't wait to read this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Sorry, I'm late responding. My review alert must have gotten buried in a mountain of emails because I'm just realizing there were a few more here! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Cathy (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hey HEAR ,
I really like your story . I liked the one-shot very much and am very happy that you decided to expanse .After this part in Edward's POV I understand why he is so hard with Bella's training and why he remembers her tape.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and I hope there will be some Bella in it!
Yours, Cathy

Author's Response:

Hi Cathy,

Thank you for reading and reviewing and I'm glad you see where he was coming from. I debated a long time over whether to start this story where the one-shot ended, or to go further back. Ultimately, I felt like Edward's voice was needed to set the context for some of what had already happened.

Bella's POV is up next!

 

 

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very interesting start.  I am intrigued and looking forward to seeing how this story develops.  :)



Author's Response:

Since it's my first multi-chaptered story, I'm pretty excited myself to see how it develops! ;)

Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: Morrisburger (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very cool and original



Author's Response:

In a fandom as large as this one, I think "original" is one of the biggest compliments. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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